@JoeBanks
As a reader, I can appreciate a good slow burn and having the girls not instantly fall to their knees for 5 points. However, a slow burn only really works when the pay off is worth that wait. As it is now, there is no pay off yet and that probably frustrates a lot of players. That frustration is only compounded when this game has been in "development" for over two years. From the players perspective, they've been playing this game for two years, and the only pay off they've gotten is weird rape sex with a 62-year-old (Assuming this is Harry's 7th year) and a photo of "not Daphne."
A decent story in a porn game is hard to come by, especially when the majority of players don't care one way or the other for it. However, until we get to the meat of the game where we can really corrupt the girls you need something to titillate and tease us, so we
want to keep playing chapter to chapter and update to update. It doesn't need to be instant gratification. A girl in a compromising position here, a spell gone wrong there, walking in on Pansy getting tentacle fucked by the Whomping Willow over there. Make us want to go to the next chapter because right now it all seems like pointless filler until our not really likable protagonist gets his head out of his ass.
But you guys are the ones making 5k a month, so what the fuck do I know?
Also, the stories grammar could use some work. I am available for hire.