playing this game for fapping on sex scene is reductive, drama and dialogues are the main plus of this game, I like Lexi for she being her not for Sex scenes.
This game is maybe the most well written I ever played
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This game is maybe the most well written I ever played
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I can agree with you 100% on that that's why this is my #1 game I think or at least top 3.
Wish I could say the same, but these last couple of updates... the cracks are starting to show. If I were Nyx I'd take some time to polish & clean things up before going further and before the game gets out of her hands. Oh well, nothing to do except hope for the best I suppose...
Still, I do have Intertwined on my top 10 "must plays", despite all its flaws, which ain't an easy feat, all things considered.
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Honestly for me where it shines is it's characters which is why it's in top 3 instead of top 10 but I do think story overall is just average or slightly above but I started on 10.5 so the cracks aren't showing that bad for me.Wish I could say the same, but these last couple of updates... the cracks are starting to show. If I were Nyx I'd take some time to polish & clean things up before going further and before the game gets out of her hands. Oh well, nothing to do except hope for the best I suppose...
Still, I do have Intertwined on my top 10 "must plays", despite all its flaws, which ain't an easy feat, all things considered.
Oh yeah, it's super well written overall... I mean, listen, it's basically like one of those dumb CW teen drama shows, but that's kinda what I like about it and what makes it unique...
That said, there ARE other games with amazing characters & writing that are a bit more cohesive and focused (plus they have better production overall), but in terms of the type of thing Nyx is doing, she's probably the best in that regard, but she really needs to tighten the ship, because it could go to shit easily at this point.
I think this game has to end, another maximum 4 chapters and stop otherwise the risk of screwing up like a lot of beautiful games screwed by the will of money is high
hmmm... nah I think it can go on for quite a while still, but more than anything, it needs to have a solid plan moving forward... right now it feels a bit aimless.
Like, again, take the beach scene, it's a MASSIVE wasted opportunity, that scene could've and should've led to a lot of longtime coming confrontations between the characters... I mean, the game is called "Intertwined" for a reason, right? the beach scene had a ton of potential to really start moving things forward within the various PTs, whether it's on the Erynn PT, the Alexis one(s), the Tori one, the Iris one, the Val one, etc... heck, just the lack of interaction between MC & his rival is a wasted opportunity.
So in the end, while I didn't think this update was bad or short by anymeans, it did feel rushed and truncated... so that's the tpye of thing the game needs to avoid going forward... that and some other writing issues. When you have so much branching you need to be careful and have an air tight plan, otherwise this is what happens and the game starts feeling like the Alexis & Layla show, where the other branches/PTs start feeling not worth the time.
And I dunno, maybe it's just me, but I think that could become an issue.
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Ah my bad, wrong shirt.That's not the shirt I'm talking about, it's the ugly blue one with stripes:
She's told it was a present and doesn't care... And no dude, there's nothing "normal" about destroying someone else's shit, under ANY circumstance... and buying you a new one is not an excuse either, it's still symptomatic of a classic control freak... SHE decides which shirt you're gonna wear and which you won't.
Completely forgot about that scene as it didn't bothered me, was happy to get rid of that ugly shirt.
Still jealous doesn't make much sense, she hates the shirt (rightfully it's ugly as fuck) and because her ex had the same iirc, had nothing to do with Erynn.
And while ripping it is rude yeah, if your gf/wife asking you to not wear something/or to wear something makes her a control freak...oh boy
I can guarantee you that were the roles reversed this most certainly would be seen as controlling. Not only that but it would probably be plastered all over TikTok.And while ripping it is rude yeah, if your gf/wife asking you to not wear something/or to wear something makes her a control freak...oh boy
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If we were going to dinner or some kind of date sure I wont call that a control freak if it is something they just dont like but something casual or when you are not out with id probally diagree and still listen to said GFAnd while ripping it is rude yeah, if your gf/wife asking you to not wear something/or to wear something makes her a control freak...oh boy
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I mean, the MC looks just dumb with that hat. Also when were they in fashion...some 20 years ago with the idiots that wanted to be the cool kids and wannabe rapper, i would have been more bothered if Alexis (and Emily) wouldn't have said that it looks dumb.
But the whole scene to be angry about her comment feels just so out of place and made you feel really stupit.
I wouldn't even choose this if want to piss off Alexis (and i have fun doing that).
Was likely the worst written scene in the game so far.
Yeah, wouldn't be surprised at all if John is the one which get's the happy ending with a Emily/Melissa throuple, while the MC fails miserably with Layla/ElenaThe John is everything the MC was supposed to be, cool, winning his fights and inside Melissa
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This update was good, actually pretty incredible if you are a Layla fan, decent if you are Erynn or Iris (provided you got the beach scene).
Like someone said a few pages back, this game needs to start solving the problems it has setup rather than dropping more issues on our heads...
The beach scene feels like a waste, first because it's unreasonably gated(a scene with so many LIs, tied to a single girl), second because no matter what you do there things remain status quo, it doesn't move things in any significant way...
To actually break status quo you need to act like a total douche in a dumb scene that comes, literally, 3 minutes after leaving the beach... so that was a wasted opportunity, passed on the perfect opportunity for conflict only to add it later in a hamfisted way.
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Yeah I agree at first i was really disappointed after playimng solo Erynn with how it ended but after playing Lexi I calmed down and was more or less happy , still need to play start to finish Layla tho havent done that one yet as I always saw her as friend over LI
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I don't mind, makes the character feels alive and luckily you can just end the relationship.
Trying to clean and sanitize everyone makes the medium boring as a TV show catering to this same people you cited.
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If you mean Navarro, the sports agent, then yes, it could be a possibility, but considering how nice he acted toward the MC when they talked at Dylan's bar and the fact that the MC felt "nervous" when he saw Navarro at the track and field competition, I'd say he's MC's real dad.
Would be funny AF to see that happen. I'd also love to see Melissa pop up too, for the lolz. Imagine how that conversation's gonna play out.
Melissa is obviously the best choice here, for obvious reasons.
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well he is most certainly not a pro or ex-pro basketball player... Lexi or Layla (don't remember which) told MC he played in college but didn't go pro after for some reason
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Yeah bro, the writing made Lexi about sex and fixation in Mc. Problem is she changed and the Dev probably without "balls" pun intended stopped her progression.
If the case for Lexi was a sexual beast and totally submissive to her desire.
She needed to do more, almost to much during sex. In a way to make Mc starstruck with her willingness to pleasure him.
Because they made her this way. Don't do a 180 and then kick the ball rolling with Erynn sweet and caring. Obviously the drama would be a division about love and passion. he could be attracted to both in different styles. But alas, just my point.
And for the dude talking about shit sex scenes, bro this game is for the drama. The sex is a spice. Not the main dish.
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Just like any spice ever immagined, IT GOES INTO THE MAIN DISH BEFORE DEVOURING IT!
lEXI IS ALL ABOUT CASUAL SEX THEN THE DATING AND THEN THE SERIOUS MEET HER MAMA AND HER SIS - OBVIOUS PROGRESSION TO MARRIAGE - GO MARRY, GAMER!
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Chuckle. Well if marriage is end game for Lexi she better start sucking more dick and confidently say, no other girl is kinky like me.