Ren'Py If I Could Change [v0.3.7] [Jordini345]

[jordini345]

Just started the VN.

Is there a reason why mc considers how life would be as a girl?

MC is shy but shyness alone is not a sufficient reason for a sex change.
MC got a blow job from his dad's secretary, so life is not that bad for him.
There were no scenes in the prologue that indicated that mc might think that life as a girl would be preferable ...
not even a M2F-transformation game/novel/movie mc watched which might have triggered curiosity.
For a straight male the blow job scene would be reason enough to not think about how life would be on the female side sucking his dick ...

Typical reasons in other games/novels :
- mc is gay and has a crush on his straight male roommate/friend, so turning femme allows to have a normal MF sexual relationship with his crush
- mc is straight has a crush on his lesbian female roommate/friend, so turning femme allows to have a lesbian FF sexual relationship with his crush
- mc struggles to make and friends and sees all those girls having fun with each other, so turning into a girl (or dressing like a girl) lowers the threshold to get accepted into a girl group or society
- mc is cursed by a witch or drugged with female hormons and is slowly transforming into a girl and has to adapt
- mc has a severe accident and the doctors can only patch him together as a female
...

You may have missed the part with the conversation between James and MC where James clearly states that MC has never been with a woman. He is more focused on his grades and such. During the blowjob, he himself says that he has never done anything remotely like that before. So his motivation is clear, that he simply doesn't appeal to women. Is this clearly stated? No, but I think it's definitely implied enough. Also, for example, with the first meeting with Kimberly where she goes straight to Brian. That's supposed to show that he's simply being overlooked. As for his transformation, I've already included a few hints that it has something to do with a tesseract, but more on that will probably come in chapter 4.

 

[f96zonetrooper]

You may have missed the part with the conversation between James and MC where James clearly states that MC has never been with a woman. He is more focused on his grades and such. During the blowjob, he himself says that he has never done anything remotely like that before. So his motivation is clear, that he simply doesn't appeal to women. Is this clearly stated? No, but I think it's definitely implied enough. Also, for example, with the first meeting with Kimberly where she goes straight to Brian. That's supposed to show that he's simply being overlooked. As for his transformation, I've already included a few hints that it has something to do with a tesseract, but more on that will probably come in chapter 4.

No offence ... this is your story.


"So his motivation is clear, that he simply doesn't appeal to women."

This is more like a "fact", not a motivation.

Is mc attracted by women at all?
Is he straight, gay, bi or is he asexual?

What is the mc's goal?
- To attract (straight) women?
Then changing into a girl doesn't help him since those women are not into girls.
- To change PoV and see the world from the girl's side to understand why mc is not attractive?
That would be reasonable, but only as a temporary change ...

Edit : After playing some more scenes, I have the impression mc's original motivation goes more towards socialising and being friends with the girls and is less about having sex at all.

If women are not attracted to the male mc, there are usually options to try to change this, eg work out, go out, join social activities like university clubs, learn acting, dancing, parties, earn a lot of money and spend it, ...
Such activities usually cost a lot of time and effort ...
MC could start with his servile secretary and go on practice dates with her ... I think that would help, too.


"As for his transformation, I've already included a few hints that it has something to do with a tesseract, but more on that will probably come in chapter 4."

So the title "if i could change" actually means : if mc could be more attractive for women? ... and it just happens by coincidence that a tesseract changes mc into a girl and changes reality so as mc has always been a girl?

Wouldn't it be easier to have mc start as a girl and the prologue is just a weird dream where the girl dreams she is a shy boy overlooked by other people? Then she wakes up as girl and the VN continues ...

 

[jordini345]

No offence ... this is your story.


"So his motivation is clear, that he simply doesn't appeal to women."

This is more like a "fact", not a motivation.

Is mc attracted by women at all?
Is he straight, gay, bi or is he asexual?

What is the mc's goal?
- To attract (straight) women?
Then changing into a girl doesn't help him since those women are not into girls.
- To change PoV and see the world from the girl's side to understand why mc is not attractive?
That would be reasonable, but only as a temporary change ...

Edit : After playing some more scenes, I have the impression mc's original motivation goes more towards socialising and being friends with the girls and is less about having sex at all.

If women are not attracted to the male mc, there are usually options to try to change this, eg work out, go out, join social activities like university clubs, learn acting, dancing, parties, earn a lot of money and spend it, ...
Such activities usually cost a lot of time and effort ...
MC could start with his servile secretary and go on practice dates with her ... I think that would help, too.


"As for his transformation, I've already included a few hints that it has something to do with a tesseract, but more on that will probably come in chapter 4."

So the title "if i could change" actually means : if mc could be more attractive for women? ... and it just happens by coincidence that a tesseract changes mc into a girl and changes reality so as mc has always been a girl?

