*snip*
Now STOP!
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"She is now afraid" is a bit rigid for conversational English. "Now she is afraid" or just "Now she's afraid" is more natural. I'm also not sure what Sammy means by this statement. Is she scared to leave the house? Was his mom a whore, hence "staying" on the streets? I feel like there was something in the scene with their confrontation about her being a hypocrite...
Both the period and comma should be removed.
Just missing a period at the end.