VN Ren'Py Innocent Witches [v0.12.1 A Fix1] [Sad Crab]

[et5482015]

0.3B In the evening, the bulletin board is missing an icon.

Hermione is the main line:
Hermione had a good impression before flying to the tower next to the office, but after performing the office tower task, is it normal for Hermione's goodwill to return to zero? Still wrong!

Susan's surprise could have earned a good impression, but after the Ginny mission, the fifth chapter is gone. Is it normal or wrong?

The part of the gift is not working properly, but when I use Hermione as the main line, I can use a small game to increase the sensitivity, whether it is less effective for the gift, or whether the gift can have different scene graphs, such as Like the display of the announcement, there is a tentacles in Christmas, or is it a cake in the room?

In addition, the degree of goodness of the drop is normal (in the fifth chapter), like a day or two did not play with the game, but Daphne also has to guess the color every day, otherwise it will be good

In the fifth chapter, when Marcus and Snape were drinking, they talked about pharmacy. Is the pharmacy practical in that chapter?

When is Marcus a professor? Or is it a professor when it is the end?

In addition, when Professor Marcus is a professor, there will be scenes for teaching courses, as well as special after-school tutoring for the heroine?

The first few chapters are all in a pile, but I hope that the later chapters are not over, and people will feel that many things are not explained.

 

[Butcer]

Why the fuck did the orignal dev add so much fucking fluff text? Jesus christ

 

[LiefdeJood]

Can you add some animations in? The Hermi puzzle is fine imo, but your reward.. The way she just has her breasts in her arms is just stupid. You guys love to tease, why not make her turn around and even have a thought bubble that says '' I can't believe I'm doing this? ''. Everything better than what it is now. More animations! More of that beautiful art!

It's just a shame that she just ''appears'' with her breasts covered like that without any prior animation.

 

[Butcer]

A shame such great artwork was wasted on this peace of shit game

 

[yamadakun]

Can you add some animations in? The Hermi puzzle is fine imo, but your reward.. The way she just has her breasts in her arms is just stupid. You guys love to tease, why not make her turn around and even have a thought bubble that says '' I can't believe I'm doing this? ''. Everything better than what it is now. More animations! More of that beautiful art!

It's just a shame that she just ''appears'' with her breasts covered like that without any prior animation.

+1

 

[ggermanus]

Sorry, but I have bugs in the 4th act. Version of the latter. With Severus it is impossible to discuss the elders. You can't take the broom (gift table). Quests not performed at all as to talk with Severus about the reports - it is impossible (did everything according to the walkthrough).
Attach a working save of the 4th Chapter, thank you!

 

[beefenstein]

There is legit so much text I want to cut out but with the skip to chapter selection, I am avoiding it atm until we get some real content rolling and all learn to work with my time lines. I want to speed up the releases, like I stated. I don't like delays at all.

Personally, I'm of two minds about cutting text. One of the reasons I'm backing this game on Patreon for, beside the great art, is that it's attempting to be something more than your average porn game. In other words, it has a story, humor and personality. So I'm slightly dreading that cutting down on the amount of text in the game will take away some of that.

I haven't played the 0.3B version yet, as I made a decision to wait until there was something more substantial to play, but I'll still say that I'm hoping there'd still be plenty of text, but much of it should be dialogue with the girls. IOW, the "corruption" part.

 

[JoeBanks]

Personally, I'm of two minds about cutting text. One of the reasons I'm backing this game on Patreon for, beside the great art, is that it's attempting to be something more than your average porn game. In other words, it has a story, humor and personality. So I'm slightly dreading that cutting down on the amount of text in the game will take away some of that.

I haven't played the 0.3B version yet, as I made a decision to wait until there was something more substantial to play, but I'll still say that I'm hoping there'd still be plenty of text, but much of it should be dialogue with the girls. IOW, the "corruption" part.

I want a toggle option for it, one where the text just is much shorter without so much exposition and the original. While I do not want to eliminate a good story, the fact you have to read 500+ lines in a straight dialogue window is insane to me. If there were multiple interactions and it was broken apart, IE, you lead yourself through the story, then the same 500 lines would seem interactive and more engaging. I would prefer the player *wants* to read the story than being forced to. And while that is the goal, I do not feel it's been achieved, at least not the way I would hope. And while I have done vast edits, tried to make it funny, that doesn't remove the fact it's not an interactive read. So when I say I want to remove the text wall, I mean the static read of 500 lines that may not even add to the plot. As well, for those who simply don't want to read, a TLDR; version with just a couple lines pointing out the next objective would suffice to me. It wouldn't eliminate all text, but abbreviate it.

