VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

[LSC82]

No rape, but Erynn's acting like she actually was raped, not much sense to me.

Erynn's an escort girl, and IMHO she's doing that very willingly. The deal is escort (touching) for modelling (photo sessions). That's her way of living. She likes attention, she's not ashamed to get naked. Video of her loosing virginity is nothing compared to how low she felt morally.

Also, I'm sick and tired of her being tolerant to sugar daddies, but blueballing MC (making nanometer steps each update).

Nyx is doing very poor job with her character .

As others have said, she's not escorting willingly, she's escorting under blackmail, threats, psychological and (at least sometimes) physical violence.
The touching that happens during escorting is without her consent(and totally different to the touching that happens if she's booked to shoot with a male model, which yes, is a career she chose for herself)... quite clear if you allow her to go inside in this latest update, Ethan caresses her leg, right near her pussy, and that makes her very uncomfortable(and sad).

Did she coming out of HS enjoy the attention and loved to be the most desired girl? Probably... i think most women would love to be in this situation.
But what is happening now is clearly waaaay beyond what she wanted.

The whole experience surrounding her first time left her traumatized and very sex averse... is Nyx "milking" this trauma, blackmail plot and progressing her story in the best way? That's a different question...
But saying she's willing and she enjoys escorting dudes is just wrong.

Oh and she was very much ashamed and uncomfortable to get naked infront of an audience during the photo shoot, she still did it like a pro, but it's not the most comfortable and enjoyable part of her job.

 

[Krepax]

at least they won't wear school uniforms so might pass.

There's another loophole: in some countries if you fail to meet certain grades at the end of the year, you've to repeat the same class again. This is especially true for high schools which are still compulsory to attend but demand a higher level of effort, and for various reasons some students cannot keep up. Just make the mc a 18yrs old who is 2yrs behind and... problem solved.

Another solution is to "shift everyone" 2-3 years forward and make them university students. Maybe just rework some rendering of the 'school' building the make it appear less a high school and more an university and you're done. This gives even more opportunity to play with the age... It's not uncommon for some people to take a sabbatical year or to switch courses of study, thus being a freshman even at 20+ yrs.

 

[TheOneWithThePorn12]

Nyx literally got approval by Patron from what i read, which is why as much as I like the cliffhanger to some extent it loses it's effect on me and feels like it's there for shock value.

Anyone following the story as presented knew it was leaning this way. It loses it affect because we all should have known it was coming.

 

[TheOneWithThePorn12]

I think I played the update more than you buddy. And I assure you, it's bullshit, just like other revelations before this. MC is not related to Lexi or Layla.

Its supposed to be a shock to the MC. Guy is all twisted up with all this shit happening to him at the same time. We know they arent related as Santiago is aware that Emily lives in the city and Adrianna knows her as well, if there was a biological factor at play here it would be out in the open by either Adrianna as i have to assume she knows Santiago has a kid with Emily.

This has always been written like a soap opera.

I have never watched a soap where i didnt know where the plot was heading. Can still be interesting.

 

[minibaer12]

Its supposed to be a shock to the MC. Guy is all twisted up with all this shit happening to him at the same time. We know they arent related as Santiago is aware that Emily lives in the city and Adrianna knows her as well, if there was a biological factor at play here it would be out in the open by either Adrianna as i have to assume she knows Santiago has a kid with Emily.

This has always been written like a soap opera.

I have never watched a soap where i didnt know where the plot was heading. Can still be interesting.

Man, man... it's quite clear. Santiago is MC's bio-father and he is her stepfather to Alexis and possibly also to Layla.

Or there is a second Santiago.

Ergo: no incest!!!!

 

[Moon Blaster]

Man, man... it's quite clear. Santiago is MC's bio-father and he is her stepfather to Alexis and possibly also to Layla.

Or there is a second Santiago.

Ergo: no incest!!!!

yeah those were the possibilities i reached as well , there is a third one tho.
If there is no incest either Santiago is MC father but as been married with Layla and Alexis mother since they were kids and its their step father ( they might not know about it tho ) .
Or there were two Santiago that knew MC mom
Or its the same Santiago but he is not the MC father ( MC mom thinks he is because they are similar and because it was the previous man she dated supposedly but maybe he isn't)

 

[Dessolos]

Anyone following the story as presented knew it was leaning this way. It loses it affect because we all should have known it was coming.

Honestly it brought me by surprise a bit because I assume Zo is their father still do. So I did not expect that cliffhanger even if it's just for shock value. I thought the cliffhanger was going to be Ethan , John or Erynn related.

