Asuna.

SushiGames
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Models needs some serious improvements.
This okay for now but in your next updates, you better improve it. ^^

Female models looks like as if a horse kicked on their faces. lol
Thanks! Improving visuals will definitely happen! But, what you meant with a face as if kicked by a horse, do you mean the lack of depth?

think i got all events maybe walkthrough? later on to be sure
Of course! That will definitely come. Thanks for playing :D
 
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Highland_Hunter

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Are the nipples always covered by pasties ?

If so, then the Tag of Pasties, should be added, and it IS, a sort of censorship, especially when there is also a TAG for Exhibitionism, :unsure: and not everyone (probably, very few, who do) has a Pastie Fetish. :oops:
 

RandyPhoenix

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Looks promising: I'm waiting new updates with more good looking face drawings, soft animations and more sex releated scenes! (Anal/Vaginal) Keep it your good work.
 

Asuna.

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Face proportions is lacking. It's not polished.


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Look at her face man. Don't you think its werid?
Ahhh! I get it! I've seen Hitomi's face that often that I blinded myself. Bad!

Now I completely understand what you mean! I noticed it with both Asuna and Sakura, hence I went for more realistic proportions but I...oh well. No excuses for it!

I'm glad that you pointed this out this early in the game! It is still solvable.
John1124
Are the nipples always covered by pasties ?

If so, then the Tag of Pasties, should be added, and it IS, a sort of censorship, especially when there is also a TAG for Exhibitionism, :unsure: and not everyone (probably, very few, who do) has a Pastie Fetish. :oops:
Pasties will get off at some point :p As of now, tanning on the balcony with an apartment complex opposite the house, even though Hitomi is wearing pasties, that is still a form of exhibitionism, right? Wearing such a skimpy piece of clothing, exposing her female assets.

So, would it be okay if I add pasties as an tag as it is currently in the game? If so, I'd have to thank you as I missed that tag!

That said, I definitely plan to keep exhibitionism as part of the game as well...and I also like the pasties kink...so there is still a bit figuring out to do :p

Looks promising: I'm waiting new updates with more good looking face drawings, soft animations and more sex releated scenes! (Anal/Vaginal) Keep it your good work.
Thank you for the kind words! I hope you and everyone else will be satisfied with the next release ^^ Sex related scenes are definitely a must! So don't worry about that :p
 
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standbygames

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Decent start, though it'd be nice to know when the content is over for this version. Kept going on and on through the same events hoping for more. Look forward to future updates.
 
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Asuna.

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Decent start, though it'd be nice to know when the content is over for this version. Kept going on and on through the same events hoping for more. Look forward to future updates.
Yes! I got the suggestion of adding it in the smartphone...which could be a neat outcome ;) Thanks :D
 
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" Pasties will get off at some point :p As of now, tanning on the balcony with an apartment complex opposite the house, even though Hitomi is wearing pasties, that is still a form of exhibitionism, right? "

Yeah, if you want to show, she is still shy , and inexperienced, about exposing her natural self, to everyone.

But, exhibitionism, is about the thrill , one gets, (usually sexual), exposing their total naked self,especially, their breasts/nipples (females), and genitalia, (both genders) to others, and getting excited from doing so, and watching the expressions they cause to others, because of the tabooness of it ! They also get, a sense/feeling, of Freedom from the act.

"Wearing such a skimpy piece of clothing, exposing her female assets."

In places, where it is illegal by law,(and IS, enforced) to be Totally Nude, they can get around that and still get their "thrills", by being totally nude under a "sheer"/ tinted latex material dress/outfit, but they don't usually wear pasties, or vaginal coverings, except, if they are new to the experience/in-training, under supervision.
 

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Looks nice. But how will you have incest in the game while it's on Patreon? Do you have a by-pass mechanic like asking us "who is this to you?" for each character and we write "mom" and "sister" like a few other games have?
 

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I'm afraid I have to side with some of the other posters - the breasts on the girls don't look very good to me. The mothers' breasts are sagging very nearly to her bellybutton, which is a horrible no-no for me, and the older sister doesn't look much better. The younger sister (who I disagree should be classed as a loli, as she's clearly developed, but whatever) doesn't have as much of a sag issue; the other two would probably be better with their breast height set to whatever hers is, and her smaller breasts raised slightly to emphasise her perkyness. The size of her nipples should probably also be toned down though - look at the profile image at the end of the row, it looks like she just got off a milking machine or something; her nipples are much puffier than they ought to be.

