formasual

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In the classic AVN scenario, we often find tropes such as the disappearance of one or other of the parents and difficult circumstances, personal tragedies in the protagonist's life. In this game, the main character's initial blindness and abandonment by his mother fit these elements (or the disappearance of the biological father). In fact, I find that he frequently mentions his visual handicap, which seems more designed to elicit pity from the girls than to truly enrich his story. Let's just say that this line is exploited a little too much in the first third of the game.
The biological father, on the other hand, is rarely mentioned, and we don't know whether or not he's the subject of a particular mystery in the plot.
I get the idea, but I just don't agree with it. The father could align with this some and maybe enough, I admit, but there is too much unknown and also something mysteriously special about the father because it seems he gained the loving attention of a very respected elf woman from a different world. And the mother doesn't fit any "usual" fate I've seen either (and she has possibly already been in two scenes and likely we'll see more of her with more story to fill the holes).
The general idea that they are both out of the picture at the beginning of the game isn't enough for me to categorize it like that.
 

HiP1

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The main reason I remember dropping it was the MC got back to Earth and the story was just bad.
Why would he go back to school? It also spent too much time there, for me. It would have been nice to check
in with the family, talk his sister into going back with him, and then leaving. Seems like I remember the Earth part
just kept going for no particular reason. BUT then again...I am most certainly not the author and He/She def knows best!

Still a beautiful game

Cheers All
you are probably confusing the MC with yourself :)
MC and his sister are very close to their parents. leaving them behind doesn't seem likely. MC misses his family constantly. he also likes his friends a lot. too big a heart, i'd say.
while you don't care about leaving them behind because you haven't spent a lifetime with them raising and taking care of your sorry blind ass on a daily basis...

Personally I have never been against KN because it gives you a little relaxation and not to strain yourself when you have to choose someone or refuse content every time.

There are many games like kinetics and with choice and every developer has the right to create their own games.
don't refuse content. just let it happen :p

Not if they want to make money from it
actually, you can easily argue that if they want money from it, they should stick to their original vision. catering to all demands will just make a mess of a story. too many cooks in the kitchen. and always chasing trends and demands will just burn them out and they will end up abandoning the game.

I agree with you, the main character feels a bit too nice and lacks depth beyond that trait.
I felt sorry for the new elf buddy whose sweetheart he steals ! Haha.

I also share your theory about Bridget, especially since she managed to deal with the three bullies on her own.

I suspect there’s a dark or sad story behind the mystery of Sibilla's mother. And yes, he didn’t do much to search for Agaressa or keep his promise to keep his own condition a secret.

I find that the relationships with the love interests vary in quality and sometimes develop a bit too quickly.
But overall, it’s still a pretty nice game, even if I find it hard to believe that anyone—villain or not—would wipe out entire peoples just to get their hands on one person.

I've been wondering whether there will be any relationship with the MC's adoptive mother, I have the impression that apart from some teasing, and since the father is still present this may not be possible.
You made me laugh with that trope about the father in AVNs, on the posts above, it's so true though x)
yeah, MC has razor thing depth. he was blind and nice. now he is just nice.
Arwen's and Rasu's story was a good chance to add tons of depth to MC, but instead it felt like the resolution of a kid's show drama. "i like her but..." "don't worry, let's all be friends now!" "ok, yay" the end :D

Turgon's obsession and actions also feel like a kid's show villain. and honestly, wiping a whole race to get immortality when you have to spend eternity in a world without the person you're obsessed about seems like a dumb choice. just evil for the sake of evil, without the consistency of the character's goal. we are still lacking some backstory, so this could change later.

MC being this nice and loving towards his family, nothing can really happen with his mother until his father is dead, unless his dad turns out to be Turgon's subordinate or something like that.

Funnily enough,with how many VN's go the route of MC parents dead,killed or just abandoning the MC at young age,i love that he has a loving family for once.
yeah, tht's a nice change, but unfortunately, it doesn't add anything to his character. it even makes to too simplistic.

I share this sentiment about Bridget as well. At first I thought since MC is supposed to be searching for Agaressa then what would she look like? Surely she is very beautiful, so I thought what about the teachers or school nurse, but they don't look like they would fit this description. Then I seen the janitor and she has this look about her in the face and also very familiar with MC's life - she could be the one. Then she "took 3 garbage cans out" and I was suddenly very convinced.
his aunt also said he has the same eyes as his bio mom, and Bridget has dark green eyes, like MC :)
she has the closest face to what an elf could look like, and she looks a bit like the aunt too.
and she gives him life lessons on how he should be, and what's right, etc.

what exactly is it you find usual about his real parents fate?

we don't know anything about the father's fate, except he fucked an elf from a different world

his mother, said elf from another world, is allegedly still alive and MC is currently looking for her in his home world

none of that seems usual to me
the bio father isn't from another world, he was born in the fantasy world. humans existed in that world until the purge. changing world happened after Turgon went crazy and Agaressa fucked a human.

