Have you tried the game or are you making predictions? A rather thankless idea in my opinion and very inaccurate. But we will survive if you pass by. Thank you for expressing your opinion.The idea is ok 'loser guy learns to be better' the only problem is that this guy is an unrealistic loser. Like it's just not believable for someone to be that bad thus making it less relatable which is the whole point of this kind of story. Maybe I'm just jaded because every other game on this site seems to have the same overly pathetic loser that's just impossible to root for and I'm unwilling to sit through hours of their nonsense before they start showing even a tiny glimmer of respectability.
I wish you the best of luck on your game and hope it goes well for you but I wont be along for the ride.