VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[anonnyscouse]

The Erynn/MC situation is playing as they are both waiting for each other to say something. MC is waiting for Erynn to say something because he doesn't want to pressure Erynn into something she's not ready for. Erynn is waiting for MC to say something because she doesn't want to risk her friendship with the guy who is most likely to get her out of the Ethan situation.

I think it's going to take an intervention from Lexi or Mel to get them to admit to each other what they want.

 

[cooldevo]

Also if I recall correctly in one of the early chapters when the MC goes shopping if you don't correct the store clerk he actually says he is her girlfriend. ( correct me if im wrong dont have a save to check myself right now)

Almost perfectly correct. When MC and Erynn approach the teller, he says something along the line of "such a nice looking couple..." and Erynn says "Umm.." and you can follow it up with "Correct him" or 'go along with it' (I forget the exact choice option). Erynn visibly notices, but I didn't check if a variable is flagged on it.

 

[LSC82]

So I just replayed the Erynn content from this update my god I forgot how cute she is during the beach date especially with the whole checking out how tall she is compared to the MC.

But anyways after replaying it. Don't know if it's just me but I really hated how the MC "distracted" Erynn during their volleyball match. I mean I don't like how he was using the "love" worth to mess with her to begin with as we know it's a big deal for Erynn. But I felt like if he was going to fuck her just say "I love you" instead of almost saying then saying something else. Might just me but I felt like if he said it would of created a good opportunity to talk about it or move their relationship more forward afterwards or in another update update could bring it up in a relationship talk right before they make things official.

As well with the MC should of said she is his girlfriend instead of saying she is just mine. Because like what LSC82 said it does feel like a choice that wouldn't matter and there just for variety. Also if I recall correctly in one of the early chapters when the MC goes shopping if you don't correct the store clerk he actually says he is her girlfriend. ( correct me if im wrong dont have a save to check myself right now)

Also is Erynn not living at her apartment anymore now School is back in session? I recall the plan was to originally just stay with Mel during break but she goes back to her apartment just for her books and says she will be back in the evening.

for fun here are some of my favorite Erynn Renders during the date probably missed a few as I forgot to take them while playing so did a quick ctrl skip haha.

Spoiler: Erynn Renders

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Spoiler: Erynn Cute

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She can look scary sometimes

Spoiler: Erynn Scary

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The "I love... being back in MS" was just cold and heartless.
Our guy uses "love" to distract Erynn, but when they are talking for real he's too much of a pussy and goes for a shy "i like you".
The "girlfriend/friend", i already said my thoughts, it looked like THE MOMENT IS FINALLY HERE ladies, gentleman and degenerates... but ended up being an empty fluff choice.

As well with the MC should of said she is his girlfriend instead of saying she is just mine. Because like what LSC82 said it does feel like a choice that wouldn't matter and there just for variety. Also if I recall correctly in one of the early chapters when the MC goes shopping if you don't correct the store clerk he actually says he is her girlfriend. ( correct me if im wrong dont have a save to check myself right now)

I think there's a moment like that with a cashier, she says MC-Erynn make a good looking couple and we have the option to correct her or just say "thank you", it also doesn't lead to much, that one perhaps too early and "just didn't correct her", but this latest one feels like a much bigger missed opportunity.

Erynn herself is also afraid of the word "boyfriend", stops herself right in the middle of it(as seen in one of the renders), but she's the one that has clear trust and confidence issues, i think the MC should be the one giving her reassurance and helping her get over her issues... but the game doesn't allow me to do it.

The Erynn/MC situation is playing as they are both waiting for each other to say something. MC is waiting for Erynn to say something because he doesn't want to pressure Erynn into something she's not ready for. Erynn is waiting for MC to say something because she doesn't want to risk her friendship with the guy who is most likely to get her out of the Ethan situation.

I think it's going to take an intervention from Lexi or Mel to get them to admit to each other what they want.

