VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[Deleted member 207916]

he mean that scene in the Bar ?

Wow i probably misunderstood, thanks. English isn't my native language so if i made a mistake fell free to corect me. Big thanks.

 

[Maviarab]

he mean that scene in the Bar ?

That's what he means yes. End of update if on Lexi path.

Wow i probably misunderstood, thanks. English isn't my native language so if i made a mistake fell free to corect me. Big thanks.

You understood perfectly,...I know what you meant. darklive was just clarifying the fight/scene you were referring to.

 

[OutOfAshes]

Wow i probably misunderstood, thanks. English isn't my native language so if i made a mistake fell free to corect me. Big thanks.

That's what he means yes. End of update if on Lexi path.


You understood perfectly,...I know what you meant. darklive was just clarifying the fight/scene you were referring to.

dont worry, you undersood this correctly

and english is not my native language too

so feel free to correct me to

 

[V i e s s a]

When will the next update come ?

 

[Gh0st_Harambe]

When will the next update come ?

Tomorrow.

 

[espy85]

1) It is a cliché and I don't know if Nyx would go there.
2) Ethan was 15 when the MC was 12. How would that work?
3) Agreed but still a better (seeming) person than Mr Coleman.

On ethan I was ironic, in my native language (Italian) it would have been more understandable, I apologize.
On the other two, these are two clichés, I think that of the latin lover coach is worse, because it would give little space to a sequel, at 40 it is still there that the girls are banged in the locker room, difficult to believe there is a father-son storyline to be able to exploit.
Coleman seems like a bad person, but in reality, if I remember correctly, he is just a strict and dutiful person, here it would be easier to work on it, starting from his personality.
His attitude can derive precisely from having had a relationship with one of his students, a true and sincere relationship, but by all seen as scandalous, but above all something that did not respect the rules, he could have gone through a bad time for that relationship and this led him to be a fanatic of the rules, as well as making him angry for losing the girl he loved.

In conclusion, I would exclude the people on the plane, I think that was just a Nyx joke. The MC father will play a key role, and we still know little about the relationship between the mother and the adoptive father, was it the mother who asked for the separation after discovering she was a lesbian? Was there really a betrayal? What if Anders is an abusive husband?
Out of curiosity, I replayed and kept away from Alexis, Layla and Nikki. Now I don't know how I did it, but in this version if the MC is not with Nikki, the last night at his father's house, the latter has a bad argument with his new girlfriend and when the MC accuses him of cheating the mother, the father punches him, denying what happened.
I believe Anders left his wife when he found out that the MC was not his son, I don't think there was a betrayal on his part

Finally, in my second version I noticed that without the three girls mentioned above the plot is really unattractive, I hoped that by ignoring them I could get closer to Elena or Melissa, instead the only sex scenes or love interests, are simple escapades, with Rachel being fired and Tory then ignoring us. I don't know if there will be further additions to these two girls in the prox updates, but if not, I wouldn't miss them.
The story hinges on Nikki Alexis Eryn and Layla. I think it's all about them.

 

[Deleted member 207916]

On ethan I was ironic, in my native language (Italian) it would have been more understandable, I apologize.
On the other two, these are two clichés, I think that of the latin lover coach is worse, because it would give little space to a sequel, at 40 it is still there that the girls are banged in the locker room, difficult to believe there is a father-son storyline to be able to exploit.
Coleman seems like a bad person, but in reality, if I remember correctly, he is just a strict and dutiful person, here it would be easier to work on it, starting from his personality.
His attitude can derive precisely from having had a relationship with one of his students, a true and sincere relationship, but by all seen as scandalous, but above all something that did not respect the rules, he could have gone through a bad time for that relationship and this led him to be a fanatic of the rules, as well as making him angry for losing the girl he loved.

In conclusion, I would exclude the people on the plane, I think that was just a Nyx joke. The MC father will play a key role, and we still know little about the relationship between the mother and the adoptive father, was it the mother who asked for the separation after discovering she was a lesbian? Was there really a betrayal? What if Anders is an abusive husband?
Out of curiosity, I replayed and kept away from Alexis, Layla and Nikki. Now I don't know how I did it, but in this version if the MC is not with Nikki, the last night at his father's house, the latter has a bad argument with his new girlfriend and when the MC accuses him of cheating the mother, the father punches him, denying what happened.
I believe Anders left his wife when he found out that the MC was not his son, I don't think there was a betrayal on his part

Finally, in my second version I noticed that without the three girls mentioned above the plot is really unattractive, I hoped that by ignoring them I could get closer to Elena or Melissa, instead the only sex scenes or love interests, are simple escapades, with Rachel being fired and Tory then ignoring us. I don't know if there will be further additions to these two girls in the prox updates, but if not, I wouldn't miss them.
The story hinges on Nikki Alexis Eryn and Layla. I think it's all about them.

