VN Ren'Py Incest [Ch.2 v0.5.5] [17MOONKEYS]

[minibaer12]

Well, dear 17MOONKEYS , you're serving us a pretty sick story here. You've made some hints in the story that have piqued my interest; I hope we get to see them as soon as possible.

 

[17MOONKEYS]

sick story

What do you mean?

 

[Sir Anal]

and you can imagine what it would be like for me to read the whole forum in English

أستطيع أن أتخيل ذلك جيدًا
I can imagine very well

 

[RoadRenegat]

Salut, J’ai fait une traduction manuelle de ce jeu et je vous la propose.J'ai relu l’ensemble du texte, du moins je pense, mais il y a probablement encore quelques erreurs ou fautes. Désolé d’avance si c’est le cas, ne m’en tenez pas rigueur !pour jouer en français, il suffit de remplacer le dossier "game" du jeu par celui inclus dans cette archive. N’hésitez pas à me signaler les fautes que vous repérez en jouant, ça m’aidera à les corriger. Une capture d’écran avec le texte en question serait vraiment appréciée, si possible.Amusez-vous bien !
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Hi, I've done a manual translation of this game and I'm offering it to you. I've proofread the entire text, at least I think so, but there are probably still a few errors or mistakes. Sorry in advance if that's the case, don't hold it against me! To play in French, just replace the “game” folder with the one included in this archive. Feel free to let me know if you spot any mistakes while playing, it'll help me fix them. A screenshot with the text in question would be greatly appreciated, if possible. Have fun!
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[lpier]

love the game so far !!! go on

 

[Aqzaccaza]

This is a helpful feedback. Tnak You!

But

What do you mean?

There's a classic rule of story telling: 'show, don't tell'. In this case, it's superior to illustrate information or your points in the story itself rather than as a dialogue. For example, you could hint towards the doll being who she is by the kind of dialogues she uses, for instance old metaphors or addages from the 20th century or earlier. That would hint towards her old age. Or you could interweave some hatred in her towards the people who killed her other body and so on. This gives us a good idea of what the doll is without removing all the suspense.

 

[Kevin75004]

Man the models looks so sexy, love a good milf. I just wish this was a true step-family incest. I know I'm in a minority opinion on this lol... but blood incest is just a turn off for me. I try and imagine they are not blood related
Sometimes it's quite hard when the dialog during a sex scene is like "I'm fucking the hole I came out of" (different game) lmao.

 

[HungLow247]

This version 0.4.8 and the last uploaded version was 0.4.8? .... So nothing was updated and this is a repost? Wouldn't kill you to show what was updated in the channel log. " Forget about it man, I'm too lazy to do this, sorry for the inconvenience "

 

[17MOONKEYS]

This version 0.4.8 and the last uploaded version was 0.4.8? .... So nothing was updated and this is a repost? Wouldn't kill you to show what was updated in the channel log. " Forget about it man, I'm too lazy to do this, sorry for the inconvenience "

This is 0.4.9

 

[Friemel]

Hey 17MOONKEYS!

Great game so far, I love playing it!

But there's one thing that bothers me, especially at the beginning of the game: the pictograms (or whatever the miniaturized representations of the characters talking or thinking are called) at the bottom left are always shown naked, even though they're walking through the house dressed for the first time, for example. That takes a bit of the immersion out of the game for me. Perhaps there could be a bit more situational imagery here?

Keep up the good work on your games!

 

[Jantio1999]

I wonder, maybe it's asked in those 45 pages.

I always seem to need to select the 'red' options, not the green options. Else I won't get any content or?

Am I right?

 

[17MOONKEYS]

Hey 17MOONKEYS!

Great game so far, I love playing it!

But there's one thing that bothers me, especially at the beginning of the game: the pictograms (or whatever the miniaturized representations of the characters talking or thinking are called) at the bottom left are always shown naked, even though they're walking through the house dressed for the first time, for example. That takes a bit of the immersion out of the game for me. Perhaps there could be a bit more situational imagery here?

Keep up the good work on your games!

Thank you. I’ll think about it.

 

[17MOONKEYS]

I wonder, maybe it's asked in those 45 pages.

I always seem to need to select the 'red' options, not the green options. Else I won't get any content or?

Am I right?

Yes.

It probably confuses a lot of people. I’ll likely remove the color scheme.

 

[Wildbill582]

let your imagination run wild. corrupt the world. every woman and girl is targeted. Family, Friends, Schools, Workplace... all targets.

 

[pix28]

the main thing is not to forget about the moral dilemma. without it, all the salt (and pepper) is lost. only the realization of committing a sin gives the latter a special sweetness. that's why nothing can ruin the game as much as the stupid unnatural way of “happy love” of mother and son. more guilt complex, dependence, irretrievability of the lost - and then without any complex renders the game will burn even at graphic minimums.

 

[Sir Anal]

There's a classic rule of story telling: 'show, don't tell'. In this case, it's superior to illustrate information or your points in the story itself rather than as a dialogue. For example, you could hint towards the doll being who she is by the kind of dialogues she uses, for instance old metaphors or addages from the 20th century or earlier. That would hint towards her old age. Or you could interweave some hatred in her towards the people who killed her other body and so on. This gives us a good idea of what the doll is without removing all the suspense.

I don't want to sound mean or disparage my fellow gamers, but I think you're overestimating or misunderstanding the culture of the people who play this game. Especially given the diversity of countries, references, metaphors, adages and so on can vary so much from one to another.
For example, for me, all games with references to baseball (all that stuff about first base, second base, etc.) go right over my head or like we say "m'en touche une sans faire bouger l'autre" / touch one but without the other's moving) .

 

[__b]

No. Maybe next game will be about futa.

finally a game that is not futa... thank you!

 

[josh963]

Awesome game! Very good story! It would be great if the updates are released regularly

 

[17MOONKEYS]

finally a game that is not futa... thank you!

Not yet

 

[17MOONKEYS]

It would be great if the updates are released regularly

Working on it every single day.