VN Ren'Py Inner Demons [v0.44.0.16] [GrayTShirt]

[The Pointman]

kinetic novel so that means there are zero choices right.

 

[GrayTShirt]

GrayTShirt

Chapter03:
Conversation between Njal and Bodil shows up as being between Nimue and Bodil. Need the speaker to be `nl` not `n`.

# This block of conversation should be happening between Njal and Bodil.

# Character variable sets extracted from beginning of files as examples:
# define bl = Character ("Bodil", color="#06DCFB")
# define nl = Character ("Njal", color="#CC0000")
# define n = Character ("Nimue", color="#FF0033")



# game/Chapter03part1.rpy: Line 68
    scene 3007
    n "Hey... [bl]."
    n "What do think she means by \"On display\"?"
    scene 3008
    n "What... what are they gonna do to us?"
    scene 3009
    bl "Only the goddess knows."
    bl "But the thing that worries me is... what do they have planned for him?"
    scene 3010

And as long as we are bringing up Njal, several instancs of his name being hardcoded rather than pointing to his character variable. Including a misspelling in Chapter04.

Chapter03part1.rpy:    bl "Njal!"
Chapter03part1.rpy:    bl "Shut the fuck up, Njal!"

chapter04.rpy:    bl "Njal!"
chapter04.rpy:    bl "Njal..."
chapter04.rpy:    bl "And Njall... I advise that you would do well to not repeat such stories."

Chapter04:
Unprintable characters in the codebase.

game/chapter04.rpy: Line 8683

 nl "If the men suspect this recruit is somehow related to that �mythical� madman..."

Results in the dreaded "empy box" for unprintable characters during the dialog:
View attachment 3841480

Thank you for finding these! I must have missed them in a rush to get that update out. (It's always a rush though, no excuses for me.)
I've fixed these mistakes, but they won't be published until next update. The whole file size is 1.6gb, didn't want to reupload it and make everyone re-download it. (I don't know how to make update-only... updates, sorry.)
Thank you again!

 

[GrayTShirt]

kinetic novel so that means there are zero choices right.

Correct, but in this update I did include a story-altering choice that will affect MC for the rest of the game. But as a whole, yes, it's a kinetic novel.

 

[The Pointman]

Correct, but in this update I did include a story-altering choice that will affect MC for the rest of the game. But as a whole, yes, it's a kinetic novel.

So the game has just one choice and that is it no routes no choosing nothing.

 

[GrayTShirt]

always a pleasure to see a new update from you GrayTShirt i'd love to see the round bellies(pregnant) of the main cast(Hilda/Syke/Fiona/Rhona) one day even if it's not your thing or not planned yet

Well, Fiona and Rhona won't be pregnant just based on their characters. Hilda is pretty much done with kids, she already has her hands full with the two she has! And Skye, well, who knows what the future holds. (Far, far, far, distant future...) I may do like a one-off pin up of them pregnant, we'll see.

 

[GrayTShirt]

So the game has just one choice and that is it no routes no choosing nothing.

That's right. I wanted to make a straight forward story, more "written novel" and less "game".

 

[GrayTShirt]

Byrn and Shelby scene was 10/10

It took a while to get the scene done right. When it comes to Hilda, Fiona, or Bryn I try not to compromise, and take my time with htme.

 

[The Pointman]

That's right. I wanted to make a straight forward story, more "written novel" and less "game".

Shame how about kinks then are they forced or no.

 

[GrayTShirt]

Shame how about kinks then are they forced or no.

Most scenes are optional to view, but will happen either A) in the background regardless of choice or B) be given a choice to simply not perform that specific act. The kinks are there specifically because I enjoy writing and rendering those types of things.

 

[The Pointman]

Most scenes are optional to view, but will happen either A) in the background regardless of choice or B) be given a choice to simply not perform that specific act. The kinks are there specifically because I enjoy writing and rendering those types of things.

Ah ok thanks for letting me know i will think on it not sure about it but thanks for the info.

 

[osanaiko]

5mithers Thanks for reporting those issues!

I'm sure i've found the Njal / Nimue before, but I guess I never passed it on to GTS. Oops!

The borked characters would likely have been me as well, accidentally doing a cut-n-paste via some app that only handles ascii not utf8. Here's a spare copy of the missing characters if anyone needs “ ”

 

[poops111]

bryn bros... we won..

 

[GrayTShirt]

bryn bros... we won..

Oh, wait until you see her last scene with MC. It’ll still be a couple updates away. I ain’t done with her yet.

 

[Loxxxthenasty]

Oh, wait until you see her last scene with MC. It’ll still be a couple updates away. I ain’t done with her yet.

Of course not!!!!

 

[Loxxxthenasty]

Bodil is going to get with MC it seems..

 

[Aurelius Ambrosius]

Haven't downloaded this VN yet, but I always like a fantasy setting. The fact this is a 'kinetic' novel (i.e., no actual choices) is GREAT! I hate juggling save files and waiting for mods to show all paths.
Thank you GrayTShirt !!!

 

[GrayTShirt]

Bodil is going to get with MC it seems..

Maaaaaaaaaaaaybe...

 

[GrayTShirt]

Haven't downloaded this VN yet, but I always like a fantasy setting. The fact this is a 'kinetic' novel (i.e., no actual choices) is GREAT! I hate juggling save files and waiting for mods to show all paths.
Thank you GrayTShirt !!!

There is one true choice but it's not until you reach the end. If you haven't downloaded this VN yet, it'll be a while till you get to it. It's super simple though, since it's only a choice between two things.

 

[Loxxxthenasty]

Bodil is going to get with MC it seems..

Hmmm is right

 

[GrayTShirt]

always a pleasure to see a new update from you GrayTShirt i'd love to see the round bellies(pregnant) of the main cast(Hilda/Syke/Fiona/Rhona) one day even if it's not your thing or not planned yet

So, I decided to make something for this. I posted it on my dev log. It won't ever be in the game, but I felt it still had to be done.
Hope you enjoy it.