Imagine being such a shitlord writer that you get insane backlash and are forcibly removed, after wasting years and multiple thousands of dollars on shitty walls of text instead of actual porn. Like for fuck's sake, you'd THINK there'd be at least some clothes for the girls, after reasonably corrupting them and whatnot. But no, you've barely even begun to corrupt them after 2 years of development. Great job on the Sonya bits though, even if I wished she had some more clothing variety.
Tips:
Its not immediately obvious how you need to level her up, so maybe consider adding in something that tells you that.
The swimsuit "quest" was godawful and overcomplicated for no legitimate reason and I didn't find a way to even see them in swimsuits in-game.
Its also not immediately obvious that you need to call over McGranny to get access to Ginny's Diary, should be addressed as well.
A bunch of the story is written in such a way that there's no clear immediate goals, so you need to guess your way around instead of intuitively knowing what to do. At several points in the game you need to talk to Lil Sally to progress, but how are you supposed to know that?