A prime example, all Ginny texts were written by me. It's not a hard read, it doesn't take all day and you always understand what the next thing to do is.

Almost no one asks questions about her portion of the game.

 

[JoeBanks]

Sorry, but I have bugs in the 4th act. Version of the latter. With Severus it is impossible to discuss the elders. You can't take the broom (gift table). Quests not performed at all as to talk with Severus about the reports - it is impossible (did everything according to the walkthrough).
Attach a working save of the 4th Chapter, thank you!

Hotfix is coming. It should be posted tomorrow (for patreons), I will assume it will be leaked quickly as well (not by me, sorry).

Forewarning, during testing the hotfix experiences critical bugs with previous saves... so a version change will be made. I will be providing a save with all max stats again... (when I post it here just depends on when it's leaked)

I would like to clarify my personal opinion, while I will not leak the game myself, I do not have any ill will to those who do choose to play leaks, we will still support you in discord and help. I will also not hold such save files hostage after there has been a leak.

 

[shadowjettj13]

Cooldown is a week I believe.

Thanks!

 

[Josh M Spicer]

the fact you guys have not caught on to the patreon drag it out scam in 3 years is beyond me lol

"oh we have new leadership" lol you people are so dumb

At least this "leader" actually talks to us and explains what's going on instead of throwing it away as "it's coming" or whatever other bullshit excuse they bring up.

And I would certainly say getting a new leader that's shown actual legitimate progress so far is worth sticking around for at least a bit.

 

[ggermanus]

Hotfix is coming. It should be posted tomorrow (for patreons), I will assume it will be leaked quickly as well (not by me, sorry).

Forewarning, during testing the hotfix experiences critical bugs with previous saves... so a version change will be made. I will be providing a save with all max stats again... (when I post it here just depends on when it's leaked)

I would like to clarify my personal opinion, while I will not leak the game myself, I do not have any ill will to those who do choose to play leaks, we will still support you in discord and help. I will also not hold such save files hostage after there has been a leak.

I supported your game for half a year. No significant progress. People make 2 thousand renders in 2 months, without critical bugs, and your team, having huge resources, slowly moves like a snail. Don't want to throw stones in the garden, just in my understanding is a slap in the face to cartridges that or given you a salary. Sorry!

 

[rubendm1995]

There are some nude scenes yet or still the same old boring shit

 

[kitsunedawn]

I have been playing this game for a while, and it's on my list of potentially awesome games. The dialogue is a bit stilted or forced at times, and the spelling gets wonky; but I can live with that. Especially as, some have told me, the developers might not have english as a first language.

With that in mind though, there's a couple things wrong with the game. Wrong as in, they could have been done better, or maybe it's something to consider.

1.) The girls shouldn't be 'easy' per se, but there should be some kind of option at least early on, to get around the IMVOIS/VOIS with one or more of them. It doesn't have to be sex, per se, but maybe a chance through various dialogue options to put the fact that he's a mediwizard to use. Something like that would keep player's attention, but it doesn't have to be "hey, let's fuck".

2.) Even with hints, the game is very vague on key points. Some of that vagueness is understandable, and warranted, but most of it just makes things very confusing and frustrating. For example, consider if you will the catalogue needed to progress in act/scene 5. There's no real instruction on how the player goes about getting it, and if you skip to that point, good luck in figuring out what you're supposed to (or likely should already have) know to get it. There are other little eccentricities of the game that play into this. Such as having to talk with the painting, then back to the hat, then try to re-read everything and figure out what the girls want... That probably could be simplified some, but on a first blind playthrough, it's very vague as to how you should progress.

3.) He's not a very good wizard is he? Realistically speaking, you'd expect that he would know a great deal about magic, yet the game seems to suggest that not only does he not, what he does know he's very bad at. It would make things more playable if there was some interaction ability when it comes to magic. Perhaps making it so that the player has another stat they can study, which unlocks (over time) various useful, and fun spells. For example, he studies and gets a one time use of a spell that makes a girl flash him, or hike her skirt, or something. As the spell is one time use, to re use it the player then has to study the specific spell. That or put it on a long cool down. Either works. By breaking away from the existing stats, you open up the possibility for new play through. Imagine if you will, using a curse on Daphne that makes her come to his next meeting without any bra on, or panties, or both. Alternatively, imagine a spell that makes hermione suddenly cum while talking with him. Naturally this adds to corruption of the girls in question, but also could add some fun options for the player.