The makeup should also be lightened, and different shades of lipstick chosen to help make it look more natural. It shouldn't be entirely removed - lipstick is needed in Koikatu to give definition in any real sense to the lips and I even put it on my male characters sometimes - but consideration should be given to making sure that it doesn't draw attention. Moderation is the name of the game with make-up unless you're aiming for a bimbo character: the idea is that you don't even realize it's there unless you've seen the girl's face without it.

All-in-all it's mostly a matter of moderation in the model design. It's probably an issue fixed really early in development too, as every scene you make with the "busted" models will need to be replaced with the fixed ones should you ever do so, and that work piles up quick. The color design is really good. The concept is kind of silly, even dumb, but in a way that kind of works, so it actually interacts really well with the colorful artwork. There's definitely some solid potential here, it just needs a bit of polish on the outside.

If you have any difficulty reading this post, btw, feel free to ask. I'm learning German as a second language myself, and... Whew. Big respect to anyone who's bilingual, really.
 
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Pitrik

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Looks nice. But how will you have incest in the game while it's on Patreon? Do you have a by-pass mechanic like asking us "who is this to you?" for each character and we write "mom" and "sister" like a few other games have?
Yeah the game asks to you about relationships
 
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Asuna.

SushiGames
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I'm afraid I have to side with some of the other posters - the breasts on the girls don't look very good to me. The mothers' breasts are sagging very nearly to her bellybutton, which is a horrible no-no for me, and the older sister doesn't look much better. The younger sister (who I disagree should be classed as a loli, as she's clearly developed, but whatever) doesn't have as much of a sag issue; the other two would probably be better with their breast height set to whatever hers is, and her smaller breasts raised slightly to emphasise her perkyness. The size of her nipples should probably also be toned down though - look at the profile image at the end of the row, it looks like she just got off a milking machine or something; her nipples are much puffier than they ought to be.

The makeup should also be lightened, and different shades of lipstick chosen to help make it look more natural. It shouldn't be entirely removed - lipstick is needed in Koikatu to give definition in any real sense to the lips and I even put it on my male characters sometimes - but consideration should be given to making sure that it doesn't draw attention. Moderation is the name of the game with make-up unless you're aiming for a bimbo character: the idea is that you don't even realize it's there unless you've seen the girl's face without it.

All-in-all it's mostly a matter of moderation in the model design. It's probably an issue fixed really early in development too, as every scene you make with the "busted" models will need to be replaced with the fixed ones should you ever do so, and that work piles up quick. The color design is really good. The concept is kind of silly, even dumb, but in a way that kind of works, so it actually interacts really well with the colorful artwork. There's definitely some solid potential here, it just needs a bit of polish on the outside.

If you have any difficulty reading this post, btw, feel free to ask. I'm learning German as a second language myself, and... Whew. Big respect to anyone who's bilingual, really.
Thank you for the very clear, constructive criticism! Make-up...oh make-up! I agree with you! I've experimented a lot with it...but now I noticed my models having a rather larger than average under-lip :cry::cry::cry: The shading I've chosen for the models is for having a jaw-line whereas when I choose depth, I lose the jaw-line in Koikatsu. Perhaps I need to have the models with both the jaw-line make-up and depth make-up?

Having also read the other comments, some seem to like the 'saggy-ness' of Hitomi's breasts as they feel it is realistic considering her age and having 3 grown children whereas others dislike the 'saggy' breasts. That said...I actually had Hitomi with perky breasts also as an separate model...but in Koikatsu, clothes will clip almost immediately in that case. It's hard to get it just right, believe me, I've spent 10s of hours on it and even went so far as to create custom clothes. I am doing my best to get it right though! Maybe I'm missing something..so if you noticed it, please tell me as I'd appreciate it a lot ^^

I'll post some renders later and am curious to what people like hehe :p There might also be a surprise then ;)

It's still early, so...fixing stuff should be easy to do now as well indeed ^^ I love tips and tops as I've never programmed nor, written a story nor made renders ever before. I've always enjoyed playing lovely games made by others...but now I also want to contribute and hope to put a smile on other people :D

All criticism I accept as it helps me, us, to make this a better game. Thank you! Also, if you noticed that I misunderstood something, please do tell :D
 

Asuna.

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Will have to agree with your disagreement. :)
Played through and was left wondering where was any loli's
I am sorry to have disappointed you. I did not intend to mislead you because of that tag :cry:
With Asuna I intended for a more 'grown-up' loli as that's what I had as ideal in my mind. She looks and acts childish, but is as tall as an average adult lady. In that case, should I remove the 'loli-tag?'

I definitely do not want others to have false expectations caused by me as I only want everyone to have a good time. So please do tell and I will correct it! :D
 
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