Welp,I think my scene data is bugged. So when I went back to fix some minor grammatical errors, It either didnt save em when I updated or. upon reload, deleted all scenes X_x SO please forgive any grammatical errors but It wont destroy the point of the story according to one who caught em (there's always one grammar/spelling nazi lol)
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Enjoy part 1 and I'll see if the same issue with part 2 & 3 SD has the same issue my part one did. if not I can fix and post part 2 maybe tomorrow or the day after pending my life schedule. Enjoy...I hope lol
Hi!
I just saw you work, Good start!
If you don't mind I will say someting about this video.
1.- Title Screen. I like to know what I'm going to see, guessing what's the plot, like a serie or a movie.
2.-Music. Excellent taste! you have used a variety of types, when the H scene starts, it mutes and we can hear the love sounds. I going to borrow your idea someday when I get back home and continue doing VNGE's. Plus the FX, the gunshot. good!
3.-Anime resources like the tears falling from the Claire's face are clever! The breath in the actors also are good!
4.-You use the FOV in a particular way, this is not bad or good, but consider switching between camera shoots to break monotony. A good resource is animated cameras.
5.-There are a tool named Fakelips, that make the actor's lips to move when text related to them appears, also this is not bad or good, some visual novels, or comic-works-like uses no lip movement, it is a matter of tastes
6.-Plot. Good to see H scenes with plot, and sometimes I just like to watch a good H scene with no plot at all. Keep that in mind when making scenes. Choose your Target Audiences where you are good. Some artist has a skill in doing H Scenes, creatives scenes indeed, and no dialgos or plot, other are good in nice and hooking stories, fantasy, future, distopic, etc. others are good in lolis, dark stuffs and so. keep in mind that maybe your work sucks for someones but will be loved for other.
18 minutes is fair for a good story. Most of people like to watch only 5 minutes of a good H scene, again, it is a matter of tastes.
I am not a scenes critic, nor an expert, or an authority in this. I am just a normal person with a normal life who like to spend part of my free time in an etretaining hobby named animations. I hope this text helps you somehow, my inention is that, to help.
