Ren'Py Abandoned Innocent [v0.3.1] [SushiGames]

[varkatzas666]

It looks promising, the mother is quite a woman's delight. (v 0.1.3)

 

[Asuna.]

It looks promising, the mother is quite a woman's delight. (v 0.1.3)

Thank you! The game just got updated! The mommy gets a gift but has to pick it up at the boutique! Guess who will accompany her hehe? After that's done, mommy will also be able to visit the beach! Lastly, where mommy works has also finally been shown but more than that will have to wait for a future update ^^

Ah right, buying clothes has finally become a thing which could be a fun thing ^^

 

[Sukme]

Thank you! The game just got updated! The mommy gets a gift but has to pick it up at the boutique! Guess who will accompany her hehe? After that's done, mommy will also be able to visit the beach! Lastly, where mommy works has also finally been shown but more than that will have to wait for a future update ^^

Ah right, buying clothes has finally become a thing which could be a fun thing ^^

Don't take this wrong as you've been pretty consistent....BUT 0oooo - you're such a tease....

You gave a dead line..was eagerly anticipating.....time went by ( I know just a few minutes) and was like 'well maybe next time'....then you squeak the upload in

The content/storyline is 'yes...yes..YESS...Oh come on!!!..' Love the renders/animations

Keep up the good work. 'Til next time.

 

[Asuna.]

Don't take this wrong as you've been pretty consistent....BUT 0oooo - you're such a tease....

You gave a dead line..was eagerly anticipating.....time went by ( I know just a few minutes) and was like 'well maybe next time'....then you squeak the upload in

The content/storyline is 'yes...yes..YESS...Oh come on!!!..' Love the renders/animations

Keep up the good work. 'Til next time.

Hehe, thanks! I was actually having trouble exporting and uploading (My 1Gbps fiber optics connection was crippled to around 10Mbps for some reason!) the game. Took me two hours to get it finally sorted. For the next time I'll keep a larger buffer to prevent such last minute things so others, including both you and I won't be kept on edge haha

To be honest, I had to scrap part of the update as I was running out of time, but yet again I wish to add that part quite soon to finally complete the first part of the story, which I deem as the reunion part. I added 2 CG's of the part that got delayed.

I'm sorry for cutting it late and will work to prevent such an emberassing situation again ^^

Life is full of self reflection and learning and I've got ways to go haha!

 

[Almighty]

I'll try this out when you have vaginal sex.

 

[SumTingWong0420]

"live together with your mother and her two home-schooled innocent daughters" skips rest of OP to punch DL link !

Coach is here girls! 1st rule of baseball: if there's grass on the field, Play ball !!

 

[Mrs Delington]

Just want to know if after the scene in bikini in the shop, and the scene on the beach where she have some hallucinations, if mommy have other scenes ?
By the way, it is a little bit sad that in this new update, she is always called by her name (hitomi) and not with her relationship name.

 

[KingWeWuz]

I cannot see a public version available on your patreon. I insist you leave an occasional public version and don't update it as often as the paid version.

 

[megalol]

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[Baharomont]

I realy not love Kiokatsu Art Style...
Becose if you want careate Milf for Game, you just can not do it...
All FeMales, what can be created in Koikatsu be looking like 18-30 old, not more...

 

[Hysni]

So no vaginal sex ?? just BJ ?

 

[rai1810]

Game is easy to understand once you figure out which events to skip to raise love stats. Dinner seems to be a pointlessly long scene at this stage.

The art isn't bad, though maybe you can avoid overdoing the expressions (no need for heart eyes just for slapping Asuna's ass)

My main issue with the game right now is the script. Too many hehe and hihi, and the dialogues are weird at times... MC sounds like one of those fat men in hentai/doujins, and yet still manages to contradict himself.

Most scenes he looks like a horny dog (touching ass, rubbing tits, looking at panties...), but in a few he gets all flustered because of tits or because older sis is about take off her pants... You need to be more consistent with his personality.

 

[Asuna.]

Just want to know if after the scene in bikini in the shop, and the scene on the beach where she have some hallucinations, if mommy have other scenes ?
By the way, it is a little bit sad that in this new update, she is always called by her name (hitomi) and not with her relationship name.

Not yet! Those will be expanded as the story goes on. All three ladies got scenes this time around and it's used to lay the foundation for further story progression.

Darn it! Ughh...I'll have both the MC and Hitomi call each-other by their relationship. I'll get it right a.s.a.p! I'll revisit everything else of the story while I am at it to get everything right. I want to deliver a sweet, full-fulling feeling feeling to everyone and I aim to improve on that with every update.

Thank you for the feedback!

Game is easy to understand once you figure out which events to skip to raise love stats. Dinner seems to be a pointlessly long scene at this stage.

The art isn't bad, though maybe you can avoid overdoing the expressions (no need for heart eyes just for slapping Asuna's ass)

My main issue with the game right now is the script. Too many hehe and hihi, and the dialogues are weird at times... MC sounds like one of those fat men in hentai/doujins, and yet still manages to contradict himself.

Most scenes he looks like a horny dog (touching ass, rubbing tits, looking at panties...), but in a few he gets all flustered because of tits or because older sis is about take off her pants... You need to be more consistent with his personality.