Wouldn't it be easier to have mc start as a girl and the prologue is just a weird dream where the girl dreams she is a shy boy overlooked by other people? Then she wakes up as girl and the VN continues ...

To be honest, when I started the story about a year ago, I only had a rough idea for three chapters. I've never written a story this big before, and I've learned a lot in that time. I would probably write it differently now, but then I would have to change so much that it wouldn't be feasible for me. Of course, if you analyze it that closely, it doesn't make that much sense, and it's simply a hidden wish of MC's, or a plot device, as you would call it.

The way in which he is now in a woman's body will definitely play a bigger role in the story, and I think it's an approach that hasn't been used very often in stories like this.

 

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[f96zonetrooper]

Note :
Most important point is that you tell your story and that you have fun developing your game and story.


" I think it's an approach that hasn't been used very often in stories like this. "

There are actually a lot of games on this site where a male mc is transformed or placed in a female body. Look for the "transformation" tag. https://f95zone.to/tags/transformation/

There is also a website specialised on games with these themes :

You must be registered to see the links

So you are not alone when exploring the M2F transformation theme.


If mc just wants to socialize with girls, he could crossdress as girl ... no need for a full transformation.
Crossdressing is used as step 1 of most feminization/sissification games, eg in
https://f95zone.to/threads/perverted-education-v1-3301-april-ryan.1854/ mc crossdresses as schoolgirl and so can join and befriend the school's cheerleader team.

An older example for a sudden full transformation is
https://f95zone.to/threads/interns-of-ecstasy-island-v0-342-usagitriplesix.1449/
A newer example is
https://f95zone.to/threads/succubus-contract-v0-25-0-remastered-stick4luck.42032/

An example for a slow transformation is
https://f95zone.to/threads/you-throw-like-a-girl-v1-7-1-vim.123795/

 

[Sossse]

There are a lot of games on this site where a male mc is transformed or placed in a female body.

but most of them have some kind of humilation content in them... this one very cute and lighthearthed

 

[jordini345]

Note :
Most important point is that you tell your story and that you have fun developing your game and story.


" I think it's an approach that hasn't been used very often in stories like this. "

There are actually a lot of games on this site where a male mc is transformed or placed in a female body. Look for the "transformation" tag. https://f95zone.to/tags/transformation/

There is also a website specialised on games with these themes :

You must be registered to see the links

So you are not alone when exploring the M2F transformation theme.


If mc just wants to socialize with girls, he could crossdress as girl ... no need for a full transformation.
Crossdressing is used as step 1 of most feminization/sissification games, eg in
https://f95zone.to/threads/perverted-education-v1-3301-april-ryan.1854/ mc crossdresses as schoolgirl and so can join and befriend the school's cheerleader team.

An older example for a sudden full transformation is
https://f95zone.to/threads/interns-of-ecstasy-island-v0-342-usagitriplesix.1449/
A newer example is
https://f95zone.to/threads/succubus-contract-v0-25-0-remastered-stick4luck.42032/

An example for a slow transformation is
https://f95zone.to/threads/you-throw-like-a-girl-v1-7-1-vim.123795/

Sry for the misunderstanding. I ofcours know that a M2F transformation is nothing special. I mean how the transformation it self happened is something that is a bit more special. Atleast I have seen it maybe only two times in games and I played a lot of tf games.

 

[f96zonetrooper]

Sry for the misunderstanding. I ofcours know that a M2F transformation is nothing special. I mean how the transformation it self happened is something that is a bit more special. Atleast I have seen it maybe only two times in games and I played a lot of tf games.

The M2F transformation in your game is just like using magic and includes a reality change : besides the mc/player nobody remembers that mc was a boy before the transformation.

MC and his roommate seem to be best friends/bros ... which is not unusual for two males and usually is completely asexual. After the transformation this relationship would be at test due to sexual attraction between males and females, but due to reality change they continue their platonic relationship. (At least in the part I played.) The girls at school on the other side overlook the shy boy but re-evaluate their relationship with female mc and hang out with mc now that mc is an attractive girl.

 

[jordini345]

The M2F transformation in your game is just like using magic and includes a reality change : besides the mc/player nobody remembers that mc was a boy before the transformation.

MC and his roommate seem to be best friends/bros ... which is not unusual for two males and usually is completely asexual. After the transformation this relationship would be at test due to sexual attraction between males and females, but due to reality change they continue their platonic relationship. (At least in the part I played.) The girls at school on the other side overlook the shy boy but re-evaluate their relationship with female mc and hang out with mc now that mc is an attractive girl.

I would not say that science is the same as magic. Magic, mostly, doesn't make "sense". Science atleast has a explanation that could theoretically be possible. It has something to do with parallel universe, but I will not spoil the plot here ofcours.