You could add these ones to the cute or scary folder Des.
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I think this above is why I feel like it's one step forwards and two steps back with Erynn sometimes unfortunately. They are both still running scared from their true feelings for each other.
Saying stuff like this feels like being friend zoned and noone wants that!
Like I said before, I see no reason why we can't deal with the Ethan situation while having Erynn as the MC's girlfriend.
I hope that we don't get a situation where Erynn is going to want to put the brakes on things while she is doing the internship at the MC's school. As she will be the MC's teacher for a while, if my assumption is correct about her "surprise"

It can be immensely frustrating, a non-ending waiting game, she's not gonna say it because she's scared that changing the relationship will cause her lose him down the line, and he doesn't say it because he's afraid of pressuring her and perhaps the backyard "rejection" still haunts him a bit.

It's specially frustrating because we can't properly guide the actions of our avatar.

 

[Justaphase]

The "I love... being back in MS" was just cold and heartless.
Our guy uses "love" to distract Erynn, but when they are talking for real he's too much of a pussy and goes for a shy "i like you".
The "girlfriend/friend", i already said my thoughts, it looked like THE MOMENT IS FINALLY HERE ladies, gentleman and degenerates... but ended up being an empty fluff choice.


I think there's a moment like that with a cashier, she says MC-Erynn make a good looking couple and we have the option to correct her or just say "thank you", it also doesn't lead to much, that one perhaps too early and "just didn't correct her", but this latest one feels like a much bigger missed opportunity.

Erynn herself is also afraid of the word "boyfriend", stops herself right in the middle of it(as seen in one of the renders), but she's the one that has clear trust and confidence issues, i think the MC should be the one giving her reassurance and helping her get over her issues... but the game doesn't allow me to do it.





It can be immensely frustrating, a non-ending waiting game, she's not gonna say it because she's scared that changing the relationship will cause her lose him down the line, and he doesn't say it because he's afraid of pressuring her and perhaps the backyard "rejection" still haunts him a bit.

It's specially frustrating because we can't properly guide the actions of our avatar.

They are still playing the 1000 questions game, so perfect opportunity there. Question number whatever, which should/could have come after the "I like you." while on the beach date.
MC - "Erynn will you be my girlfriend?"
Erynn - "Yes!"

Problem solved.

 

[cooldevo]

The "I love... being back in MS" was just cold and heartless.
Our guy uses "love" to distract Erynn, but when they are talking for real he's too much of a pussy and goes for a shy "i like you".

He's a chronic cheater that seems to enjoy using any tactic at his disposal. Seems to be a recurring trend on not just Erynn's beach date but also Val's beach date. Erynn even gets annoyed at one point at the beach asking if he's ever going to let her win. So she even starts to see it. And then it also shows up again on Val's training date where he chases her to the park bench, and MC jumps it, pretends he's hurt then grabs her.

Not anything I'd ever do in my own life and really rubs me the wrong way. But I guess my "manliness" doesn't hinge on winning at all costs when playing around with someone I'm pursuing. The journey is more fun than who wins.

 

[cooldevo]

They are still playing the 1000 questions game, so perfect opportunity there. Question number whatever, which should/could have come after the "I like you." while on the beach date.
MC - "Erynn will you be my girlfriend?"
Erynn - "Yes!"

Problem solved.

That'd be perfectly in line with the Lexi girlfriend dare too! Nice idea.

 

[jadepaladin]

He's a chronic cheater that seems to enjoy using any tactic at his disposal. Seems to be a recurring trend on not just Erynn's beach date but also Val's beach date. Erynn even gets annoyed at one point at the beach asking if he's ever going to let her win. So she even starts to see it. And then it also shows up again on Val's training date where he chases her to the park bench, and MC jumps it, pretends he's hurt then grabs her.

Not anything I'd ever do in my own life and really rubs me the wrong way. But I guess my "manliness" doesn't hinge on winning at all costs when playing around with someone I'm pursuing. The journey is more fun than who wins.

The number of times he "cheated" during the staring contest thing on Val's beach date. He was hopeless. Even had the audacity to call Val hyper competitive.

 

[Dessolos]

It can be immensely frustrating, a non-ending waiting game, she's not gonna say it because she's scared that changing the relationship will cause her lose him down the line, and he doesn't say it because he's afraid of pressuring her and perhaps the backyard "rejection" still haunts him a bit.