Only one thing that i found was wrong and that's that Andres doesn't know that MC isn't his son. Emily (mom) several times confirmed that she promised Andres that she will not tell MC about it. Take example pool time with Erynn. If you choose to stay a dialog would happem between Emily and Melissa where Mel asked Emily did she tell MC a secret that Andres isn't his father. That's where she confirmes that she promised she wouldn't. As for the part where Nyx is joking regarding real father i guess it could be possible, why not. A little joke didn't hurt anyone.

 

[Maviarab]

Only one thing that i found was wrong and that's that Andres doesn't know that MC isn't his son. Emily (mom) several times confirmed that she promised Andres that she will not tell MC about it. Take example pool time with Erynn. If you choose to stay a dialog would happem between Emily and Melissa where Mel asked Emily did she tell MC a secret that Andres isn't his father. That's where she confirmes that she promised she wouldn't. As for the part where Nyx is joking regarding real father i guess it could be possible, why not. A little joke didn't hurt anyone.

Think you meant Andes does know...otherwise why would Emily promise him anything?

Why the wedding will be fun (either route), up to now the MC not even thought his dad might be keeping stuff from him as well.

 

[MrFriendly]

On ethan I was ironic, in my native language (Italian) it would have been more understandable, I apologize.
On the other two, these are two clichés, I think that of the latin lover coach is worse, because it would give little space to a sequel, at 40 it is still there that the girls are banged in the locker room, difficult to believe there is a father-son storyline to be able to exploit.
Coleman seems like a bad person, but in reality, if I remember correctly, he is just a strict and dutiful person, here it would be easier to work on it, starting from his personality.
His attitude can derive precisely from having had a relationship with one of his students, a true and sincere relationship, but by all seen as scandalous, but above all something that did not respect the rules, he could have gone through a bad time for that relationship and this led him to be a fanatic of the rules, as well as making him angry for losing the girl he loved.

In conclusion, I would exclude the people on the plane, I think that was just a Nyx joke. The MC father will play a key role, and we still know little about the relationship between the mother and the adoptive father, was it the mother who asked for the separation after discovering she was a lesbian? Was there really a betrayal? What if Anders is an abusive husband?
Out of curiosity, I replayed and kept away from Alexis, Layla and Nikki. Now I don't know how I did it, but in this version if the MC is not with Nikki, the last night at his father's house, the latter has a bad argument with his new girlfriend and when the MC accuses him of cheating the mother, the father punches him, denying what happened.
I believe Anders left his wife when he found out that the MC was not his son, I don't think there was a betrayal on his part

Finally, in my second version I noticed that without the three girls mentioned above the plot is really unattractive, I hoped that by ignoring them I could get closer to Elena or Melissa, instead the only sex scenes or love interests, are simple escapades, with Rachel being fired and Tory then ignoring us. I don't know if there will be further additions to these two girls in the prox updates, but if not, I wouldn't miss them.
The story hinges on Nikki Alexis Eryn and Layla. I think it's all about them.

Ah, okay... I was wondering but it's tough to know on the internet and on a porn forum...

Since Melissa and Emily went to college together and Erynn is three years older than the MC then Emily didn't have a relationship with a high school teacher which resulted in the MC. However, Emily could have been in an illicit relationship with a college professor which resulted in the MC. And, I do think that Mr Coleman is still a candidate for being in a relationship with a student, getting her pregnant, and losing his job which results in him being an overly strict high school teacher now.

Emily and Melissa are not lesbians, they are bisexual, both had relationships with men and experimented with each other in college. Andres knows that the MC isn't his son but didn't want Emily to tell the MC. Why? We don't know but Emily betrayed her ex-husband and damaged her relationship with her son by blurting it out.

And as for the girls - the main love interests (so far) are Alexis, Erynn, Layla, Nikki, and Cara... Everyone else is a side girl (so far). No idea if that is going to stay true. If you don't pick a main LI then the game is going to be boring... This is true of most games that are built in this manner.

 

[thorin0815]

Why the wedding will be fun (either route), up to now the MC not even thought his dad might be keeping stuff from him as well.

Andres never told the MC the reason why he left Emily, so much for no secrets.

 

[Deleted member 207916]

Think you meant Andes does know...otherwise why would Emily promise him anything?

Why the wedding will be fun (either route), up to now the MC not even thought his dad might be keeping stuff from him as well.

Exactly that's what i though, that Andres knows. Why would he have any suspicion? Before that fight with Emily MC was convinced that his dad is Andres. Any person in his spot wouldn't question that. Sure as a son he knows that his dad (by that time Andres) does have secrets, who doesn't?

