VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[valbitterb]

This MC does drive me crazy sometimes, what do you mean nothing?! "I like you too, alot." It's really not hard. I wish that we were given options as the player at times like this.

I like you too a lot would be one thing to say or something along the lines of ...

Uuhhhh, where to sign to give my soul to her?

Or

"My bounty is as boundless as the sea thy bosom,
My I love as your ass deep; the more I give to thee,
The more I have, for both are infinite."

This MFer is lucky he's good looking...

Speaking of Lucky Good looking MFers ...

This is the part that frustrates me, why can she go 80% of the way... but not 100%? Both in commitment and sexually(they are one and the same for her, when one comes the other will).
And what will it take to give her the confidence? Nyx is probably waiting for some big event to push her... instead of simply the next date.

It could be Ethan related, it could be finding her family, it could be Zane giving his blessing...

It's not going to be official until the Ethan problem is dealt with most likely. Which is frustrating to me personally, I see no reason why they can't do both. Assuming that you are boyfriend and girlfriend is all well and good but you know what they say? To assume makes an ass of u and me.
Plus it gives a scumbag MC the excuse of "well technically we weren't in a relationship so.."

If it's solving the Ethan problem, I hope we solve it in the next few updates so we can focus on the relationship development and problems for the rest of the updates.

Character wise, both could be scared of losing each other's relationship. This is the oldest and longest relationship both have had with anyone outside of Erynn-Alexis or it's Nyx not making things easy at all for the Erynn path.

On Zane i wonder if she'll bring up meeting with him, Nyx always wants us to play honest and open... so she should mention having a conversation with her old BF to the guy she's with, even if nothing of note happened, even if it's not official.

MC Internal Monologue: Why do I feel jealous? They're not even together anymore ... Why do I keep staring at him ... because he's good looking ... STOP STARING AT HIM!

I would believe the hypoxia in John's case, but MC is clearly average sized.

Spoiler: John's Case

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[ModiThorrson]

That val date was an example of pretty privelage if MC wasn't so pretty some of the stuff he did on that date would come off as creepy.

Agreed, MC on the bus and at camp was mildly charming,. The Val beach date, while fun, MC is just a horny creep, it would be one thing if they were having normal conversations while checking each other out but it was just one stare after another until the trauma dump, and then somehow it got worse lol.

 

[World of Pants]

Spoiler: John's Case

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If the NTR brigade don't like Emily and John, they are going to shit a brick when the inevitable Emily / Melissa / John threesome happens!

 

[cxx]

and there is a Nikki Secret Path on a Cara path too!

is there secret layla path too?

If the NTR brigade don't like Emily and John, they are going to shit a brick when the inevitable Emily / Melissa / John threesome happens!

that so not gonna happen.

 

[hakuna-matata]

If the NTR brigade don't like Emily and John, they are going to shit a brick when the inevitable Emily / Melissa / John threesome happens!

I hope it happens. I want to see the world burn and I want the NTR losers to die eternally. If a game consisting of fake pixels banging upsets you, you need psychiatric help.

 

[World of Pants]

that so not gonna happen.

Actually you're right, Mommy Brooke will find out about John soon, then he will find hiself dead behind a dumpster like the last person that tried to mess with Emily!

It's probably a good thing I'm not actually writing this story lol.

 

[MightbeSomeone]

It's not going to be official until the Ethan problem is dealt with most likely. Which is frustrating to me personally, I see no reason why they can't do both. Assuming that you are boyfriend and girlfriend is all well and good but you know what they say? To assume makes an ass of u and me.
Plus it gives a scumbag MC the excuse of "well technically we weren't in a relationship so.."

The Zane thing is certain to be not a big deal to Erynn, but a massive deal in the MC's head once he sees them, most likely at school together. Especially if you are on Erynn's path.

Hopefully the ethan thing is resolved soon. His story needs to be finished and then the zane stuff should be advanced

 

[cxx]

Actually you're right, Mommy Brooke will find out about John soon, then he will find hiself dead behind a dumpster like the last person that tried to mess with Emily!

It's probably a good thing I'm not actually writing this story lol.

definitely good thing.

 

[doovel]

If the NTR brigade don't like Emily and John, they are going to shit a brick when the inevitable Emily / Melissa / John threesome happens!

Spoiler: John's Case

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This is why Melissa has been single all this time, she couldn't get off on all those smaller dicks.

 

[World of Pants]

This is why Melissa has been single all this time, she couldn't get off on all those smaller dicks.

Emily: "His name is John, he has blue eyes, blonde hair, is covered in tattoos and has a 16 inch dick"
Melissa: "That's definately not my John, and I have no follow up questions"
Me: "Really though Nyx?... Really?"

 

[cooldevo]

Actually you're right, Mommy Brooke will find out about John soon, then he will find hiself dead behind a dumpster like the last person that tried to mess with Emily!

It's probably a good thing I'm not actually writing this story lol.

Naaah, no on my playthroughs. Mommy Brooke owns them all! I have a few older saves with John, but they are there just to see the content and gallery work. Too impossible to pass over on Brooke, she's just so cute and been in love for almost 2 years but never said a word.

 

[misfolk]

I hope it happens. I want to see the world burn and I want the NTR losers to die eternally. If a game consisting of fake pixels banging upsets you, you need psychiatric help.

I wonder how they can replace a 18-yo Latino horndog with a sprinter's body, hunter's eyes and a massive tattoo with their own projection in a sex scene, but are utterly incapable when it's a 40-yo Eastern European Technoviking with a wrestler's body and a massive tattoo instead.

