Ok, so I have to give a few advices myself because this game has the potential to blow up. Really good recipe here.
As you already know, you could even go for full gangbang in 0.2 in my opinion, its a porn game. But I do have to give my 2 cents on the matter.
Good Girl Gone Bad (very supported game), had blowjob on 0.2 and Evakiss usually escalates things faster than "normal", cause the normal here is set for like 2-3 years till sex (which is completely retarded in my opinion). For me, normal is to actually provide content.
So here's the deal... I love the fact that you went full in from 0.1. Absolut madlad, never seen before, big props. The only issue I find is not with being rushed, but with continuity, as in... no pants dropped, she was instantly without pants (when did that happen?). standing with her ass up and ready to get cummed on face? boom, she is now lying on the back next shot.
So, put in the extra effort, add those 3-4 renders to make continuity of action. Make sure your updates are on a regular basis and boom...
You're ready to reach top devs.