 

[timpo]

Andres knows that the MC isn't his son but didn't want Emily to tell the MC. Why? We don't know but Emily betrayed her ex-husband and damaged her relationship with her son by blurting it out.

Any explanation, for Emily not recognasing MC, when she sees him at the bus station
Are the tatoos, or it can be that Andres is barren? i mean not able to make children
sorry for the cut of your message MrFriendly

 

[MrFriendly]

Any explanation, for Emily not recognasing MC, when she sees him at the bus station
Are the tatoos, or it can be that Andres is barren? i mean not able to make children
sorry for the cut of your message MrFriendly

We don't have any explanation beyond the one she gave - the tattoos and the length of time since they saw each other. She's seen some pictures that Andres has sent to her (so the divorce may not be great but they are somewhat amicable) but nothing else in 5 years.

Andres could be, would explain why they had no kids of their own.

And no worries.

 

[LSC82]

He is in the story btw..and we have seen him.

I don't really care either way.

 

[LSC82]

Yeah, I can't decide if I think Nyx is just yanking our chains or if the dad is in town. I mean at this point that means everyone lives in the same town they've always lived in their entire lives except for Andres. And only 6 characters live anywhere else - Andres, Haley, Nikki, Cara, Lakeyn, and Nathan. We still don't know a thing about the MC's life prior to moving in with Haley and the girls (except that Nathan was his friend). The MC was already sexually experienced but we know nothing about a former girlfriend, his first time, etc. Don't know a thing about his relationship status prior to the trip to the club.

Anyway, if the dad still lives in the same town it seems unlikely that Emily hasn't seen him. Seems like a small enough town and she runs a popular restaurant...

More importantly if the dad never left town why he never cared to see or talk to his son?
Another reason that makes me not care one bit about who this guy is...

 

[MrFriendly]

More importantly if the dad never left town why he never cared to see or talk to his son?
Another reason that makes me not care one bit about who this guy is...

Yeah, the MC is 18 years old and the bio dad has never tried to reach out to him (as far as we know). I'd rather that the MC talk to his mom and have the choice of learning who it is or forgetting about him. In all honesty Andres may not have been a great father but he was still the MC's dad. At least the only one that matters. But maybe the bio dad has been sending money to Emily all this time? What if the bio dad was her silent partner in the restaurant?

Though I have a crazy idea...What if the MC's real dad is Ethan's dad? Ethan and the MC are siblings and don't know it, all this time the pursuit of Erynn has been a sibling rivalry...

 

[Bailz]

Yeah, the MC is 18 years old and the bio dad has never tried to reach out to him (as far as we know). I'd rather that the MC talk to his mom and have the choice of learning who it is or forgetting about him. In all honesty Andres may not have been a great father but he was still the MC's dad. At least the only one that matters. But maybe the bio dad has been sending money to Emily all this time? What if the bio dad was her silent partner in the restaurant?

Though I have a crazy idea...What if the MC's real dad is Ethan's dad? Ethan and the MC are siblings and don't know it, all this time the pursuit of Erynn has been a sibling rivalry...

i thought the same with the MC and Ethan and thats how we could help Erryn out with whatever situation she is in if Ethan is involved

 

[MrFriendly]

i thought the same with the MC and Ethan and thats how we could help Erryn out with whatever situation she is in if Ethan is involved

Only if the MC is willing to accept being a member of douchenozzle's family... That's tough but then they would already share DNA so it would be too late to completely disavow Ethan.

Ugh... I don't want to be patient but I have no other choice but to wait. I've never been good at that.

 

[LSC82]

Yeah, the MC is 18 years old and the bio dad has never tried to reach out to him (as far as we know). I'd rather that the MC talk to his mom and have the choice of learning who it is or forgetting about him. In all honesty Andres may not have been a great father but he was still the MC's dad. At least the only one that matters. But maybe the bio dad has been sending money to Emily all this time? What if the bio dad was her silent partner in the restaurant?

Though I have a crazy idea...What if the MC's real dad is Ethan's dad? Ethan and the MC are siblings and don't know it, all this time the pursuit of Erynn has been a sibling rivalry...

I'm with you, unless there's a damn good explanation, and i mean DAMN GOOD, for why he never cared... i want nothing to do with the guy.
And Andres who had the choice to drop out of the MCs life once he split with Emily chose to stick around, he is "my dad" this other dude can go punch rocks...

Also if he makes me related to f... Ethan, one more reason to hate the MF.

 

[Bailz]

Only if the MC is willing to accept being a member of douchenozzle's family... That's tough but then they would already share DNA so it would be too late to completely disavow Ethan.

Ugh... I don't want to be patient but I have no other choice but to wait. I've never been good at that.

i know, this is one of only a few games that i just cant wait for an update too come out for and then i have to download and play it straight away