VN Ren'Py Inanna Revenge [Ep. 1] [AtemX Games]

[YogSothoth1982]

considering that the very first and primal love interest is your slave by defoult, i´d say no, it´s not

If the MC has a romantic relationship with her, that's fine. What I don't like is using slaves as sex toys. For me that is similar to rape.

 

[Edhinor]

If the MC has a romantic relationship with her, that's fine. What I don't like is using slaves as sex toys. For me that is similar to rape.

You can treat her with a lot of care and respect, in the selfless route, or more like a slave, in the pragmatic route. Every choice is pretty clear on which path is leading adding points to.

 

[Lord Bradley]

Slavery is very well handled in this game so if you like romance you will like this game even with slavery in it. Basically you are forced to make slave contract with a girl to save her, so premise is always good. If you choose to later abuse this fact then that's on you. During sex scenes with "slaves" if MC is good he will always ask if they enjoy this or that and if they want to do this or that. It never feels forced if you make good choices.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

I didn't know the MC was a woman lol.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

I wish this game had more voices besides just giggling.

 

[Silwith]

If the MC has a romantic relationship with her, that's fine. What I don't like is using slaves as sex toys. For me that is similar to rape.

I would say it isn't just similiar, it's just rape if the slave can't decide freely.
In this case, you, as the MC, can tell her that you are against slavery and don't want a slave, but you will take her as one in name anyway, because if she isn't taken someone else will do it (and treat her like a actual slave). So she is officially your slave, but you can make sure she knows you don't see her as one and she can decide freely what she does, in that case it leads into a romantic kind of relationship.

 

[antonio1508]

there is fairie or form of tiny girl ingame ?

 

[Xythurr]

Great first chapter but don't think I didn't notice that Skyrim Whiterun background.
I was waiting for Nazeem to show up and get clapped by Carmen!

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Is it posible to avoid sex and romantic relationship with Carmen?

 

[Orthenos]

Is it posible to avoid sex and romantic relationship with Carmen?

Yes, you can reject her when she goes for it. The only unavoidable stuff is with Sylvia and another girl who joins you near the end of the episode.

 

[PrimaPower]

This. This is how you drop an Ep 1. A lot of AVN devs should takes notes on this kinda introduction to a new AVN. In just the first episode of this AVN, many of the major characters are introduced, the plot points are delivered, the lore and background of the world is introduced in a concise, easy to understand, and fun way, the basic outline of what kind of choices are available are introduced, how romance or domination will play out is introduced, the abilities of the MC are introduced, and you get to see a clear direction to where the game will go. All of this is laid out in front of the player and none of it feels overexplained or like a massive lore dump. You are given full control of what kind of person your character will be from the jump. Do you want to be a romantic that will do anything and stand up to anyone to protect the LIs, even if it could backfire on you one day? You can do that. Would you prefer to take advantage of the situation and live out your debauchery fantasy? Easy to do that too. I loved this first chapter and I CANNOT wait for more to come.

Goodluck AtemX, you have definitely earned my support.

 

[jeezluwee]

Jokes aside, goood game. Seems polished, look forward to future updates!

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Yes, you can reject her when she goes for it. The only unavoidable stuff is with Sylvia and another girl who joins you near the end of the episode.

Up to this point I could say that I was interested in Carmen. This sentence convinced me that I didn't want to have a romance with her:



I've also seen that I can avoid giving her hearts, so when the time comes to reject her I might not even notice because it won't happen.

