Ren'Py Abandoned Hot Dawn [v0.08] [Fixer]

[Boehser Onkel]

the writing is a mess ... grammatically speaking
and ever heard of "the"; this is "a" xxx etc?

the mc ... a spineless boy
after reading all scripts for proofreading - im scared of the future for the mc
cant say "no" huh ... especially to scarlett - this forced stuff with her(the bedroom scene with the cam app for example) ...
well , not my kink

 

[Sultrox]

need help plss.. i got stuck in lilith quest. what time and date fo i have to jerk

 

[fixerrr]

can you fix the sleeping scene its hard and confussed which one to press on

Proofread scripts v0.07 fixerrr
(the one and only time i did this!)
(grammar ;sentences)


extract into main folder ; overwrite if asked

What do you mean by " the one and only time I did this "

 

[fixerrr]

need help plss.. i got stuck in lilith quest. what time and date fo i have to jerk

Hello If you are playing from on old save only that event is not working.... for Lilith's jerk-off scene you should create a new game.

 

[Boehser Onkel]

What do you mean by " the one and only time I did this "

means i am not doing it again

no offence, but i really recommend you to hire a native english speaking for proofread
but i seen worse on this forum its not "that" bad
you can use the scripts as you please - maybe look over them again -
i missed some of them ->" ' " instead of " ’ " ; so words look like this " it ' s " and not like this " it s"

 

[Sultrox]

Hello If you are playing from on old save only that event is not working.... for Lilith's jerk-off scene you should create a new game.

Thanks a lot

 

[fixerrr]

means i am not doing it again

no offence, but i really recommend you to hire a native english speaking for proofread
but i seen worse on this forum its not "that" bad
you can use the scripts as you please - maybe look over them again -
i missed some of them ->" ' " instead of " ’ " ; so words look like this " it ' s " and not like this " it s"

LOL I understood what you mean but I didn't understand why are you mad about it lol.... I mean what is this " means i am not doing it again " I didn't ask you to do that anyway. I can't hire anyone yet, I don't have enough supporters for that

 

[Boehser Onkel]

LOL I understood what you mean but I didn't understand why are you mad about it lol.... I mean what is this " means i am not doing it again " I didn't ask you to do that anyway. I can't hire anyone yet, I don't have enough supporters for that

i did this for my own sanity while playing - and i wasn´t mad - i just stated it

i know you didnt asked - see it as a free help please
and for "not doing it again" - yeah its too much work , i am helping other dev´s atm , and proofreading takes a lot of time
maybe ask just here ? maybe 1 or 2 people have the time for it? - asking is free of charge hehe

gl with your game in the future

 

[mikel8519]

the mc ... a spineless boy
after reading all scripts for proofreading - im scared of the future for the mc
cant say "no" huh ... especially to scarlett - this forced stuff with her(the bedroom scene with the cam app for example) ...
well , not my kink

Lol this should become a tag - "MC a spineless boy" but i feels like it would be almost all male MC here

 

[kumagawagl]

I cant advanced jessicas quest, the hint says to help her on the living room on tuesday but nothing happens, any help?

 

[Mr. Hero]

any sex scene with mcs mom yet?

 

[M!do]

I cant advanced jessicas quest, the hint says to help her on the living room on tuesday but nothing happens, any help?

Advance main story

 

[JOEPA223]

can someone share saves for new version after he got back home

 

[submissive -Ben83]

Hi i am at the last quest for lilith can you make it so that i kneel before her at the end finish her quest? I dont want to blackmail and dominate her to finish the quest for next release, when im a sub i want all my points submissive.

She is fucking gorgeous and cant wait for next update being her slave

 

[fixerrr]

I cant advanced jessicas quest, the hint says to help her on the living room on tuesday but nothing happens, any help?

Sit next to her then the event will begin

 

[fixerrr]

Hi i am at the last quest for lilith can you make it so that i kneel before her at the end finish her quest? I dont want to blackmail and dominate her to finish the quest for next release, when im a sub i want all my points submissive.

She is fucking gorgeous and cant wait for next update being her slave

Hi ! You don't have to blackmail or domanite her. If you kneel before her , then you should wait for the next event

 

[submissive -Ben83]

Hi ! You don't have to blackmail or domanite her. If you kneel before her , then you should wait for the next event

Oh ok its just that i saved it and did the blackmail bit then checked the hints and it said nonore content but it never said that in the hints after i knelt before her lol, It was still saying talk to her about sharing the photo to scarlet. I just thought it would have the green tick after i knelt but it never so was just wondering i guesss lol

 

[fixerrr]

Oh ok its just that i saved it and did the blackmail bit then checked the hints and it said nonore content but it never said that in the hints after i knelt before her lol, It was still saying talk to her about sharing the photo to scarlet. I just thought it would have the green tick after i knelt but it never so was just wondering i guesss lol

It is because it was the last event don't worry about it

 

[submissive -Ben83]

It is because it was the last event don't worry about it

sweet are we going to get more content from her in the next update or so cos there is not much interaction with her what so ever and would be nice to buy her gifts and spoil her, worship, admire, kiss her feet, lick her feet/heels. i am only interested in her and maybe a double femdom with madison lol.

 

[JOEPA223]

how to get blanket for movie event ? and how to help her find what going on ?