VN Ren'Py Innocent Witches [v0.11 Alpha] [Sad Crab]

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JoeBanks

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yok ki said:
Look I have no doubt that you guys work hard. My problem here is you have no self control mechanism while making the game. You don't have any plans going 0.20 to 0.21. It is just obvious after 3-4 weeks you just go "Lets check what have you done? Now put it all in next release". Like the scene where Snape talks about Nymphadora you could easily add a flashback about what happened or just a flashback of old times with her. That would create a progress in the game. There is mentioning of perfects meeting in the game. The location, issue, details but it is just words. You talk someone and that someone tells you the location, someone else tells you the issue. Where is the progress? In the text, you have to read 10 pages of it for 3 steps. You could just create another canvass about the meeting and player could somehow spy on them. This would have created a progress. You could even put a minigame in there to extend play time. Story got ahead of the coding and visuals just like that. You can create 5 times the progress with this story if you add more visuals and mechanics. You could just focus on them and keep the rest of the story to the next releases. But you have no plan of the game to do this. You have a serious management problem.
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I would agree with this, it's actually being worked on internally. I mean you can't escape such obvious facts, I both play the game and make Ginny in it along with writing Susan and Luna if anyone is wondering what parts to blame me for. Also, if you want to see stuff, I will listen too. I am really trying to get things moving in a positive direction.
 
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HitmanBond said:
How to accomplish the achievements with shells and shard in the pictures?
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Shells do nothing currently, you have to grab them off the mermaid by the lake right after the prologue. I don't know what the shard in the pictures is.
 
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benzin

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Mmm i tried this one a longue time ago , the visuals are great really ,great arts , but well i think it's a decade project with that quality perhaps i'm wrong , don't give up !
 
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Pajonk said:
Is there any nudity and actual sex in this game yet? Last time i've tried it play it there was only talking with the girls in the office and absolutely nothing else. If there is no sexual stuff then change the genre because it says "anal sex" and "vaginal sex".
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sex? once with granny (rapeish scene). nudity? some.
 
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Ech

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@JoeBanks

As a reader, I can appreciate a good slow burn and having the girls not instantly fall to their knees for 5 points. However, a slow burn only really works when the pay off is worth that wait. As it is now, there is no pay off yet and that probably frustrates a lot of players. That frustration is only compounded when this game has been in "development" for over two years. From the players perspective, they've been playing this game for two years, and the only pay off they've gotten is weird rape sex with a 62-year-old (Assuming this is Harry's 7th year) and a photo of "not Daphne."

A decent story in a porn game is hard to come by, especially when the majority of players don't care one way or the other for it. However, until we get to the meat of the game where we can really corrupt the girls you need something to titillate and tease us, so we want to keep playing chapter to chapter and update to update. It doesn't need to be instant gratification. A girl in a compromising position here, a spell gone wrong there, walking in on Pansy getting tentacle fucked by the Whomping Willow over there. Make us want to go to the next chapter because right now it all seems like pointless filler until our not really likable protagonist gets his head out of his ass.

But you guys are the ones making 5k a month, so what the fuck do I know?

Also, the stories grammar could use some work. I am available for hire.
 
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Bigeggs

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What's the deal about swimsuit solution? I'm not understand it.

Lastest version have walkthrough?
 
Shadow Song

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sub-c said:
I have to break my comment silence for this one, so congratulations are in order. This adult themed game has been in development for over 2 years and all it has to show for that is one scene and one new lewd still you just mentioned. Of course, the game looks fantastic and the writing seems good-ish but I think all the comments in this thread are completely justified based on what they already know and can already see, which to be fair isn't much in what they want or what I want for that matter.

I used to signed up to patreon for this, after Akabur's game got me in the mood for "witches and wizards" porn styled games and it was nothing but a let down for the first 7 months and I feel like an idiot for having wasted that money for nothing that could have gone to another dev who tries hard to pump out updates every month with new content that the people want. To simply believe people expected this to be a "quick sex game" is not only an insult to anyone who pays money to this patreon but also a statement on how someone thinks they know what their consumers want when in fact they're just swindling people and layering their game with pretty visuals to keep people interested until the game crashes and burns into nothing but a huge waste of time due to internal dev team struggle which we're all well aware of happening with other popular games.

Not everyone here is an entitled, h-game stealing plebian. Some of us know what we're talking about and can tell just when something doesn't feel right and with this game, well you don't even have to look at it for that long to know that the speed of the updates and the actual content being applied each time the game does get updated is not worth the $5k a month being pumped into the game.

The game itself has already made the point many times over that it's not for anyone.
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Well Said
 
JoeBanks

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Ech said:
@JoeBanks

As a reader, I can appreciate a good slow burn and having the girls not instantly fall to their knees for 5 points. However, a slow burn only really works when the pay off is worth that wait. As it is now, there is no pay off yet and that probably frustrates a lot of players. That frustration is only compounded when this game has been in "development" for over two years. From the players perspective, they've been playing this game for two years, and the only pay off they've gotten is weird rape sex with a 62-year-old (Assuming this is Harry's 7th year) and a photo of "not Daphne."

A decent story in a porn game is hard to come by, especially when the majority of players don't care one way or the other for it. However, until we get to the meat of the game where we can really corrupt the girls you need something to titillate and tease us, so we want to keep playing chapter to chapter and update to update. It doesn't need to be instant gratification. A girl in a compromising position here, a spell gone wrong there, walking in on Pansy getting tentacle fucked by the Whomping Willow over there. Make us want to go to the next chapter because right now it all seems like pointless filler until our not really likable protagonist gets his head out of his ass.

But you guys are the ones making 5k a month, so what the fuck do I know?

Also, the stories grammar could use some work. I am available for hire.
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This is probably the most valid thing stated, and while there is a ton of grammar to fix, is it worth it when people just scroll through the mountains of text? I would personally like to push to get content out the door along with SIMPLIFYING things. Actually the team does understand this and it's our goal for 0.2F. I will be working on more hinting, more simplicity and things making sense. I don't think anyone who has played the game thinks that it's simple or easy to understand (especially this release). Let us work on the crappiest parts first. Even if we push content and you can't get to it, there's zero point.

Also, when that comedian said if he sees a helicopter in a tree, he can easily say, "The pilot fucked up", he was right. So you know just as much as anyone since the helicopter is in the tree.
 
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good to see some nsfw stuff but if i scroll back to page 1, first post was in sept 2016 im not sure if this was a parallel project at that point but like 2 years and no sex is idk man painfully slow. the game feels too complicated for a new player (me i ended up using unren lol) theres a lot of girls and at this pace i think its gonna take 1 year to fuck each xD cause the artist can only draw so much and inorder to make story feel not rushed he gotta make a lot of no fuck art. i think the game needs to pick up pace cause eventually people is gonna start losing interest. harem hotel guy started after this and is already at i guess 6k + . harry potter universe has lot of fans if this game gets less complex and picks up pace not outright sex but some minor nsfw stuff thats repeatable and build up that way, this could end up in most popular list.
 
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how could I pass swimsuit part ? I collected all swimsuits but I couldnt manage to pass more :S and how can I go prefect meeting ?
 
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