i was and still am skeptical to a point but he so far has been extreemly receptive to criticisms and seems to want to avoid going that direction with this game
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An 'ero.
As for the game, something that could be made better is to move the naming of MC to the beginning (e.g. when the baby joins the family) because this is quite awkward having to read dialogue deliberately avoiding the use of names, and it makes more sense for the parents to name the kid.
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- Apr 26, 2020
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Bye bye!!!
He'll be able to travel between the worlds so the incest will come!
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This has a lot of potential. I understand perhaps first 2-3 chapters being so wordy. You are setting up the world, hooks, & settings. But you might wanna concentrate more on action(Don't mean sexy time per say). But I felt my mind wandering/losing focus a bit to much reading all this up to current update. I like to read, but this felt like a slog at times, even with me able to read quickly.
But don't take it as I dislike what your presenting, just expressing my opinion on the matter. One which you can ignore all you want. Since I have not, nor cannot offer a dime for your work. (I use to few years back, but after spinal/heart injury, I can barely can feed myself*which I do skip days eating*, let alone support folks).
So continue how you want, I feel our MC a bit of a fluff. I understand he grew up with folks helping him out and felt very little independence. But time he's spending here, I hope he grows a pair. I don't mean becoming a douche prick, but more leaning towards standing up for himself and maybe kicking someone in the dick to show he won't get pushed around.
Again just an opinion. Other then that, have a nice time creating your work, toodles.
But don't take it as I dislike what your presenting, just expressing my opinion on the matter. One which you can ignore all you want. Since I have not, nor cannot offer a dime for your work. (I use to few years back, but after spinal/heart injury, I can barely can feed myself*which I do skip days eating*, let alone support folks).
So continue how you want, I feel our MC a bit of a fluff. I understand he grew up with folks helping him out and felt very little independence. But time he's spending here, I hope he grows a pair. I don't mean becoming a douche prick, but more leaning towards standing up for himself and maybe kicking someone in the dick to show he won't get pushed around.
Again just an opinion. Other then that, have a nice time creating your work, toodles.
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Not quite. It has been hinted at in chapters 3 and 4 that MC would like his first time to be with someone special to him, and it does seem that we get very aware of who that will be in towards the end of chapter 4. Given the current progression, I'd assume MC's virginity might be "broken" early on in chapter 5.
That said, there's still some sexy times in the existing chapters as well, mainly in the form of handjobs and blowjobs.
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Just played this for the first time, love everything going on and tons of potential and hooked me from the start. Very curious what will happen whenever the MC ends up back in his old world. Would be cool to see the MC transported back to his world even for just 2 or 3 chapters before the ending if the ending involves the MC finally returning home. There is so much emotional buildup regarding the MC's blindness in his old world plus the setup with his family and friends, just curious how that would be handled.
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At the beginning of the story he is deliberately like that. He will change in the future.
He has no experience of anything, how could he be different?
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when she asks if you want to touch her tits, i said no but what happens after is forced just skipped but then shows her with cum all over her face, i just wanna know if thats gonna happen more just skipping scenes but they still happen or can we avoid doing anything sexual with people we not interested in
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I need to check that scene again. It doesn't seem forced to me.
Anyway, yes, some characters will be totally skippable. Like Daka.
Others will have some optional things, like Erdie. Maybe making the choice more distinct.
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However, from the next update, you can rename mc at the beginning of the game.
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My MC is called Asdf (typical human name, as everyone knows), and if I have to choose a last name it will be Ñlkj. Let's see if someone can say it out loud.
not exactly what he asked...he asked if your "avoiding" is mean for Skiping scenes as this one (still happening in backgroung of story) or u can avoid it as it will not happend and will happend something another instead...like branches of story