VN Ren'Py Abandoned Inevitable Relations [v0.1b] [KinneyX23]

[KinneyX23]

Don't know what else I can say other than it's a beta version, which honestly isn't supposed to be released to anyone else than my Patreons, just because of the missing stuff and the possible bugs.

That said though, I'm close to getting the full version of 0.05 ready for it's release.


As for the mom/main char, I agree!

 

[Creeping Death]

Don't know what else I can say other than it's a beta version, which honestly isn't supposed to be released to anyone else than my Patreons, just because of the missing stuff and the possible bugs.

Don't worry, 90% of all internet users don't know and furthermore give a shit about terms like alpha, beta, preview, early access. The only good thing for me the internet offers an elegant option to avoid reading those people more than once. You can easily ignore them! It's a wonderful feature. After porn internet was made for ignore functions ^^

 

[aegon1532]

I don't mean to be judgemental but I think the whole goth lesbian thing isn't going to appeal to as wide an audience as you might hope. It might be better to make them a little more glamorous, rather than grungy.

What's it's lenghth I mean gameplay time

 

[Mishinatio]

Can i get a walkthrough for this?

 

[KinneyX23]

What's it's lenghth I mean gameplay time

Depends on how fast you can read, but I'd say 15-30 minutes.

Can i get a walkthrough for this?

Seriously?

 

[Ignatz]

Never underestimate the laziness of adult game players...

 

[ArgleBargleDargle]

I don't know if it's bugs or me just not understanding the stats, I did a route where I focused on the daughter and was just friendly with the son, and the shower scene with the naked half-hug disappeared and there was no option to "check out" the sister character. Maybe intentional though?

 

[aegon1532]

Thank you

 

[KinneyX23]

Public release of 0.05a:

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Changelog:

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[Randor]

normally i'm not into the Female mc games. but i was bored and began to test a few.. and wow i damn like your game. i hope your project grows good and wish you good luck with it.

 

[letsdothisthing]

Is there a non-compressed version of this game available?
This story really needs better dialogue, even if you don't plan on adding more images during the conversation.

For example:
"Talking about your kids, there's Eva!" Suddenly we're working out in a gym. I can only assume that Eva was at the house and then after some conversation they went to the gym.

Another example:
Son jacking it in the bathroom, apparently aiming at a distance for the sink. Mom just strolls into the bathroom and is shocked to find the son in there. The look on Son's face is pretty awkward: I get that he's looking at a pic of (someone), but it looks like he hates whoever he looks at.

After a year and five months since this Visual novel was first uploaded there should be a good amount of story with some character development as well. Your renders are good, I'll give you that, but renders are nothing without a good story. Unless you just want porn; but then, why not just watch porn? Hmm, good idea, I think I will.

 

[b12moguj]

What is the ending.rpy attached file?

 

[Randor]

What is the ending.rpy attached file?

Its a bugfix - there is a errorscreen when you reach the end of the curent version (Credits Screen)

 

[Mirewen]

played this for the first time...
Promising novel... Seems we are in for another game with a good story, and with some good graphics.
I'll keep a tab on this one...

 

[KinneyX23]

Is there a non-compressed version of this game available?
This story really needs better dialogue, even if you don't plan on adding more images during the conversation.

There is, but that version is for Patrons only at the moment. Furthermore there's no difference between the compressed and the uncompressed version of the game, only the image format is different.

For example:
"Talking about your kids, there's Eva!" Suddenly we're working out in a gym. I can only assume that Eva was at the house and then after some conversation they went to the gym.

Which version did you play? The beta? Because in version 0.05a the dialogue issue that you are discribing is fixed. And the training scene is at a different point in the story.

Another example:
Son jacking it in the bathroom, apparently aiming at a distance for the sink. Mom just strolls into the bathroom and is shocked to find the son in there. The look on Son's face is pretty awkward: I get that he's looking at a pic of (someone), but it looks like he hates whoever he looks at.

I agree here and I will change/expand the scene with the next release.

After a year and five months since this Visual novel was first uploaded there should be a good amount of story with some character development as well. Your renders are good, I'll give you that, but renders are nothing without a good story. Unless you just want porn; but then, why not just watch porn? Hmm, good idea, I think I will.

Wait what? So some developed this game before me?
Seriously though, I started the development in August last year and if my math is correct, that's nowhere near 1 year and 5 months.
Plus I already said numerous times, that the development of this game is a hobby for me. Like some others I have a full time job, that keeps me at work for at least 10 hours per day, 5 to 6 days a week.


Last but not least, I don't mean to be rude. If you have constructive criticism, then that's very much appreciated, but at least get your facts right.

 

[evildead]

Is it really so difficult to read what people have written?
The gem still ends at the same time, but the new content wasn't added after the end of the last version, it was added between the exisiting scenes.

why......so now we do redo the game just to see the new content .............go forward not backwards lol

 

[KinneyX23]

I'm not having this discussion again. I already said why I did it and why the content was added this way and if you don't like then I can't do anything about that. It's done now!

 

[evildead]

am not having a go at you m8 … your game is epic …. I just didn't like that I had to redo the game … so I ask will you be doing this type of thing again with adding new content to the start or mid game... that way I can stop playing each update and wait till its 100% done …..

 

[winter0s]

You gotta look at it this way - Every creator (artists, programmers, Gods!!) have their own workflow. Some work in increments, some work in iterations.

If you are so passionate about the game, you should pay for it on Patreon and make yourself heard on the comments there. That doesn't mean you cannot voice your suggestions/preferences if you are not paying, you absolutely can and should as constructive criticism. But don't expect the developer to conform to it. I have the same problem as you, I stopped playing around 0.3 and now patiently waiting for the the version when the story moves forward. You have to let the developer do his thing.

 

[ltpika]

You gotta look at it this way - Every creator (artists, programmers, Gods!!) have their own workflow. Some work in increments, some work in iterations.

If you are so passionate about the game, you should pay for it on Patreon and make yourself heard on the comments there. That doesn't mean you cannot voice your suggestions/preferences if you are not paying, you absolutely can and should as constructive criticism. But don't expect the developer to conform to it. I have the same problem as you, I stopped playing around 0.3 and now patiently waiting for the the version when the story moves forward. You have to let the developer do his thing.

It's something that should be avoided at all costs. Especially if you are on a monthly pay model, dropping the "surprise" that people's saves are useless is something people won't tolerate more than once. Imagine if an MMO did that, there'd be a riot.