VN Ren'Py Innocent Witches [v0.11 Alpha] [Sad Crab]

[werewolfking65]

Imagine being such a shitlord writer that you get insane backlash and are forcibly removed, after wasting years and multiple thousands of dollars on shitty walls of text instead of actual porn. Like for fuck's sake, you'd THINK there'd be at least some clothes for the girls, after reasonably corrupting them and whatnot. But no, you've barely even begun to corrupt them after 2 years of development. Great job on the Sonya bits though, even if I wished she had some more clothing variety.

Tips:
Its not immediately obvious how you need to level her up, so maybe consider adding in something that tells you that.
The swimsuit "quest" was godawful and overcomplicated for no legitimate reason and I didn't find a way to even see them in swimsuits in-game.
Its also not immediately obvious that you need to call over McGranny to get access to Ginny's Diary, should be addressed as well.
A bunch of the story is written in such a way that there's no clear immediate goals, so you need to guess your way around instead of intuitively knowing what to do. At several points in the game you need to talk to Lil Sally to progress, but how are you supposed to know that?

 

[RedPillBlues]

Imagine being such a shitlord writer that you get insane backlash and are forcibly removed, after wasting years and multiple thousands of dollars on shitty walls of text instead of actual porn. Like for fuck's sake, you'd THINK there'd be at least some clothes for the girls, after reasonably corrupting them and whatnot. But no, you've barely even begun to corrupt them after 2 years of development. Great job on the Sonya bits though, even if I wished she had some more clothing variety.

Tips:
Its not immediately obvious how you need to level her up, so maybe consider adding in something that tells you that.
The swimsuit "quest" was godawful and overcomplicated for no legitimate reason and I didn't find a way to even see them in swimsuits in-game.
Its also not immediately obvious that you need to call over McGranny to get access to Ginny's Diary, should be addressed as well.
A bunch of the story is written in such a way that there's no clear immediate goals, so you need to guess your way around instead of intuitively knowing what to do. At several points in the game you need to talk to Lil Sally to progress, but how are you supposed to know that?

+1 On the swimsuit stuff being more complicated then it needs to be.

 

[Odo Shortwick]

So I found a bit of a game mechanics bug. If you work on the prefect plot lines, and select to gain trust of one of them, before working on Ginny's, you're not longer able to complete Ginny's once you get the key. The game locks down all the other house selections except the one that you choose to gain trust. I suppose it would still work if you selected Herminie but locks up when selecting the others.

 

[alexajke]

But let me say that moving money across borders incurs a lot of costs and Russian laws suck.

Who told you that? There is nothing hard for Russians in paying money from paypal/payoneer directly to you or other foreign entities before trying to cash them in.

 

[JoeBanks]

So I found a bit of a game mechanics bug. If you work on the prefect plot lines, and select to gain trust of one of them, before working on Ginny's, you're not longer able to complete Ginny's once you get the key. The game locks down all the other house selections except the one that you choose to gain trust. I suppose it would still work if you selected Herminie but locks up when selecting the others.

Correct, known bug.

 

[JoeBanks]

+1 On the swimsuit stuff being more complicated then it needs to be.

Correct, I will be fixing it. I will be adding some features to it too, to make it more interesting.

 

[JoeBanks]

Imagine being such a shitlord writer that you get insane backlash and are forcibly removed, after wasting years and multiple thousands of dollars on shitty walls of text instead of actual porn. Like for fuck's sake, you'd THINK there'd be at least some clothes for the girls, after reasonably corrupting them and whatnot. But no, you've barely even begun to corrupt them after 2 years of development. Great job on the Sonya bits though, even if I wished she had some more clothing variety.

Tips:
Its not immediately obvious how you need to level her up, so maybe consider adding in something that tells you that.
The swimsuit "quest" was godawful and overcomplicated for no legitimate reason and I didn't find a way to even see them in swimsuits in-game.
Its also not immediately obvious that you need to call over McGranny to get access to Ginny's Diary, should be addressed as well.
A bunch of the story is written in such a way that there's no clear immediate goals, so you need to guess your way around instead of intuitively knowing what to do. At several points in the game you need to talk to Lil Sally to progress, but how are you supposed to know that?

Well what you just explained at the bottom are issues I have to resolve. I am not going to rip on anyone about how all things came about but i have flipped out several times over things that don't make sense. 0.2B was so much worse than 0.2F, there definitely needs to be context, I even want more hinting. You get stuck... timer hits, something blinks. Ah! Also an option to turn off the hinting should you want to just figure things out blindly.

Some of it should be a bit of work, but not the way it is.

Let's hope this is all the going in the right direction and all my words aren't empty bullshit for the player base.

 

[biglazydog]

Correct, I will be fixing it. I will be adding some features to it too, to make it more interesting.

Anything you're adding that isn't Marcus fucking witches is a waste of your and everyone else's time.

 

[Bigeggs]

Anything you're adding that isn't Marcus fucking witches is a waste of your and everyone else's time.

True as fuck

 

[Alcolaw]

The actual content will come towards the 0.3b or 0.3f, I wouldn't expect a lot out of 0.3a

Then i think you should release your 3b or 3f versions next.

Yes I know it's the opposite of what everyone is complaining about, but I do genuinely think your focus should be H-scenes, and that people are more likely to forgive you for a late update with H-scenes than yet another update with nothing

 

[Bigeggs]

Then i think you should release your 3b or 3f versions next.

Yes I know it's the opposite of what everyone is complaining about, but I do genuinely think your focus should be H-scenes, and that people are more likely to forgive you for a late update with H-scenes than yet another update with nothing

Right now it's a real waste of time if you release game without somethingg worth the wait.

like h some of a main girl or atleast let's we have some fun with Minerva in bathroom

 

[rf96]

Honestly, there will be a point where we need the artist full time (that will require more patreonage) or we have to take it in the face and have a long wait to get the sex scenes. I *want* to come up with some ideas to try to work around that, but we don't try to force the art in any way.

So it seems that you guys cannot advance the story because the artist does not produce anything. As a result, you have to extend the game elsewhere, hence the walls of text, the constant rewriting of the code, the swimsuit quest without the girls wearing swimsuits, etc. Am I reading it right?

 

[cxx]

old saves don`t work again???

no and won't work until near finished version and that's many many years away.

 

[ronehjr]

JoeBanks I just want to know if the walkthrough has been updated .

 

[werewolfking65]

This is perfectly showcasing my issue with a lot of these porn games funded through Patreon - eternal development hell. Months after months, years after years with barely an end in sight. I know that its better for the developer since they keep milking it, but is it so wrong to wish for a good, fully fleshed out porn game with decent art?

 

[JunKriid]

I can't fly by the window. What is the reason? thanks in advance.

 

[Alexaxl32]

So if the old save don't work,does anyone have some save game file?
Thank you

 

[werewolfking65]

I can't fly by the window. What is the reason? thanks in advance.

Even though the game legit tells you right then and there that you should
put the broom on the window, I think you need to talk to Minerva and Snape
first. Very misleading.

 

[ThunderRob]

glad i read the preceding pages of this thread..was going to try it again..but seeing that we are still a long way from action and the game ..besides being truly beautiful to look at..is a bit of a mess still..i'll return for 3b and see if it is finally worthy..until then i'll label this the #1 blueballer of all games..LOL

 

[JunKriid]

Even though the game legit tells you right then and there that you should
put the broom on the window, I think you need to talk to Minerva and Snape
first. Very misleading.

ty for reply. I tried everything. But I still can't do anything