4.) The animation is good, but it seems (at least at a glance) that outside of Susan, all the girls have pretty much the same sized breasts. Variety is the spice of life. They don't all have to be massive, nor should they be flat chested, but the ability to at least see some visible difference would help.

5.) Remember where I said frustrating and vague? Well, in all honesty, sonya really doesn't help. So more functionality there would be great. Something that gives us a reason to bother with her, other than just eye candy.

6.) More options and places to go. Even once you get the ability to get out of the office, you're still limited to only a handful of places. It would be nice and could prove interesting if you could go to Hogsmeade, possibly running into one or more of the girls there. This could add a story point, where the codex rules don't apply, since they're not on the school grounds. So, if your waifu is happy enough, maybe you get to sneak off the grounds and have a bit of fun.

7.) Couple of quality of life things to consider: Having to click everything that you've unlocked in sonya, could be simplified as it's already checked. Unbind skip from a keyboard key. When testing different girls, it got annoying that the skip seemed to work hit and miss, and I had to reach to the keyboard to do it. Most vn's have it where you simply tick "skip" and it does it automatically. Minor bug fixes, and rewrite of text for grammar and spelling errors.

 

[RedPillBlues]

outside of Susan, all the girls have pretty much the same sized breasts. Variety is the spice of life. They don't all have to be massive, nor should they be flat chested, but the ability to at least see some visible difference would help.

The artist draws maybe one picture a month, fuck even with Joes intervention he's only making one scene a month, you really think he cares about breast size lmao?

 

[f951488]

People make 2 thousand renders in 2 months

Renders are entirely different to drawing so this particular comparison is bad. You can buy models that was made by other people (actual effort), you can buy rooms, clothes etc., besides with renders more money = better tech = faster renders. Non of this applying to drawings.

 

[ggermanus]

Renders are entirely different to drawing so this particular comparison is bad. You can buy models that was made by other people (actual effort), you can buy rooms, clothes etc., besides with renders more money = better tech = faster renders. Non of this applying to drawings.

I am a designer. Painted in the early years of 700+ figures per month in the tablet, sent them to "editing". For two months, you can make 300 high-quality drawings. What are you talking about ? If you have 5+ thousand dollars, this process is accelerated twice.

 

[f951488]

I am a designer. Painted in the early years of 700+ figures per month in the tablet, sent them to "editing". For two months, you can make 300 high-quality drawings. What are you talking about ? If you have 5+ thousand dollars, this process is accelerated twice.

You assuming that people can make 5 (10 with $5k+) high quality drawings per day. Yet you started talking about renders, not drawings. And you completely ignored that $5k are split to other people aswell (+fee).
Sorry (not really) but you look like troll who just make things up.

 

[ggermanus]

You assuming that people can make 5 (10 with $5k+) high quality drawings per day. Yet you started talking about renders, not drawings. And you completely ignored that $5k are split to other people aswell (+fee).
Sorry (not really) but you look like troll who just make things up.

1 person can make 10-15 drawings a day, then he sends them to the designer who is engaged in polishing and all. You're just not a creative person.

 

[Alcolaw]

My notes on the current build, as someone whose been following it since the start.

Pros
- HUGE step in the right direction. Finally getting some H-content
- Much less dialogue
- What needs to happen to progress is much more straightfoward and understandable
- Did like being able to chose your waifu
- This chapter is a good next step, but had it have been chapter 2/3 this game would be up there with summertime saga

Con
- Still grind-y as fuck. Is more time than it's worth to get your skills up to progress the story ( i just abandoned it)

Suggestions

You can probably condense the first 4 chapters into 2. Chapter 1 could just be coming to hogwarts and meeting everyone then banging mcgonigal. chapter 2 could just be befriending snape, learning the office interface and stealing the swimsuits (that could also be made simpler if you take out it being time dependent).

Cutting out a lot of work, I know, but as Kurt Vonnegut said; a step backward, after making a wrong turn, is a step in the right direction