Thanks for letting me know! The MC is supposed to get flustered and when he slowly gets used to it, he becomes more daring. Deep inside he is horny but he tries to mask it by acting like a gentleman. Since you made a remark about it, I'll revisit the dialogue to make it flow better.

Regarding to the hehe and hihi, thank you! Because of your comment I got a great idea to have the characters express themselves without using 'hehe' or 'hihi' unless necessary. Shoot! I'll get to work a.s.a.p to try this out. You'll definitely see an improved dialogue for the next update!

Making a game about a fantasy I myself like a lot is a lot of fun! Feedback allows me to give a bit of polish to the game as I work on it alone and and both coding and story-writing in English is totally new for me. But...then again, I really do enjoy doing it!

So no vaginal sex ?? just BJ ?

Nope! Not yet! I'd like to have everything done already...but you'd have to wait for that

I cannot see a public version available on your patreon. I insist you leave an occasional public version and don't update it as often as the paid version.

I'll make that definitely happen!

 

[Trollolol]

Kept getting an error on inviting to clothing store an beach even after buying the clothes even with 200+ love on all girls(I ignore them & it works but still). Also cant seem to find 3rd Asuna scene? Only found the shop+ beach one this patch.

 

[masterdragonson]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <'MatrixColor' <'Image' u'star gradient.png'> (0, 0, 0, 0, 1, 0, 0, 0, 0, 1, 0, 0, 0, 0, 1, 1, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 1)>:
IOError: Couldn't find file 'star gradient.png'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 98, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 291, in script call
  File "all_char.rpyc", line 50, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 166, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 178, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 291, in script call
  File "all_char.rpyc", line 132, in script call
  File "all_char.rpyc", line 50, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 155, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 98, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 116, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 205, in script call
  File "all_char.rpyc", line 50, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 98, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 291, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 397, in script call
  File "all_char.rpyc", line 50, in script call
  File "events_mc.rpyc", line 343, in script call
  File "events_mc.rpyc", line 343, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 291, in script call
  File "all_char.rpyc", line 132, in script call
  File "all_char.rpyc", line 50, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 155, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 98, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 116, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 247, in script call
  File "all_char.rpyc", line 50, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 98, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 291, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 602, in script call
  File "all_char.rpyc", line 50, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 166, in script call
  File "events_ls.rpyc", line 861, in script
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\ast.py", line 1389, in execute
    renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired)
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\exports.py", line 1601, in with_statement
    return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear)
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 2251, in do_with
    clear=clear)
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 2702, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 3194, in interact_core
    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 2094, in draw_screen
    renpy.config.screen_height,
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 490, in renpy.display.render.render_screen (gen\renpy.display.render.c:6805)
    rv = render(root, width, height, st, st)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3520)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 722, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 166, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:4075)
    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3520)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\display\transition.py", line 506, in render
    image = render(self.image, width, height, st, at)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 166, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:4075)
    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 259, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3520)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\display\im.py", line 583, in render
    return cache.get(self, render=True)
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\display\im.py", line 266, in get
    surf = image.load()
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\display\im.py", line 1259, in load
    surf = cache.get(self.image)
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\display\im.py", line 266, in get
    surf = image.load()
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\display\im.py", line 628, in load
    surf = renpy.display.pgrender.load_image(renpy.loader.load(self.filename), self.filename)
  File "E:\Games\Innocent-0.1.4-win\renpy\loader.py", line 576, in load
    raise IOError("Couldn't find file '%s'." % name)
IOError: Couldn't find file 'star gradient.png'.

Windows-7-6.1.7601-SP1
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
Innocent 0.1.4
Mon Mar 16 09:55:16 2020

 

[Xyze]

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In the file options.rpy the dev have do a misktake:

define starout = ImageDissolve("star gradient.png", 0.5)
define starin = ImageDissolve("star gradient.png", 0.5, reverse=True)

It's just need to replace ".png" by ".webp"

I've attached a fixed version of the file, just put it in your game/ folder

 

[Asuna.]

Kept getting an error on inviting to clothing store an beach even after buying the clothes even with 200+ love on all girls(I ignore them & it works but still). Also cant seem to find 3rd Asuna scene? Only found the shop+ beach one this patch.

What kind of error? I have noticed two events at the boutique not triggering properly and fixed them (see new version).

Spoiler: The third new Asuna scene is at:

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In the file options.rpy the dev have do a misktake:

define starout = ImageDissolve("star gradient.png", 0.5)
define starin = ImageDissolve("star gradient.png", 0.5, reverse=True)

It's just need to replace ".png" by ".webp"

I've attached a fixed version of the file, just put it in your game/ folder

Thank you very much kind sir! Added the fix for the bugfix update! I did a jpg->webp conversion to save space, but forgot about that deceleration.

 

[Spiderfox]

So no vaginal sex ?? just BJ ?

Where does the BJ scene trigger?

 

[Asuna.]

Where does the BJ scene trigger?

Well, that is coming soon! It has been postponed for either the next update or the one thereafter which is why I removed the corresponding tag last update as it doesn't fit into the story just yet. Lot's of the good stuff is coming soon and I hope you'll be happy with it!

 

[Deleted member 1399911]

Hm.. Downloaded the 1.4.1 update but Asuna calls me cousin during shopping.. Pretty sure I put her as sister.