VN Ren'Py Imperial Chronicles [v0.11] [Lazy Monkey]

[zzxxcc111]

I doubt we will have a scene with mother in 0.12, Elis brought Valeria to the same place as Queen because usually nobody visit that room at the top of the tower and that way nobody would hear screams of Valeria

Bro.....
I think *his* at this context mean Valeria's son.

 

[Echo2]

Filipis I just finished the first part, up to when they leave the village and start traveling to the capital. Despite that, I have a ton of feedback to give. Unfortunately, it's mostly negative, but know this: I can't wait to be done writing this post, so I can go back to play your remaster version, read all the changes you made to the romance paths, the expanded dialogues, and the added call backs to past choices in dialogues, so I can give you sincere praise for the effort you put in those things, in addition to the effort you put in improving the English translation

While I'm still at the beginning of the game, it is possible that the following issues are present throughout the entire remaster.

Spoiler: Issue number 1: Please don't disrespect people's reading speeds.

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Spoiler: Issue number 2: Please don't disrespect people's "Text Speed" setting.

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Spoiler: Issue number 3: Please don't hide the second part of a dialogue box behind a second key press.

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Spoiler: Issue number 4: Please don't over-emphasize.

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sometimes, a sentence is phrased "unusually" so it fits neatly into the dialogue box

Spoiler: Issue number 5: Please don't phrase sentences in an unusual way so they fit neatly into the dialogue box.

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And that's it for what I think are the biggest issues of you remake. I can finally move on to things that hopefully you'll appreciate more:

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Spoiler: Answer

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Spoiler: List of typos I found so far, or things I'd state differently.

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[Carnagie]

I don't care if Cass is evil, she's too much my fetish. She's losing to the cock anyway, it's fine.

 

[Malicre]

I don't care if Cass is evil, she's too much my fetish. She's losing to the cock anyway, it's fine.

 

[DontBeAfraidKid]

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Green path, Elin and Queen Lust and Isis as wife is the best combo ever.

 

[BrothersKeeper]

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This but Elin love path and Aroura because Cass is more than enough evil bitch for me lol

 

[falconhawk223]

This but Elin love path and Aroura because Cass is more than enough evil bitch for me lol

I wonder if Elin can eventually kill Aurora

 

[Malicre]

I wonder if Elin can eventually kill Aurora

It would be nice if both Aurora and Isis could be killed and replaced. especially since it seems consorts and concubines aren't a thing in this games lore.

 

[GibboBtw]

It would be nice if both Aurora and Isis could be killed and replaced. especially since it seems consorts and concubines aren't a thing in this games lore.

Idk about that one dude. Seems like that would just result in even more branching for the dev to have to keep track of, which would delay dev time, and also delay me from being able to commit genocide against elvenkind.

I think just letting Elis be able to take concubines/consorts without killing wives would be the ideal version.

 

[Malicre]

I think just letting Elis be able to take concubines/consorts without killing wives would be the idle version.

Oh i agree with you but while we know the king had other children with lovers outside his queen i don't believe it was ever stated that anyone in the game world had consorts and concubines which made me believe that it didn't exist in the lore.

 

[falconhawk223]

Oh i agree with you but while we know the king had other children with lovers outside his queen i don't believe it was ever stated that anyone in the game world had consorts and concubines which made me believe that it didn't exist in the lore.

They exist in the south where Isis is from, which is why she mention she's fine with Elis having other lovers so long as he doesn't have any bastards. The other humans don't seem to do it.

 

[Malicre]

They exist in the south where Isis is from, which is why she mention she's fine with Elis having other lovers so long as he doesn't have any bastards. The other humans don't seem to do it.

Lovers correct but concubines and consorts are official roles that hold political power. I have to replay that to see what exactly she said. If she ment concubines are fine and children are find as long as he isn't making bastards outside of the royal family or if she ment no children at all outside of hers.

 

[falconhawk223]

Lovers correct but concubines and consorts are official roles that hold political power. I have to replay that to see what exactly she said. If she ment concubines are fine and children are find as long as he isn't making bastards outside of the royal family or if she ment no children at all outside of hers.

I'm pretty sure she was saying she doesn't care who he fucks besides her so long as there are no bastards capable of usurping her children's claim.

 

[Dessolos]

I wonder if Elin can eventually kill Aurora

While I like Aurora and don't find her boring cause she is my type unlike others. I kind of want to this be nice to have a proper Yandere LI for once

 

[DrakoGhoul]

It would be nice if both Aurora and Isis could be killed and replaced. especially since it seems consorts and concubines aren't a thing in this games lore.

Seeing as Aurora is basically irrelevant beyond having Elis children. Something this update proved to be true. I wouldn't mind her being killable by Elin. It's not like she actively takes part in the story like Isis. And if that future is anything to go off of. That won't change even years down the road. Since her own daughter basically wants Elis to abandon her.

As for who would be my second wife after Aurora kicks the bucket. It would have to be someone like Josephine, Valeria and Arcadia. All three of them are married though. But assuming Elis got Henry killed, I would say Josephine makes the most sense. She has no kids after all and is around Elis age.

 

[Filipis]

Filipis I just finished the first part, up to when they leave the village and start traveling to the capital. Despite that, I have a ton of feedback to give. Unfortunately, it's mostly negative, but know this: I can't wait to be done writing this post, so I can go back to play your remaster version, read all the changes you made to the romance paths, the expanded dialogues, and the added call backs to past choices in dialogues, so I can give you sincere praise for the effort you put in those things, in addition to the effort you put in improving the English translation

While I'm still at the beginning of the game, it is possible that the following issues are present throughout the entire remaster.

Spoiler: Issue number 1: Please don't disrespect people's reading speeds.

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Spoiler: Issue number 2: Please don't disrespect people's "Text Speed" setting.

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Spoiler: Issue number 3: Please don't hide the second part of a dialogue box behind a second key press.

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Spoiler: Issue number 4: Please don't over-emphasize.

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And that's it for what I think are the biggest issues of you remake. I can finally move on to things that hopefully you'll appreciate more:

Spoiler: Answer

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Spoiler: List of typos I found so far, or things I'd state differently.

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Thanks for the feedback again!
I fixed all those typos and errors, and even added a new bit of dialogue with Aker (the last point) in that situation so it's less weird.

As for the accessibility options, I can't and won't bother spending the time making sure the dialogue box looks neat with those turned on; that is simply something I won't spend precious time checking and making sure it is as presentable as the "intended" version (and it doesn't even look bad with your example).

The forced jumps in dialogue are a good argument, but presentation is key here. I am not expecting everyone to enjoy all parts of my remake, but don't make your case based on "I have to move my hand to rewind", since I can't take that seriously.

 

[BrothersKeeper]

I wonder if Elin can eventually kill Aurora

If she can that needs to be optional, I want the generational harem run lol

 

[BrothersKeeper]

Idk about that one dude. Seems like that would just result in even more branching for the dev to have to keep track of, which would delay dev time, and also delay me from being able to commit genocide against elvenkind.

I think just letting Elis be able to take concubines/consorts without killing wives would be the idle version.

Fr "fellas" movin like blue beard out here with all this wife killing talk. Just get more concubines smh

 

[falconhawk223]

Fr "fellas" movin like blue beard out here with all this wife killing talk. Just get more concubines smh

I just want to see Elin go yandere and Aurora seems like the easiest target to dispose of. Also Elin already suggested killing her

 

[BrothersKeeper]

I just want to see Elin go yandere and Aurora seems like the easiest target to dispose of. Also Elin already suggested killing her

You do you, I'm telling Elin to sit her ass down, before she stresses out the magic super baby lol