 

[doovel]

I wonder how they can replace a 18-yo Latino horndog with a sprinter's body, hunter's eyes and a massive tattoo with their own projection in a sex scene, but are utterly incapable when it's a 40-yo Eastern European Technoviking with a wrestler's body and a massive tattoo instead.

Exactly I had the opposite reaction. Finally someone I can pretend to be!


mostly because I am much closer to John's age, than the MC's age.

 

[doovel]

Emily: "His name is John, he has blue eyes, blonde hair, is covered in tattoos and has a 16 inch dick"
Melissa: "That's definitely not my John, and I have no follow up questions"
Me: "Really though Nyx?... Really?"

Nyx really pushes the mystery, every chance she has.

 

[World of Pants]

Exactly I had the opposite reaction. Finally someone I can pretend to be!

Damn right, John is now the MC of this story, we can skim past all the pretty boy stuff!

 

[LSC82]

If it's solving the Ethan problem, I hope we solve it in the next few updates so we can focus on the relationship development and problems for the rest of the updates.

Character wise, both could be scared of losing each other's relationship. This is the oldest and longest relationship both have had with anyone outside of Erynn-Alexis or it's Nyx not making things easy at all for the Erynn path.

MC Internal Monologue: Why do I feel jealous? They're not even together anymore ... Why do I keep staring at him ... because he's good looking ... STOP STARING AT HIM!

Hopefully the ethan thing is resolved soon. His story needs to be finished and then the zane stuff should be advanced

It has become too much of burden, it's slowing down the things we actually care about...
If Nyx isn't willing to do both simultaneously like Justaphase suggested, it needs to go and fast.

Zane is looking like much more interesting opposition, Ethan is just a rich loser with no scruples but also no game whatsoever... Zane you can actually use him to cause jealousy... and without making him an irredeamable evil prick.

Naaah, no on my playthroughs. Mommy Brooke owns them all! I have a few older saves with John, but they are there just to see the content and gallery work. Too impossible to pass over on Brooke, she's just so cute and been in love for almost 2 years but never said a word.

I like John with Emily just for the inevitable shit show when it gets revealed that he's Melissa's ex and Erynn's dad, for once we can watch the shitshow unfold from a safe distance...
And then there's Santiago trying to rekindle things with Emily too, just grab your popcorn

Add a couple of possible bonuses in that this might make Brooke distraught enough to try dick for the first time
I doubt Nyx gonna do this(i've seen women call this type of thinking misoginistic), but 1% is better than 0%

And maybe seeing her friend with her ex is what pushes Melissa over the edge too.

 

[World of Pants]

And maybe seeing her friend with her ex is what pushes Melissa over the edge too.

My Man!
Hence my previous Emily/Melissa/John threesome prediction!

 

[cooldevo]

I like John with Emily just for the inevitable shit show when it gets revealed that he's Melissa's ex and Erynn's dad, for once we can watch the shitshow unfold from a safe distance...
And then there's Santiago trying to rekindle things with Emily too, just grab your popcorn

Add a couple of possible bonuses in that this might make Brooke distraught enough to try dick for the first time
I doubt Nyx gonna do this(i've seen women call this type of thinking misoginistic), but 1% is better than 0%

Brooke is specially reserved for Emily in ~80% of my playthroughs, so it had better happen. It'll just be too much fun to have her around in the new 'mother' role. John gets the rest of them, for other reasons including what you mentioned. At first I didn't expect Brooke to change her preferences, but she does seem to be opening up to the MC including giving him her first two kisses to a male, so now I'm on the fence about what will happen.

 

[LSC82]

Brooke is specially reserved for Emily in ~80% of my playthroughs, so it had better happen. It'll just be too much fun to have her around in the new 'mother' role. John gets the rest of them, for other reasons including what you mentioned. At first I didn't expect Brooke to change her preferences, but she does seem to be opening up to the MC including giving him her first two kisses to a male, so now I'm on the fence about what will happen.

The kisses weren't really making out... kisses on the cheeks... it's arguable.
But when she layed on top of him... that was teasing a guy a little too far and she must've known that...
I look forward to taking her on a (promised) bike ride, preferably right after John comes to pick up Emily at the restaurant... Catch her when she's at the lowest, right when she figures out "it's never gonna happen"

My Man!
Hence my previous Emily/Melissa/John threesome prediction!

I'm down with any form of crazyness coming from here.
Surely it will be a punch to the gut for Melissa...

 

[cooldevo]

The kisses weren't really making out... kisses on the cheeks... it's arguable.
But when she layed on top of him... that was teasing a guy a little too far and she must've known that...
I look forward to taking her on a (promised) bike ride, preferably right after John comes to picks up Emily at the restaurant... Catch her when she's at the lowest, right when she figures out "it's never gonna happen"

I don't disagree that it was only on the cheek, but if those are the first two given to a non-parental/sibling male, that's still huge.

For the most part, I just chalk her actions up to being BFF 'friendzoned' which is where MC will fit in. Same reason she doesn't care if he's around when she changes. Or cuddling on the couch. If she just sees MC as a best friend, then the actions may not be romantic/sexual to her, and no different then how she'd behave around her female friends.

The walls may break down over time and she realizes there might be something there, which would add it's own unique storytelling elements.

Most of the reason my John saves have lagged behind is just because I haven't gotten the heart to consider doing something that dirty to her like that yet. Should Emily not be interested, then I'll come in and mop up the pieces....