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A few suggestions with examples for Khan and his team (for the new plot). If you wonder why this game confuses people, this may help.
1. Please read the dialogue with each of the girls when Marcus is opening the puzzle. Take a sharp pencil and strike through 75% of it. Get to the point. For example: "Here are my suggested changes to the school uniform. The uniform is too revealing. It makes me uncomfortable. Will you take a look?" The massive back and forth dialogue buries the simple point.
2. Please read the dialogue when Snape drinks with Marcus after opening the puzzle--the one that goes into all the background stuff. A lot of this is from an earlier version and had been stricken for a reason. It is so long and so boring. Get to the point.
3. The discussions with Sally. These should advance or explain the plot only. Please minimize the chit chat back and forth. It is incredibly repetitive and boring. It is not witty. For example, stop already with the repeated threats to burn or use paint thinner. Say it once.
4. Marcus's internal monologues. Internal monologues or comments should be one line only, two at most. They should help explain the importance of what Marcus has discovered, what he has to do, or be a single line quip.
5. Dialogue for dialogue sake is boring. Every writer knows this. It must advance the plot or provide critical information or be mixed in with action.
6. The best editing is the delete button. If you want people to understand what the hell is going on just say it---stop burying it in a mountain of words.
7. I see some of the densest, most boring dialogue from the earlier versions has returned. It had been deleted for a reason.
1. Please read the dialogue with each of the girls when Marcus is opening the puzzle. Take a sharp pencil and strike through 75% of it. Get to the point. For example: "Here are my suggested changes to the school uniform. The uniform is too revealing. It makes me uncomfortable. Will you take a look?" The massive back and forth dialogue buries the simple point.
2. Please read the dialogue when Snape drinks with Marcus after opening the puzzle--the one that goes into all the background stuff. A lot of this is from an earlier version and had been stricken for a reason. It is so long and so boring. Get to the point.
3. The discussions with Sally. These should advance or explain the plot only. Please minimize the chit chat back and forth. It is incredibly repetitive and boring. It is not witty. For example, stop already with the repeated threats to burn or use paint thinner. Say it once.
4. Marcus's internal monologues. Internal monologues or comments should be one line only, two at most. They should help explain the importance of what Marcus has discovered, what he has to do, or be a single line quip.
5. Dialogue for dialogue sake is boring. Every writer knows this. It must advance the plot or provide critical information or be mixed in with action.
6. The best editing is the delete button. If you want people to understand what the hell is going on just say it---stop burying it in a mountain of words.
7. I see some of the densest, most boring dialogue from the earlier versions has returned. It had been deleted for a reason.
i did. like a million times. i press leave location and i end up in the office with sally saying "what about your wand" and then nothing happens and the quest won't progress.
- Jan 4, 2020
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Have the same problem, and it seems like a bug. You had to have 25 in perception to pass the dog on the bed. If you tried to pass without 25 in perception the option just vanishes and you can't progress. Same thing with the book in the library.
So grind every stat to 25 first before doing anything of the new content.
- Aug 26, 2018
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there is nothing new in act 2 chapter 2 for last few updates + game is bugged now... no new content at all
- Sep 10, 2017
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- Sep 10, 2017
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I always have a good laugh when I see "repair the Elder Wand"
Looks like they dont even watch or read harry potter....
The only time a wand was repaired was when Harry used the Elder Wand to repair his old wand, not the other way around
- Sep 10, 2017
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Good luck with that mate. It took me A MONTH to complete this task since even the walkthrough was shitty at that timeHaving trouble with Copying Swimsuits in Chapter 4, How to even MAKE IT WORK???
I'm stuck at making 3 copies for the other 3 girls.
- Apr 18, 2020
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One if the big downsides of this type of Renpy game is each new version is incompatible with old saves. Start a new game and you'll get an option to jump to what ever chapter you want
is there no mermaid in the new story? This is the first update I've played in a long time, and I'm trying to get the sea shell achievement. I haven't seen options involving a mermaid in either the prologue or act 1
Go to the section near the wagon on the map, then click the bubbles on the water, refuse to dive and brute force the dialogue options until you get it.
Put that file in your \Game\ folder. Then add a blank file named "Glacius duo" (e.g. create a new text file "New Text Document.txt" and rename it to "Glacius duo", no extension) to the game's root folder. You'll see a few cheat options like max achievements, unlock galleries, and boosted starts to some chapters.