VN Ren'Py Abandoned Innocent Play [v0.2.2] [Royal Games]

[Bobber Tail]

Strange thing, asked if I want to take her to visit friend, she gets ready, but on bus says "I should have taken her". The teacher stuff is so obvious. It would be nice to let the teacher progress slowly and have option to end it each event. a conversation with her or hidden camera are options, too.

 

[cockcockcockcockcock]

This update is basically nothing. It's also bugged. One of the last choices is to ask your sister to join you visiting a dude. When you choose to ask her, she wants to come, and then on the bus the MC reflects that maybe he should have brought her, or something like that. I don't see the point in releasing an update like this.

 

[seamanq]

There is a glitch in the branching path (probably this was episode 1) where the MC decides to stay at home and play games with sis but then when mom gets home he is thinking that he does not want to tell her that he did not protect his sister from the boys in the park. Looks like a variable didn't get flipped correctly when the decision to play games happened.

 

[HandofVecna]

I like the models (mom is a hottie) and what the Dev is trying to do but execution is lacking in present form. As others have said its pretty short. Poses and dialog are both a bit stiff. Engrish I believe.

The game has possibilities if the Dev can get some help maybe to rework it. If they do get help the game might be pretty good. Right now I'd say give it a go but it's no Parental Love or Radiant.

Good luck Dev and keep at it.

 

[Mr. Unique]

don't know if it as bug or if it wasn't created yet but, when i choose to go to Daniel with Sis, the story continues as i didn't want her to come and she doesn't appear there.

I'm enjoying this game, keep up the good work

Thank you for making me aware of this. I've updated the links with a fixed version. Hopefully this one will work!

 

[Glooskabe]

There is a glitch in the branching path (probably this was episode 1) where the MC decides to stay at home and play games with sis but then when mom gets home he is thinking that he does not want to tell her that he did not protect his sister from the boys in the park. Looks like a variable didn't get flipped correctly when the decision to play games happened.

I came to report this as well...

Here's the relevant code lines 697-702 of script.rpy:

if reacted >= 1:
jump reacted
if reacted <= 1:
jump didntreact
if game >= 1:
jump videogames

Since the variable 'reacted' was initialized to zero in the file defines.rpy, the second if-test will always be true and execute its jump statement before evaluating the value of 'game'. Easiest fix is to move the 'if game...' block to the first position like so:

if game >= 1:
jump videogames
if reacted >= 1:
jump reacted
if reacted <= 1:
jump didntreact

The cleanest code (This is somewhat subjective, of course!) would look something like this:

if game > 0:
jump videogames
elif reacted > 0:
jump reacted
else:
jump didntreact

Now back to playing the rest of the game.

 

[Mr. Unique]

I came to report this as well...

Here's the relevant code lines 697-702 of script.rpy:

if reacted >= 1:
jump reacted
if reacted <= 1:
jump didntreact
if game >= 1:
jump videogames

Since the variable 'reacted' was initialized to zero in the file defines.rpy, the second if-test will always be true and execute its jump statement before evaluating the value of 'game'. Easiest fix is to move the 'if game...' block to the first position like so:

if game >= 1:
jump videogames
if reacted >= 1:
jump reacted
if reacted <= 1:
jump didntreact

The cleanest code (This is somewhat subjective, of course!) would look something like this:

if game > 0:
jump videogames
elif reacted > 0:
jump reacted
else:
jump didntreact

Now back to playing the rest of the game.

Thank you very much for the help, I'm a bit new to Ren'Py, so I will probably be making a lot of mistakes such as this

EDIT: Also would you have any issue with me "stealing" that piece of code?

 

[paragon]

Great game thoroughly enjoying it, more of the dodgy teachers is needed.

 

[Glooskabe]

Thank you very much for the help, I'm a bit new to Ren'Py, so I will probably be making a lot of mistakes such as this

EDIT: Also would you have any issue with me "stealing" that piece of code?

Go right ahead! (Hope I didn't fuck up the syntax...)

 

[Hellster]

There is a glitch in the branching path (probably this was episode 1) where the MC decides to stay at home and play games with sis but then when mom gets home he is thinking that he does not want to tell her that he did not protect his sister from the boys in the park. Looks like a variable didn't get flipped correctly when the decision to play games happened.

Yeah there's another one in the latest update too, where the MC thinks he left his sister home even though he took her with him

 

[Glooskabe]

Okay, another bug found...

In lines 150 and 154 of chapter2.rpy, you use "==" to assign values to danielbrings. You should use "=".

So instead of:

$danielbrings == True

it should be:

$danielbrings = True

 

[a1fox3]

What's rule 7. Can anyone explain more

https://f95zone.to/threads/general-rules-updated-2020-07-23.5589/



7. Content (a game, image, video, story, animation, etc.) depicting nudity or sexualization or sexual/erotic activity involving prepubescent character(s) is prohibited. A "prepubescent character" is one that visually shows no sign of puberty, or if non-visual is otherwise clearly intended to represent a prepubescent character. 2D and 'unrealistic' depictions are generally looked upon more favorably. As this involves some discretion, if you are unsure ask a Staff Member.

 

[Romalous]

It's the "no loli/shota" rule. It's kind of arbitrary though in my opinion. In my view staff seems to go easier on pre-pubescent male characters over female. So basically if any of your characters are child-like, your game needs to be approved by staff to be posted.

would a 300 year old loli vampire count as rule 7

 

[Mr. Unique]

Okay, another bug found...

In lines 150 and 154 of chapter2.rpy, you use "==" to assign values to danielbrings. You should use "=".

So instead of:

$danielbrings == True

it should be:

$danielbrings = True

That one should've been fixed in v.0.2.1

 

[Glooskabe]

That one should've been fixed in v.0.2.1

Downloading now!

Will download as soon as the link on OP is updated...

 

[Mr. Unique]

Downloading now!

Please note, that the previous bugs that you mentioned still haven't been fixed yet

 

[muthaluva]

Is Mega not working for anyone else?

EDIT: Got it to work disregard.

Says it's removed for me.


The file you are trying to download is no longer available.
This could be due to the following reasons:
The file has been removed because of a ToS/AUP violation.
Invalid URL - the link you are trying to access does not exist
The file has been deleted by the user.

 

[Mr. Unique]

Says it's removed for me.


The file you are trying to download is no longer available.
This could be due to the following reasons:
The file has been removed because of a ToS/AUP violation.
Invalid URL - the link you are trying to access does not exist
The file has been deleted by the user.

I removed it due preparing a bugfix

 

[leeetsgooo]

I invoke Rule 7

 

[muthaluva]

I removed it due preparing a bugfix

My bad, thought the bug-fix was already up. I'll stop my other download of it and wait!