its not that short of an update. the dev says he works 40+ h a week at a regular job, so you cant complain that its shorter on content compared to other devs.
@Vilelab why are characters saying the name of the person they are talking to in like every sentence ? its really annoying and distracting.
as for the game, it looks nice, music is a nice touch, dialogue can sometimes be weird or even outright stupid. its not awful but its average at best. i think this has awesome potential, especially if the dev continues to grow his financial support and is able to work full time on the game.
my biggest critique would be the writing, it needs improvement, i hope eventually he will be able to afford to hire someone