MC Female was the same shy girl as MC Male. As he still rembers his other live he ofcours takes other decisions then his girl self would have made with out him. This gets shown in the first interaction with James and MCF as she took a bathrobe she normally don't wear and get called out for it by James.

 

[teken0]

As is the case in the new version, there's also the option to interact with men. I'm just going to keep it optional; I think that's a good way to handle it. The same would be true for a male MC if there were options for gay interactions.

And there Will be options to avoid lesbian interactions? Because i think that It beats the whole point of gender bender having action with girls as a girl, for that may as well stay as a guy and bang then

 

[teken0]

It definitely goes in this direction, ofcours only if you choose too do it. It would just be wired in the context of the story if the first thing MC made after his gender has changed too get naked infront of a man and have sex with him. That would just be unrealistic for the story that I am writing where the MC first explores his new body and slowly get used too it.

But at the same Time you have to take into account that since the MC was a Man he should not have the same reactions that a girl, by example getting embarrased from Being topless should not be that much of a thing since she Is used to Being topless as a guy, or Also the way she sits, she should sit with her legs More spread as a guy(or diferent siting positions were she shows her Panties It not on porpose, or having some buttoms of her shirt open), not in a lewd way of acting but More like More oblivious to her surroundings because of her new body and the effect It has on others, maybe some events later in Wich the secretary can teach her how to be More femenine?(How to sit so her Panties donest show, how to walk, buttoning her bluse,how to bend to pick up things, etc.) with subsecuents events after learning 'lady ways' leting the playera choose how to sit, either to accept the feminity or to keep traying to anchor to their original personaly and sit act like a guy

 

[teken0]

I definitely see that this a optional route I will add.
I made some suggestions at the scenes with James in this direction and the struggle it is for MC.
It should not be easy that MC now makes stuff with men, the internal struggle should definitely be part of the way too this route.
I don't want to promise to much as I don't know if I can write it that well as I imagine it.

Honestly i think that the most important internal struggle should be if wanting to adapt to the change or Resist It, even if he has More luck with women now, changing genders can still fuck people up with having a body that Is not or donest feels like theirs(like actual life and all the trans stuff)and i think that It Will give some deep to the story

 

[f96zonetrooper]

And there Will be options to avoid lesbian interactions? Because i think that It beats the whole point of gender bender having action with girls as a girl, for that may as well stay as a guy and bang then

How do you "bang" a lesbian as a shy guy?
One of the main advantages of M2F is that it opens the option to engage in girl-on-girl action with girls who are not attracted to guys.

Doing M2F to then date a guy feels "gay". If the guy is gay, you could date him as a male without the need to M2F.

The general problem is :
If the mc starts as a straight male, should his sexual preferences (attracted by females) change with M2F or should they stay?
Should female hormons override the players' preferences and turn a straight male attracted by girls into a straight female attracted by men? That would take away a lot of freedom for the players and would likely be a game for a different audience.

 

[jordini345]

And there Will be options to avoid lesbian interactions? Because i think that It beats the whole point of gender bender having action with girls as a girl, for that may as well stay as a guy and bang then

I definitely try to make as much as possible optional but some content, including some lesbian, are important for the story. I just think more people are okay with lesbian content then if it would be the other way.

 

[Birdnman993]

I'll never understand a man who disapproves of watching lesbian content. I would understand a woman who doesn't want to watch it, but a man? That's really weird.

And if you ask me, if one day I magically became a woman, I would fucking have lesbsex, it's like the most obvious action apart from having female masturbation.

As for having M/F experiences in fictional scenarios in the past, I would have said no, but being on these forums has degenerated me a lot, so I wouldn't say no to the fictional experience.

 

[f96zonetrooper]

And if you ask me, if one day I magically became a woman, I would fucking have lesbsex, it's like the most obvious action apart from having female masturbation.

FF sex is a good way to avoid pregnancy and STDs without having to pass on sex.
Toys come in all sizes, colors, forms, etc and can go for hours without getting tired.

 

[wojtowicz]

tbh im scared to play this game. dont wanna become a girl and fuck a dude.
so can anyone tell me can i avoid guys fucking me?

 

[Sossse]

tbh im scared to play this game. dont wanna become a girl and fuck a dude.

yo you better run, it might catch up to you and forcefully change you gendar. better get started on getting a new wardrope already

 

[wojtowicz]

yo you better run, it might catch up to you and forcefully change you gendar. better get started on getting a new wardrope already

is was more a qustion if you do that in game i dont care about it irl im bi anyway xD

 

[gneyla]

jordini345, I understand that this is your first game, but it would be nice to somehow separate the buttons from the rest of the background. I tried to play your creation three times and deleted it all three times because I was tired of looking for buttons.