 

[D4rkK1ng]

Exceptionaly good start.
I believe its very well made VN and if it continue with the same quality it can become one of the best fantasy honey select VN
The Vn have fights/Magic/Elves/Catgirls/sword and magic ellements/harem/romance .... it have it all
I liked the story and the world building is amazing so far, the visuals are great and the soundtrack is also quite good.
MC is very good and basically you can play the good guy or the bad guy with your choices
The lis are all beautiful and interesting so far and personally i loved Sylvia (she is the only forced LI but also the Main LI, she is a elf/slave(trained sex slave but shie is virgin before MC)/druid/ and moreover she is a a kind and beautiful girl)
Except Sylvia i also liked Cindy and Selene so in future im gonna add them to Harem.
Albeit you are forced for the story to take Kayane for second Slave but you dont have any forced sex scenes with her ,she is quite nice but sylvia are much better in my opinion
(and personaly i would prefer any future sex scenes with her to be optional)

Now about NTS .....
Its completely optional and its not that the MC is a pervert and have thoughts about Netorase....
it exists because the world of Nazdranya is a cruel world full of slaves..
and some masters order their slaves to sleep with other people for material benefits...
So in the game you can leave it optional or with your choices disable it Permanently
At first you have the choice to let a guard take advantages of Sylvia (nts choice)
or
tell him to stop (of course told him to stop)
Then the second choice is for a quest you have to take some information from a blacksmith you can
either pay him full money (of course i chose this)
or
Let him have fun with sylvia for 10min (Nts choice)
IF you dont allow him to have Sylvia
then sylvia explains to you that In this world many master allow slave to sleep with other people so they can benefit from it
then
you can tell her that this is stupid and you hate it and you can reassure her that you will NEVER order her /allow her to sleep with other men and she can forget about this stupid custom (this permanently disable NTS content and of course i chose this)
or
tell her perhaps in the future you will allow it who knows... it will leave NTS content optional in the story.

Even though i will never play any nts content and i personally hate it i understand how in the world of VN exists and perhaps how a completely unfeeling / materialistic / Pragmatic MC would allow NTS with his slaves.... (if you see Sylvia as only a slave and not as a LI)... so yea it exists but its optional and you can disable it without playing so its fine.

Nonetheless i loved the VN so far its very good and im gonna keep it bookmarked and wait for future updates.
It already became one of my favorite Holy sellect VN.
Highly reccomend it

 

[kevcolqaz]

Great game so far. I hope he makes the combat optional.

 

[Xythurr]

Up to this point I could say that I was interested in Carmen. This sentence convinced me that I didn't want to have a romance with her:

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I've also seen that I can avoid giving her hearts, so when the time comes to reject her I might not even notice because it won't happen.

Dev makes some decent stories and hot af sex scenes but he loves having super sluts as love interests in his games for some reason.

 

[Lord Bradley]

There could be "sex rooms" on both 'good' and 'bad' paths where you send extra girls along the way so they don't have to fend for themselves in the wild. This would offer a chance to re-visit them for MC without the logistics of having them as slaves. It could be variety of simple sex scenes for players to return to whenever "freeroam" is offered in the game (or maybe in the menu available at certain points, you can view it as teleport for lore).

Brothel run by Carmen (good option)
- Carmen has experience
- Work opportunity not enslavement
- Boost morale of the village
- Respectable establishment in the fantasy setting usually

Dungeon run by Regina (bad option)
- When MC takes over Regina is subdued and working for him
- Girls sent here will be slaves
- Boost morale of the guards
- Bargaining tool in future negotiations (either threat of ending up there or offering slaves from there as bribe)

Just a thought I had. What do you think? I dropped this also in Discord suggestions, will see if the dev likes it or not.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Dev makes some decent stories and hot af sex scenes but he loves having super sluts as love interests in his games for some reason.
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Well, without those precedents, she would probably be a great LI. With those precedents, I don't even consider her a LI. The truth is that it's the only bad thing about her, but in my opinion it overshadows all the good.

It's good that we can skip having a romantic relationship (and sex) with her, which of course is what I've done. It's even better that we can turn off the netorase and it doesn't even appear as an option (at least I don't remember any optión about it).

There could be "sex rooms" on both 'good' and 'bad' paths where you send extra girls along the way so they don't have to fend for themselves in the wild. This would offer a chance to re-visit them for MC without the logistics of having them as slaves. It could be variety of simple sex scenes for players to return to whenever "freeroam" is offered in the game (or maybe in the menu available at certain points, you can view it as teleport for lore).

