- Jan 4, 2018
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Good visual novel.Hello.
I have been reading through your comments. I can't do it often but today I had some time.
I am very happy that you give our V.N. a chance and that you take the time to write your critiques, good and bad.
Firstly Please allow me to defend Roy. i understand that many might not like his presence, however I need him and his soon to be seen girlfriend Ellen for future story reasons, plus I thought he was hilarious, just my sense of humour, I am afraid. You will be seeing a little more of him in, not the next, but the update after. I really hope you warm to him.
On another front I know I added maybe a few more characters than I should have, leaving a gap of characters not appearing in many updates.
Two of my characters aren't appearing due to their files becoming corrupted and I am having difficulty rebuilding them. Hopefully i will get that sorted soon.
To fix this I plan to have more scenes with multiple characters in from now on. So long as my PC can render them all in. Also I have been mulling over an idea to have future scenes appear without the MC in them, seeing form another characters point of view. I am hesitant on this front however due to not want to make the MC a secondary character in his own tale. I would welcome thoughts on this.
The name bugs and missing pics and is my dev partners responsibility, I will have words and give my apologies for him on that front.
However I must admit that naming Alison Nicole on day 9 is completely my fault. i have all their bios set out with names and character traits and such and I screwed up the name for which characters appeared in that scene somehow. This has been fixed...I am so sorry for this massive cock up on my end.
Please keep the critiques coming
I understandd that Roy is not going to transform the game into NTR (fortunately...), he's funny but he should have been more discreet during the scene with Jane, a ruined scene in my opinion.