VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.12.3] [Nyx]

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Raziel_8

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jimbro said:
So it is not "drama for drama" sake, but bad (unclear) storytelling ? As it should be obvious that Elena is staying away from MC at first (Layla called/implied dibs ) ? Also Nyx changed story so many times, the version I played/remembered Layla was first, Elena came later ( and was not even an option at the time). So, game (should)play out as Layla came first, you get to hang out with Elena because of Layla, like her and now have a choice to break Laylas hearth to continue to Elena. If that is not clear Nyx needs to rework that part of story (again!)...
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What does it matter if you hang out with Elena because Layla is the one who invites the MC ?
There is no romance going on at that point, why would Layla being interested in the MC stop the MC (player) to keep it friendly with her and instead go for Elena ?
The MC has feelings/interest for the girls we decide to.

Also Elena isn't staying away from the MC, you get the choice to spend time with Elena alone, like helping her with the cheer training at her home.

By the time the training camp happens you had time to spend time with Elena, you can reject Layla up to this point without breaking her heart and still be good friends with her...

No, it is drama for drama's sake.
If Nyx wanted to she could have given the choice to go for Elena at various points in the story, but she locks her behind Layla for drama.
She gives you the choice to go for Elena only at the worst possible time, not like when you were at the beach with Elena and she makes it pretty clear she is interested in the MC, it's obviously done for drama.
 
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Raziel_8 said:
What does it matter if you hang out with Elena because Layla is the one who invites the MC ?
There is no romance going on at that point, why would Layla being interested in the MC stop the MC (player) to keep it friendly with her and instead go for Elena ?
The MC has feelings/interest for the girls we decide to.

Also Elena isn't staying away from the MC, you get the choice to spend time with Elena alone, like helping her with the cheer training at her home.

By the time the training camp happens you had time to spend time with Elena, you can reject Layla up to this point without breaking her heart and still be good friends with her...

No, it is drama for drama's sake.
If Nyx wanted to she could have given the choice to go for Elena at various points in the story, but she locks her behind Layla for drama.
She gives you the choice to go for Elena only at the worst possible time, not like when you were at the beach with Elena and she makes it pretty clear she is interested in the MC, it's obviously done for drama.
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OK. What would your preffered solution be. Better reason for Elena to be behind Layla drama ( better writing ), or Elena as another option that has no conflicts with other parts of the story ? Or even have threesome with Layla and Elena as even better solution ?
 
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I hope that whenever they rework the renders for pool/beach scenes they update the wet hair models as well cause man, it looks rough.

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Poor MC dives in to the water and comes up with dry frizzy and somewhat thinning hair.
 
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jimbro said:
OK. What would your preffered solution be. Better reason for Elena to be behind Layla drama ( better writing ), or Elena as another option that has no conflicts with other parts of the story ? Or even have threesome with Layla and Elena as even better solution ?
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How about simply giving the players the choice to pursue Elena without being forced on Laylas love path, would be my favorite solution.
Makes sense story wise, you can still have conflicts, you can still cheat on her or do whatever you want to do, like you can create drama on any other path.

And while a threesome would be nice, it wouldn't make much sense if you aren't on a Layla path.

A good ingame reason as to why the MC isn't even considering pursuing Elena and you aren't given a choice would work too, but there just isn't any as the story is now.

You could have done it in a way where the MC only meets Elena when you are already in a relationship with Layla, in that case i'd agree with your earlier post, such things happen.
Or a reason which would go completely against the MC's character/conviction, as an other example.
 
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HeartBreakerGaming said:
that kinda sucks, i hope that changes in the future, because i hate having to break layla's heart!
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possibly not and it becomes 3some ending.

Raziel_8 said:
Yes it sucks and unlikely to chance, Nyx loves her drama for drama's sake.
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jimbro said:
How is that "drama for drama sake" ? Or is it something you just type but have no idea what it means ?
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well mc and alexis having same father (aka incest) and maybe 1 or 2 other girls being mc's halfsiblings. and rest.

minibaer12 said:
How do you think I feel in the ASP (Alexis secret path)? I HAVE to take Layla's virginity to move forward in the path, whether I want to or not!
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poor baby. :p
 
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Raziel_8 said:
How about simply giving the players the choice to pursue Elena without being forced on Laylas love path, would be my favorite solution.
Makes sense story wise, you can still have conflicts, you can still cheat on her or do whatever you want to do, like you can create drama on any other path.

And while a threesome would be nice, it wouldn't make much sense if you aren't on a Layla path.

A good ingame reason as to why the MC isn't even considering pursuing Elena and you aren't given a choice would work too, but there just isn't any as the story is now.

You could have done it in a way where the MC only meets Elena when you are already in a relationship with Layla, in that case i'd agree with your earlier post, such things happen.
Or a reason which would go completely against the MC's character/conviction, as an other example.
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You deserve this man, I am gonna doxx you. ;)

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Beatlezz12 said:
I still have Nikki and Gabi as my side chick. :HideThePain:
I hate when this happens. Now I gotta play the game 5 times to get a happy ending with each of the 5 characters I'm in love with lmao.
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blame it on nyx. and nyx is getting good laughs on your torment.
 
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