some feedback:
- if you want this to be 'horror', there needs to be more build-up to the world/location in the beginning. need to build suspense more.
-where is this house? what part of world are we? There are different reasons to be scared alone in the woods, mountains, desert etc.
- things like lack of internet, and a sentence about 3 mile isolation is good but need to build on this more. spend a little more time talking about the isolation and lack of available 'help'. isolatioin is easy element to use for suspense.
- the only thing for me that felt even remotely horror is the doll but its introduced very randomly and without any consequence or suspense. Maybe the doll keeps being randomly spoted around the house but we don't get a good look at it?
a cool idea for this setup for me would be:
- 'Aunt' is pretty reserved and loyal to husband at intro
- the MC is also pretety timid/shy at intro
- Doll corrupts both Aunt and MC in various ways
- Doll makes MC more dominant. Makes Aunt more submissive
- Things like Corruption, BDSM for me kinda go in line with Horror elements.
- The corruption of the characters and the possible behavior that could be 'horrifying' to the characters .
i don't like 'horror porn' so as long as you don't go anything violent, i look forward to seeing this update.
We need more Mom content out there
