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Please do the second option 3 boys and 1 delivery girlI'm planning to make a freely available new short story scene using VNGE for the first time.
For this scene, I wanted to do a naughty "Pizza delivery person" scenario and I want to let the community decide which of the two following scenarios would you prefer I make:
1: Three girls, one delivery guy
2:Three boys, one delivery girl
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The poll will be up for 10 days until September 17th.
pose loader should be already in the repack what game version do you haveNo penis and vagina in HS2 Studio Neo 2. Everything is fine in the game. What should I do to make visible in the studio?
How do you PM? I am interested in the VNGE pleaseMy new little project ''College stories'' which I will share per episode.
S1.Ep1.
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You are inspiring me to possibly post my story I made , but I feel mines is very rookie mode compared to ya'lls works . Its a 3 part story done in true VN fashion that I have shown to a select few I know including Daggoth (to whom I wish I was on his level ). I'll think about posting at least part 1 and see if its worth showing all 3. I did get good reception with my test audience but eh.My new little project ''College stories'' which I will share per episode.
S1.Ep1.
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For VNGE please pm me and I send it to you.
Later edit: new link for the updated Episode 1.
Thanks
Enjoy!
I will once I go over the parts again and record them again. Saw some glaring Issues I wanted to fix.Brother, post it don't worry!
We all learning here and probably I will learn more from your story as well mate!
Hi!You are inspiring me to possibly post my story I made , but I feel mines is very rookie mode compared to ya'lls works . Its a 3 part story done in true VN fashion that I have shown to a select few I know including Daggoth (to whom I wish I was on his level ). I'll think about posting at least part 1 and see if its worth showing all 3. I did get good reception with my test audience but eh.
Hi!Welp,I think my scene data is bugged. So when I went back to fix some minor grammatical errors, It either didnt save em when I updated or. upon reload, deleted all scenes X_x SO please forgive any grammatical errors but It wont destroy the point of the story according to one who caught em (there's always one grammar/spelling nazi lol)
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Enjoy part 1 and I'll see if the same issue with part 2 & 3 SD has the same issue my part one did. if not I can fix and post part 2 maybe tomorrow or the day after pending my life schedule. Enjoy...I hope lol
Appreciate your take on it and thanks for taking the time to see it. However, some minor counter points.Hi!
I just saw you work, Good start!
If you don't mind I will say something about this video.
1.- Title Screen. I like to know what I'm going to see, guessing what's the plot, like a serie or a movie.
2.-Music. Excellent taste! you have used a variety of types, when the H scene starts, it mutes and we can hear the love sounds. I going to borrow your idea someday when I get back home and continue doing VNGE's. Plus the FX, the gunshot. good!
3.-Anime resources like the tears falling from the Claire's face are clever! The breath in the actors also are good!
4.-You use the FOV in a particular way, this is not bad or good, but consider switching between camera shoots to break monotony. A good resource is animated cameras.
5.-There are a tool named Fakelips, that make the actor's lips to move when text related to them appears, also this is not bad or good, some visual novels, or comic-works-like uses no lip movement, it is a matter of tastes
6.-Plot. Good to see H scenes with plot, and sometimes I just like to watch a good H scene with no plot at all. Keep that in mind when making scenes. Choose your Target Audiences where you are good. Some artist has a skill in doing H Scenes, creatives scenes indeed, and no dialgos or plot, other are good in nice and hooking stories, fantasy, future, distopic, etc. others are good in lolis, dark stuffs and so. keep in mind that maybe your work sucks for someones but will be loved for other.
18 minutes is fair for a good story. Most of people like to watch only 5 minutes of a good H scene, again, it is a matter of tastes.
I am not a scenes critic, nor an expert, or an authority in this. I am just a normal person with a normal life who like to spend part of my free time in an entertaining hobby named animations. I hope this text helps you somehow, my inention is that, to help.
nice work, how long does it take you to make these?Hi guys,
College stories S1.Ep 2.
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Go ahead. We are eager to see your scenes. I am sure they will be awesomeYou are inspiring me to possibly post my story I made , but I feel mines is very rookie mode compared to ya'lls works . Its a 3 part story done in true VN fashion that I have shown to a select few I know including Daggoth (to whom I wish I was on his level ). I'll think about posting at least part 1 and see if its worth showing all 3. I did get good reception with my test audience but eh.
I posted part 1 above. doing a QA test of part 2 before I post. Will be ready within an hour. no context spoiler for part 2 for those who saw the 1st part. Lore and character development. I know its lost these days but eh lolGo ahead. We are eager to see your scenes. I am sure they will be awesome
looking forward for your future work.Thank you mate!
Well, when I am not to busy with my job, in about one week working 2-3 hours per night, as everytime when I am keep watching these scenes I am finding mistakes and I am going back again and again re-doing.
Now I am pretty busy with familly and work and I am trying my best to get something done everyday to have one episode completed every week.
Probably I soon as I am finalising Season 1 I will do a remaster for every single episode.
Glad you Like it so far. This is actually further remastering of my original work. I had music in the key parts but my test audience said it needed more. So I tried to have as little silent moments if I can. The challenge was finding the right music I felt fit the mood. I didn't wanna just throw anything in there. lolGood stuff mate! I learned something new from your scene, adding music and effects which it kinda change de feeling of the scenes.
Episode 3 for College stories it's about 80% done but before posting I want to change Ep1 & 2 with music and effects to add that extra..
Keep going your good work man!
Regards,