dolfe67

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Your only loophole: it’s not really a 16-year-old boy. It’s CGI. The only thing that makes him 16 is saying he’s 16. Rewrite a few lines of code and now he’s 18. Rewrite em again and now he’s 78 with a really good cosmetic surgeon and personal trainer. That’s all the difference there is between erotic fiction and piled corn when it’s all CGI: words. No actual 16-year-olds were involved.
I don't think it holds up. Your loli might be a 200yo vampire, she still has a loli body.

Anyway, as is, the game won't pass the Steam verification. Mentionning high school is a big no for them. Saying it's college now is not enough, need to rewrite quite a lot to make sense.
 

xapican

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The loophole is, that event is a memory, and that they're both minors but that is my take, I don't really care about that at all.
 
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cxx

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well both minor aka iris just under 18 and mc just under 15 would be even bigger problem.
 

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I don't think it holds up. Your loli might be a 200yo vampire, she still has a loli body.

Anyway, as is, the game won't pass the Steam verification. Mentionning high school is a big no for them. Saying it's college now is not enough, need to rewrite quite a lot to make sense.
she could remove the flashback scene from the game and just give a shorter verbal summary instead on how they dated, that would probably do it. Not much of an effort tbh
 
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LSC82

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Iris should be 18 there no? She is still in high school at the time
Iris is a high school senior so she can pass as 18.
There's a problem that the MC is repeatedly referred to as 18 now, and his relationship with Iris is repeatedly said by him, Iris and John to have lasted 2 years...

I'm sure most of us were barely paying attention to the boy on screen when there's a blonde with her tits out(i know i wasn't)... but it's still illegal to show an underage boy having sex.

Their first sex scene, that happened before they even had a relationship, is in a tough spot to be explained.
 
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NoParking

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:WaitWhat::WaitWhat: Don't get me wrong, I'm not one of them bois who want incest in this story. If Nyx doesn't want it, I respect her decision, but did you get to the part where Lexi tells him Santiago is her and her sister's dad right after the MC finally made a 9000+ IQ move and deduced the guy's his bio dad ??:unsure: Nyx admitted some haters already reported her for this stuff, that's why I'm asking.



And you should watch your mouth and manners, if you don't have anything constructive to add to this conversation. This isn't the first time you react like this to ppl who don't even reply to you, so I kindly ask you keep your opinions to yourself, if you don't know how to have a polite conversation on a fictional topic or just don't like what somebody posts.



Thought the same thing myself, and it's not me the one who's paranoid, but since she was already reported to Patreon for the big 'revelation' at the end of this update, a lil concern is warranted, I'd say.:unsure:



The blonde girl on the cover playing the guitar, Erynn, MC's childhood friend and LI. Ethan's a complete asshole who wants to pimp her out to all kinds of shady idiots or keep her for himself so he can spite the MC after he fucks her. So far, he's the most hated male character in the game, with the backstabbing idiot Zach coming close, so don't feel bad about taking your anger out on him. The dev even encourages you to go all out on him.;)



Yep, I wholeheartedly agree. Tho we can be a lil creative for once and throw him and Zach in some sort of a gladiator match to the death and see who the last idiot on his feet is at the end of it. The police can tell him a few things about all the benefits of being put in prison for life for murder and being too stupid for his own good as a 'reward' for winning.:sneaky:
Did Ethan succeed in blackmailing her? And did he already made her do things that she's against with?
 

NoParking

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The first time? ohhhh no no noooooo

How about this...just an idea...you play it...find out...then come back and ask anything you're unsure about :sneaky:
Thanks a lot, one last question no rape or anything that involves her body made for her to do from this blackmailing right? And so far no rape or anything happened yet in the game right?
 

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Thanks a lot, one last question no rape or anything that involves her body made for her to do from this blackmailing right? And so far no rape or anything happened yet in the game right?
No rape.

She's been touched against her will but over her clothes, butt grabbing, leg carressing... it doesn't go further than that.
 