It's specially frustrating because we can't properly guide the actions of our avatar.

I think this above is why I feel like it's one step forwards and two steps back with Erynn sometimes unfortunately. They are both still running scared from their true feelings for each other.
Saying stuff like this feels like being friend zoned and noone wants that!
Like I said before, I see no reason why we can't deal with the Ethan situation while having Erynn as the MC's girlfriend.
I hope that we don't get a situation where Erynn is going to want to put the brakes on things while she is doing the internship at the MC's school. As she will be the MC's teacher for a while, if my assumption is correct about her "surprise"

Since it didn't happen in this update while still unlikely to happen im hoping for maybe the MC gets Alexis to help him recreate the backyard confession for when he finally ask or / makes things official without Ethan of course ( maybe use Nathan as a replacement or just only Lexi)

They are still playing the 1000 questions game, so perfect opportunity there. Question number whatever, which should/could have come after the "I like you"
MC - "Erynn will you be my girlfriend?"
Erynn - "Yes!"

Problem solved.

That would be perfect would be Lexi 2.0 Girlfriend scenario instead of dares just the question game. Funny thing I think i wrote about not long after playing this game for the first time. But I had a fantasy for when the MC's Ask Erynn to marry him it would be in one of 2 scenarios. Either they finish their 1000 game and the last question is " Will you Marry me". or the MC just straight up ask way ahead saying something like don't give an answer until we finish our 1000 question game but my question is " Will you Marry me".

 

[Justaphase]

The number of times he "cheated" during the staring contest thing on Val's beach date. He was hopeless. Even had the audacity to call Val hyper competitive.

He did get her to say "Uwu" though, which was pretty damn cute!

 

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[MilesEdgeworth]

That val date was an example of pretty privelage if MC wasn't so pretty some of the stuff he did on that date would come off as creepy.

 

[Elduriel]

He did get her to say "Uwu" though, which was pretty damn cute!

 

[Kaskaze]

The moment when the MC is sitting in the car is the same feeling I had playing this version . But the only moment that bothers me is when Emily admits to John that Santi is MC's father.

 

[Rickpick]

Does anyone else feel the MC acts really weird around Val ? Especially lately , he was better when they were on the bus and other times they met . He's so confident around others but lately he comes off as a little cringey around Val for me personally

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Does anyone else feel the MC acts really weird around Val ? Especially lately , he was better when they were on the bus and other times they met . He's so confident around others but lately he comes off as a little cringey around Val for me personally

I'd argue that he's a little too confident around Val.
Then again, he's pretty handsy with damn there all the girls except maybe Elena, which I'm sure will change once they start dating.

 

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[Krytax123]

I'd argue that he's a little too confident around Val.
Then again, he's pretty handsy with damn there all the girls except maybe Elena, which I'm sure will change once they start dating.

Well girls usually like that if they are into the guy lol

I think the mc's obsession with taking pictures/videos is stranger esp with all the picture/video related trauma

 

[Dessolos]

Well girls usually like that if they are into the guy lol

I think the mc's obsession with taking pictures/videos is stranger esp with all the picture/video related trauma

oh I thought Erynn was gonna freak the fuck out and their relationship was gonna go backwards to her not being and bold around him again. I was actually getting mad at the MC thinking to myself ask permission especially with ERYNN i normally don't get mad at MC's bur when it comes to Erynn yeah she doesn't need anything else to freak out on.

 

[valbitterb]

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[Justaphase]

oh I thought Erynn was gonna freak the fuck out and their relationship was gonna go backwards to her not being and bold around him again. I was actually getting mad at the MC thinking to myself ask permission especially with ERYNN i normally don't get mad at MC's bur when it comes to Erynn yeah she doesn't need anything else to freak out on.

Erynn loves it when the MC fools around with her and is playful, but he's the only one who can. It's the same with the ass slapping, or him pulling her on top of him, she pretends to not like it but does.
As MilesEdgeworth said, there's also an element of "pretty privilege" that the MC has. Which is of course part of the fun of playing a good looking main character in an AVN.