VN Ren'Py Abandoned Innocent Play [v0.2.2] [Royal Games]

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L3z1l3

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Well, that escalated quickly.

A bit too quickly for my taste. First MC has a guilt trip because he was checking out his sleeping sister, 2 minutes later he is already fingering her pussy and cums on her face.

There should be a few additional steps between them in my opinion. Maybe some more teasing from the sister or something that shows her interest more unambiguously than that half sentence.
Also some kind of additional content to space out the decisions a bit.
 

slimjim101

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Love it so far. Would have loved to see the demo end with Sarah having a little fun watching interracial porn (for the NTR path). Anyway, keep up the great work and thank you.
 
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tigerdiamond

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Mr. Unique

First off, there should be an NTR switch if you are doing both paths. That way people like me can turn it off at the start of the game and don't fuck up and blame you for it.

Second, I love small titties, but, Sarah looks really young. Maybe update her a bit, but keep the small breasts.

Third, I hate slow burns, but, Gods damn, this was 0-120mph in 0.3seconds. Way too quick for even that little bit of action.

Just my 2cents.
Not everything has to be for you
 

Darth Sidious

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Things happened a little too fast there, right after sister showed her bra and asked if the player liked it. This could use some work, it should be a slow process full of landmines and temptations.

Unlike Wolf Plays' comment on Sarah's looks, Sarah is loli-worthy and should remain so (y)
 

tigerdiamond

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Things happened a little too fast there, right after sister showed her bra and asked if the player liked it. This could use some work, it should be a slow process full of landmines and temptations.

Unlike Wolf Plays' comment on Sarah's looks, Sarah is loli-worthy and should remain so (y)
yea, dev already agreed and will move the hj back a bit
 

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Not everything has to be for you
Never said it was and apparently the game is under review because of exactly what I said.

Things happened a little too fast there, right after sister showed her bra and asked if the player liked it. This could use some work, it should be a slow process full of landmines and temptations.

Unlike Wolf Plays' comment on Sarah's looks, Sarah is loli-worthy and should remain so (y)

I never said she shouldn't. Just slightly aged. Or at least write in a backstory that says she's 18. That way this game can get out of the 'being reviewed' status.
 

Trickstar

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Never said it was and apparently the game is under review because of exactly what I said.




I never said she shouldn't. Just slightly aged. Or at least write in a backstory that says she's 18. That way this game can get out of the 'being reviewed' status.
The op says that it was approved, voted on already and not to report it. If you talking about subscribestar, I think the dev already said why too.
 

tigerdiamond

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Never said it was and apparently the game is under review because of exactly what I said.




I never said she shouldn't. Just slightly aged. Or at least write in a backstory that says she's 18. That way this game can get out of the 'being reviewed' status.
If you're referring to the subscribestar that's not the reason, they just manually approve new people, and dev didn't have a "big enough community" last time
 

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The op says that it was approved, voted on already and not to report it. If you talking about subscribestar, I think the dev already said why too.
If you're referring to the subscribestar that's not the reason, they just manually approve new people, and dev didn't have a "big enough community" last time
Well, carry on then. Ahahaha I still think the game broke the light barrier on the 'playtime' with sister.
 

Havik79

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I say leave it just as it is, then in 0.2 have it start with Sarah calling your name and you realise it was just a daydream.
 
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tigerdiamond

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Let me guess, another harem lover on a site that’s full of harem games?
Not to start a different conversation here, but I will never say no to a harem, it just means I get to see the scenes with all the girls without having to play more than once.
 
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