Brothel run by Carmen (good option)
- Carmen has experience
- Work opportunity not enslavement
- Boost morale of the village
- Respectable establishment in the fantasy setting usually

Dungeon run by Regina (bad option)
- When MC takes over Regina is subdued and working for him
- Girls sent here will be slaves
- Boost morale of the guards
- Bargaining tool in future negotiations (either threat of ending up there or offering slaves from there as bribe)

Just a thought I had. What do you think? I dropped this also in Discord suggestions, will see if the dev likes it or not.

My interest in both options is between zero and none.

 

[Xythurr]

There could be "sex rooms" on both 'good' and 'bad' paths where you send extra girls along the way so they don't have to fend for themselves in the wild. This would offer a chance to re-visit them for MC without the logistics of having them as slaves. It could be variety of simple sex scenes for players to return to whenever "freeroam" is offered in the game (or maybe in the menu available at certain points, you can view it as teleport for lore).

Brothel run by Carmen (good option)
- Carmen has experience
- Work opportunity not enslavement
- Boost morale of the village
- Respectable establishment in the fantasy setting usually

Dungeon run by Regina (bad option)
- When MC takes over Regina is subdued and working for him
- Girls sent here will be slaves
- Boost morale of the guards
- Bargaining tool in future negotiations (either threat of ending up there or offering slaves from there as bribe)

Just a thought I had. What do you think? I dropped this also in Discord suggestions, will see if the dev likes it or not.

This isn't a hardcore ntr or swinging game bud. Some swinging is there for those that like it but even the swinging fits within a certain context.
Those ideas seem like they would push the game too far in a certain direction and would cost the dev fans.

The dev has chosen to walk a theme tightrope with their game and unless they do a full 360% turn that's how it will be.

 

[pitao]

It's good that we can skip having a romantic relationship (and sex) with her, which of course is what I've done. It's even better that we can turn off the netorase and it doesn't even appear as an option (at least I don't remember any optión about it).

I have netorase off and got it as an option, well you do you, as anyone else you are intitled to add or not more members to the harem or not doing a harem at all.

I'll do me and having played the previous game of AtemX doing only the full Harem Love path with NO NTR/NTS and like in that game I won't judge any LI for actions made in the past as bluntly as they may be presented, what matters to me is how they act once they meet/interact with the MC and how devoted they are willing to be to him and I'm almost certain the game will be as pleasant and romantic as AlwaysFan was, not many harem games do it so well as AtemX does them at least on the "good guy" no ntr paths as I always play them.

Doing only the playthrough of full Love/Selfless path and not leaving any LI behind and it was great playing the first episode, for sure the best first release of any AVN I played before and already tried many. And wow I remember saying that AlwaysFan was great for the development time/content ratio but that still lacked some to reach the visual level with HS2 of the dev Caribdis but the final AlwaysFan update got near already, and now on Inanna Revenge it got really really close if not at same level in some renders and animations. Even those tiny breaks you notice before on the animation loops are inexistent now, at least on my PC all runs very smooth without breaks on the loop transitions, probably on weaker machines won't run so smoothly though.

The lore is greatly presented and all of it comes up naturally, the combat system is also retro neat and simple and not hard at all and gives a few small breaks from the story/dialogue (they are all fixed fights, don't worry about random encounters), reminds me when I started playing the first Final Fantasy turn based combat games still in the early 90s before the PS1 breakthrough that was FF7 in 1997, that one was already on another level.
The writing continues to be good so barely anything to complain about. There is one simple free roam but very easy to go thru.
And the NTS is fully avoidable and can be turned off in the options before start a new game. The UI and menus are very good for a first release too, I'm sure it will improve and change to meet new content.

The 2 fights achievements in the main menu didn't unlock though, probably did something wrong there but no biggie, not gonna even bother with it.