 

[LSC82]

yeah those were the possibilities i reached as well , there is a third one tho.
If there is no incest either Santiago is MC father but as been married with Layla and Alexis mother since they were kids and its their step father ( they might not know about it tho ) .
Or there were two Santiago that knew MC mom
Or its the same Santiago but he is not the MC father ( MC mom thinks he is because they are similar and because it was the previous man she dated supposedly but maybe he isn't)

They must know, they carry his name, i'm sure at some point Layla must've questioned why her dad has a different surname to her...
And Alexis was 3 years old when Layla was born, that's enough to recognize your dad isn't it?
Even if the guy died while she was 3 still and Santiago(funeral crasher ) stepped right in she must've taken notice.

 

[minibaer12]

Honestly it brought me by surprise a bit because I assume Zo is their father still do. So I did not expect that cliffhanger even if it's just for shock value. I thought the cliffhanger was going to be Ethan , John or Erynn related.

Posted on January 27th

I'm going more in this direction: The MC meets his father in the bar. You only see him from behind and the MC calls out: "Hi, Dad"

... and we'll have the next half or three quarters or more to wonder who it could be!

and almost everything happened

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Or its the same Santiago but he is not the MC father ( MC mom thinks he is because they are similar and because it was the previous man she dated supposedly but maybe he isn't)

I repeat my thoughts about this, Santi is not the father of MC and Emily knew about it. If what I am guessing correct then Andres is the father and Emily used the pregnancy for getting Santi back.

Why do I think this way while we may have less cynical possibilities? Easy, because this path is the one with most drama filled.

 

[minibaer12]

I repeat my thoughts about this, Santi is not the father of MC and Emily knew about it. If what I am guessing correct then Andres is the father and Emily used the pregnancy for getting Santi back.

Why do I think this way while we may have less cynical possibilities? Easy, because this path is the one with most drama filled.

mistake, there is another variant that is even more explosive than your assumption and I have already posted it

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

mistake, there is another variant that is even more explosive than your assumption and I have already posted it

I may have missed it or do not remember it. What was it again?

 

[LSC82]

I repeat my thoughts about this, Santi is not the father of MC and Emily knew about it. If what I am guessing correct then Andres is the father and Emily used the pregnancy for getting Santi back.

Why do I think this way while we may have less cynical possibilities? Easy, because this path is the one with most drama filled.

I can get behind the idea that she tried this to tie Santiago up, but i still find hard to believe that she would stick by this lie for 18 years and tell it to her own kid after all this time...
It's too crazy even for Intertwined.

 

[Moon Blaster]

mistake, there is another variant that is even more explosive than your assumption and I have already posted it

what was the other option? because i might have missed it as well

 

[minibaer12]

I may have missed it or do not remember it. What was it again?

what was the other option? because i might have missed it as well

Well, I don't agree with all the theories about who MC's biological father is. I've had a stupid suspicion for a long time.

And since Nyx posted that we were completely wrong about the theories, my fears have become even greater. I definitely won't spoil it. But:
1. it would hit like a bomb
2. it would fit into the overall context
3. the issue of incest would be off the table once and for all
4. would explain many scenes
5. and create lots of new problems (more drama!)

Someone once posted here what NyxValeria posted about this on Discord. I just can't find this post anymore...

Defenestrator.for.traitor Do you remember?

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Someone once posted here what NyxValeria posted about this on Discord. I just can't find this post anymore...

it does not say much, innit?

I don't remember tbh, most likely Tremonia posted it though. I can try to find it in discord but Nyx is not a trustworthy source.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

An example of Nyx being not trustworthy of her info

 

[Candy Suxx]

At this point I wouldn't be surprised if it is later shown that Santiago, John and Andres are long lost brothers and Andres also happens to be the father of Valeria and Elena, John being father of Erynn as well as Cara and Nikki, Santiago is alGabi being sister of Emily, All the girls are basically MC's sister while all the ladies are his aunts and stepmoms. Even Ethan ends being MC's brother.
All of them meet and decide to live together as ONE BIG FKIN SWEET HOME ALBAMA FAMILY.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

At this point I wouldn't be surprised if it is later shown that Santiago, John and Andres are long lost brothers and Andres also happens to be the father of Valeria and Elena, John being father of Erynn as well as Cara and Nikki, Santiago is alGabi being sister of Emily, All the girls are basically MC's sister while all the ladies are his aunts and stepmoms. Even Ethan ends being MC's brother.
All of them meet and decide to live together as ONE BIG FKIN SWEET HOME ALBAMA FAMILY.

The thing is there would be no incest in the game so that would not work either. That is the debacle we are in, either Alexis was going to tell he is my dad's friend and cut short which is cheap way to create cliffhanger or gonna retcon heavily because neither Santi being her dad or stepdad can be in the game if Santi is also MC's biodad because either case would be incest.

 

[valbitterb]

It's too crazy even for Intertwined.