1. I love TS!
But this ugly TS made me to delete this game instantly! DUUUUDE! I had nightmares!
But this ugly TS made me to delete this game instantly! DUUUUDE! I had nightmares!
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i myself don't mind the futa mother or her nose only if we have the we can chose whos going to be bottom and whos top. which is a problem i see for most games that have futa with a male mc. it ether he avoids or becomes a sub, no in between. so hope to see different in this one.
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Under the Shell
You need an editor to go over your text and offer corrections. There are a number of dialogues where you've messed up the pronouns.
You also need to decide if you're redundantly putting the speaker's name into the text or not, you're really inconsistent about that and MC's dialogues don't even have the MC's name on them part of the time.
Also, maybe rename the mothers so they aren't Amanda and Ashley, as it's way too easy to not track which is which when their names are that similar.
You need an editor to go over your text and offer corrections. There are a number of dialogues where you've messed up the pronouns.
You also need to decide if you're redundantly putting the speaker's name into the text or not, you're really inconsistent about that and MC's dialogues don't even have the MC's name on them part of the time.
That text is just all the more laughable with the poor English of the game so far
Also, maybe rename the mothers so they aren't Amanda and Ashley, as it's way too easy to not track which is which when their names are that similar.
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Having quiz questions that 95% of people wont know seems kinda.....eh.
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The source isn't compiled so it's pretty easy to find the answers in chapter2.rpy
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Someone posted them in the thread, point more being that having the subject matter it's about be so obscure that most people will somehow have to look it up seems a bit pointless.
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LOL Thanks for this. I literally only got one question right, and it was the single question I had looked up (The number of syllables )
I managed to go 0 for 9 on the rest of them.
Thats because most people who are into futa are into the dick. So of course in most games either you're gonna be doing stuff with the dick or nothing at all.
The people who are into futa but don't want to mess with the dick are a pretty big minority
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That...seems odd if they aren't into the dick why are they into futa? Isn't that the point?
Well, people have their own fetishes so I'm not surprised they exist, I'm just saying I'm also not surprised they don't get catered to very often
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It should be a review, but it isn't:
All in all a rather disappointing experience, the only good part is that all that is fixable. It is apparent that the Dev is new to all this, so, rough start. Will check later updates to see if it has some improvement.
Hey, no hate, just being honest and frank.
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All in all a rather disappointing experience, the only good part is that all that is fixable. It is apparent that the Dev is new to all this, so, rough start. Will check later updates to see if it has some improvement.
Hey, no hate, just being honest and frank.
Peace
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excited to see true trans-representation in a realistic manner in this game. Hope we can shun himTBH, there are some scary-looking characters in this game that I don't think I ever dare to see naked.
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Man, it's supposed to be christmas time not halloween...
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the engrish isnt bad but dev, you seriously need to fix the dialogues, way too many dialogue lines are attributed to the wrong character.
edit: also, could consider doing the internal dialogues/thoughts in italics so you know if mc is being a crazy person talking to himself or not
edit: also, could consider doing the internal dialogues/thoughts in italics so you know if mc is being a crazy person talking to himself or not
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Bug
Some of the pics at the Bus Stop have a small White line across your face? Also other pics are a little too dark to see clearly.
I still like the game and hope you don't change the Futa she looks cool
Some of the pics at the Bus Stop have a small White line across your face? Also other pics are a little too dark to see clearly.
I still like the game and hope you don't change the Futa she looks cool