Dessolos

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Thanks a lot, one last question no rape or anything that involves her body made for her to do from this blackmailing right? And so far no rape or anything happened yet in the game right?
no and maybe ... Won't spoil anything but if you play her path nothing happens. However if you make a certain choice which she kind of just isnt in the game anymore if you make it. It is implied that she did end up having sex against her will but nothing is shown to the player to confirm or deny it.
 
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no and maybe ... Won't spoil anything but if you play her path nothing happens. However if you make a certain choice which she kind of just isnt in the game anymore if you make it. It is implied that she did end up having sex against her will but nothing is shown to the player to confirm or deny it.
Oh thanks, I always pick all the path in every game I play hahaha
 

Dessolos

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who is the mc;s step sister?
The cliffhanger makes it appear it's Alexis and Layla

( only click this spoiler if you want out of game info that will disprove the cliffhanger) Nyx has said multiple times there won't be any incest, even said so after the update. As well talked to Patron mods and got approved to add it to the game and since incest is against patron yes step sister counts. That mean he doesn't have any step sisters.
 
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PeraDrnda

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No rape.

She's been touched against her will but over her clothes, butt grabbing, leg carressing... it doesn't go further than that.
No rape, but Erynn's acting like she actually was raped, not much sense to me.

Erynn's an escort girl, and IMHO she's doing that very willingly. The deal is escort (touching) for modelling (photo sessions). That's her way of living. She likes attention, she's not ashamed to get naked. Video of her loosing virginity is nothing compared to how low she felt morally.

Also, I'm sick and tired of her being tolerant to sugar daddies, but blueballing MC (making nanometer steps each update).

Nyx is doing very poor job with her character (n).
 

Dessolos

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No rape, but Erynn's acting like she actually was raped, not much sense to me.

Erynn's an escort girl, and IMHO she's doing that very willingly. The deal is escort (touching) for modelling (photo sessions). That's her way of living. She likes attention, she's not ashamed to get naked. Video of her loosing virginity is nothing compared to how low she felt morally.

Also, I'm sick and tired of her being tolerant to sugar daddies, but blueballing MC (making nanometer steps each update).

Nyx is doing very poor job with her character (n).
I wouldn't call being blackmailed to do escort work willingly imo. Maybe her trauma is a bit over the top sometimes I can agree to that much. However I do think it does make sense to me cause of the bad experience she had. but each to their own on the blue balling that's personal preference if you hate it or not. I personally like how slow she is going. Since to me it shows her growth of slowing getting over her trauma and that's one of the main reasons I like slow burn characters with trauma. It's 1/2 of the reason she is my favorite girl on this game and tied for 1st as my favorite AVN LI.
 

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No rape, but Erynn's acting like she actually was raped, not much sense to me.

Erynn's an escort girl, and IMHO she's doing that very willingly. The deal is escort (touching) for modelling (photo sessions). That's her way of living. She likes attention, she's not ashamed to get naked. Video of her loosing virginity is nothing compared to how low she felt morally.

Also, I'm sick and tired of her being tolerant to sugar daddies, but blueballing MC (making nanometer steps each update).

Nyx is doing very poor job with her character (n).
Erynn is a escort because she is getting blackmailed by Ethan, she isnt doing it willingly as you said.
 

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No rape, but Erynn's acting like she actually was raped, not much sense to me.

Erynn's an escort girl, and IMHO she's doing that very willingly. The deal is escort (touching) for modelling (photo sessions). That's her way of living. She likes attention, she's not ashamed to get naked. Video of her loosing virginity is nothing compared to how low she felt morally.

Also, I'm sick and tired of her being tolerant to sugar daddies, but blueballing MC (making nanometer steps each update).

Nyx is doing very poor job with her character (n).
She is being threatened by Ethan with publishing the sextape if she doesn't do what he asks, she isnt confortable being an escort, thats for sure.
 
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