I get the idea, but I just don't agree with it. The father could align with this some and maybe enough, I admit, but there is too much unknown and also something mysteriously special about the father because it seems he gained the loving attention of a very respected elf woman from a different world. And the mother doesn't fit any "usual" fate I've seen either (and she has possibly already been in two scenes and likely we'll see more of her with more story to fill the holes).
The general idea that they are both out of the picture at the beginning of the game isn't enough for me to categorize it like that.
yeah, his father could be special. from what we gather he might have been some kind of hero, or was very courageous, super kind, and never behaved like a coward. at least, that's what I got from what Bridget tried to convey to MC on how to behave :D and if Turgon felt the need to wipe the whole human race, he might have been someone important. like a prince or a king, that every human would want to protect ?
 

BGRW2020

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you are probably confusing the MC with yourself :)
MC and his sister are very close to their parents. leaving them behind doesn't seem likely. MC misses his family constantly. he also likes his friends a lot. too big a heart, i'd say.
while you don't care about leaving them behind because you haven't spent a lifetime with them raising and taking care of your sorry blind ass on a daily basis...



don't refuse content. just let it happen :p



actually, you can easily argue that if they want money from it, they should stick to their original vision. catering to all demands will just make a mess of a story. too many cooks in the kitchen. and always chasing trends and demands will just burn them out and they will end up abandoning the game.



yeah, MC has razor thing depth. he was blind and nice. now he is just nice.
Arwen's and Rasu's story was a good chance to add tons of depth to MC, but instead it felt like the resolution of a kid's show drama. "i like her but..." "don't worry, let's all be friends now!" "ok, yay" the end :D

Turgon's obsession and actions also feel like a kid's show villain. and honestly, wiping a whole race to get immortality when you have to spend eternity in a world without the person you're obsessed about seems like a dumb choice. just evil for the sake of evil, without the consistency of the character's goal. we are still lacking some backstory, so this could change later.

MC being this nice and loving towards his family, nothing can really happen with his mother until his father is dead, unless his dad turns out to be Turgon's subordinate or something like that.



yeah, tht's a nice change, but unfortunately, it doesn't add anything to his character. it even makes to too simplistic.



his aunt also said he has the same eyes as his bio mom, and Bridget has dark green eyes, like MC :)
she has the closest face to what an elf could look like, and she looks a bit like the aunt too.
and she gives him life lessons on how he should be, and what's right, etc.



the bio father isn't from another world, he was born in the fantasy world. humans existed in that world until the purge. changing world happened after Turgon went crazy and Agaressa fucked a human.



yeah, his father could be special. from what we gather he might have been some kind of hero, or was very courageous, super kind, and never behaved like a coward. at least, that's what I got from what Bridget tried to convey to MC on how to behave :D and if Turgon felt the need to wipe the whole human race, he might have been someone important. like a prince or a king, that every human would want to protect ?
well I agree to disagree - they don't need to cater to all just make all fetishes optional will satisfy 90+ % of the readers
 

Kuggazer

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Hi there,


On discord, in the surveys channel, we created a poll to find out which are your favorite girls so far.

So far the winner is Layla(112). She is followed by Kora(107), Miriel(85), and Rixxa(82).



If you can and want to, you can jump in to place your vote.





You can express your opinion here as well, of course. We would also like to hear why you made this choice.

Thank you ;)
 
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Oseff12

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The relationships are forced... Makes you feel like choices don't matter.
Too bad the renders and the story till back to Earth are good!
I liked most of the characters.
Lesbian vibes even when you say you don't like it.
I Really don't like the sister, feels like a used slut.
 
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HornyyPussy

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The relationships are forced... Makes you feel like choices don't matter.
Too bad the renders and the story till back to Earth are good!
I liked most of the characters.
Lesbian vibes even when you say you don't like it.
I Really don't like the sister, feels like a used slut.
Ok
 

Kuggazer

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The relationships are forced... Makes you feel like choices don't matter.
Too bad the renders and the story till back to Earth are good!
I liked most of the characters.
Lesbian vibes even when you say you don't like it.
I Really don't like the sister, feels like a used slut.
Not bad as your first post ;)
 

Oseff12

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His second one is almost literally the same :ROFLMAO: Really knows how to get on everyone's ignore list very quick.
I just started making comments and the most recent games I played got both almost the same issues... You really got the easy ignore button.
 

Raziel_8

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His second one is almost literally the same :ROFLMAO: Really knows how to get on everyone's ignore list very quick.
By saying he's not a fan of having no choices to reject LI's in games which are not kinetic ?
That's a rather low bar for putting people on the list, rather tame for the avarage comments here...

The relationships are forced... Makes you feel like choices don't matter.
Too bad the renders and the story till back to Earth are good!
I liked most of the characters.
Lesbian vibes even when you say you don't like it.
I Really don't like the sister, feels like a used slut.
Well i don't agree with the used slut part.
But yeah, having no choices and forcing LI's i don't like is one of the fastest ways to ruin the fun for me too.
Also why i don't play kinetic novels.
But enough people here which like to play all games like pokemon ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
 
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