VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[Canto Forte]

Fact is .. escorts are a real thing, most of the time are a front for human trafficking rings.
Model agencies like to recruit just like any kidnapper would:
Even in is ra e l they would just talk to underage gurls, pick them off the street,
then do a photo shoot ... after a swift talk with parents, they would even leave with them
over seas to ”model” them over to some agencies.

I am thankful angels from vic secret who were recruited that way were not
victims in a sex traffickin ring ... but like in this game, we are talking about
a gurl in school being blackmailed to put out in private events along side
rich giys who should be told off for bringing school gurls s escorts
to cocktail/business/drinking parties.

I woild like her to talk to lexi”s mum and have a sting in place and bust those assholes open
so as ethan and any other human trafficking scum using model agencies as a front for
blackmail and demeaning and molesting young gurls for disgusting make belief be destroyed.

And .. yes .. they touch her bum like the assholes they are,
Her running makeup seems to not have raised any alarms in a supposedly fancy party ...
Some subhuman scum must be having those parties also ... what a bust!

there is a line where she notices that the MC is no longer a little boy and tries to stop thinking about it! so fraternal love yes most definitely but she also starts to see him as a man after checking him out!

but she is staking an emotional claim that i doubt she can stake when she picked her school friends over the MC, even tough one of those friends was Lexxi!

so right now her feelings are a mix of possession fraternal/sibling love and an arising sexual desire... if what is stated is true she started her sexual life got the taste of it and has not had any for 3 years
(clearly we are talking fantasy here but let us role with it)!

Love and passion are different, she loves the MC but passion i saw none, her internal monologues are possessive as shit but show no burning passion!

as for Lexxi fucking shit she is a volcano her mind keeps telling her "stop you dumb bitch" but her body just moves to the rhythm of her desires! i bet that had we asked she would have given up the ass while her mind would be "wtf are you doing stupid slut?"! not love? a kind of love! different from Erynn!

cant argue about that - it has some points

Just so there is no confusion and you can make your own minds:
There is no NTR, there is a mention of a sex tape, that probably doesn't exist (the MC goes "wait, you didn't see it? how do you know it actually exists?"), of a LI from several years before the game happens. There was a lot of speculation there might be as a LI acted weirdly and people thought she might be an escort, it turns out shes been blackmailed but there is no physical contact involved, she basically goes into events and fancy parties with rich assholes,, but she has so far refused any kind of physical contact

Up to you if the LI having sex several years before the game starts, when the MC is in another city, without any renders, is a deal breaker


Nothing physical, basically go like eye candy with rich dudes to events and fancy parties, but she refuses to be touched (the guy blackmailing her rants to her that the clients complain about her not letting them touch her ass)

was bored and reread the last 6 pages --NyxValeria must be wet right now about all the theories
i love this game , the story ,the girls (hate those Ethan)
i cant wait for next content and more

First of all loved this one and many congratulations to the Dev and team for bringing this masterpiece.
Second, I Love LEXI. She is something else. She is the one i'll be exclusively dedicating to. Don't ruin her character like Eryna with sex tape/blackmailing kind of shit.
About Eryna don't get me wrong, that blackmailing is far from ntr. Few agree few don't but, I'm kind of confused was that really necessary, i mean some lesbian shit could have done the trick there, or just make out session with that dude and viola everyone is happy. I mean some who liked or don't mind the way her story is progressing have absolutely no problem either way but, those who liked her until that shit will loose interest in her afterwards. C'mon, you guys wrote this masterpiece, and i love to believe that you people will definitely think of win-win scenario next time.

 

[Deleted member 3194223]

This game used to be amazing. Now, not so much. I had to restart and seems like a lot of scenes have changed even from the previous update.

1. No kiss on train from Elena. Even with the proper points.
2. Peek on Nikki/Cara - No invite into the dressing room with proper points.

That's pretty much where I am now. Not sure I even want to continue this anymore.

I don’t know about the Elena scene but I can say that I peeked on Nikki and got invited in. I then had to choose between the two of them. I don’t know how to check points so I can’t tell you what I did.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

I don’t know about the Elena scene but I can say that I peeked on Nikki and got invited in. I then had to choose between the two of them. I don’t know how to check points so I can’t tell you what I did.

Did you play from the beginning with this update?

 

[Avaron1974]

Totally agree with you
Dont know who are the main focus of the developer cuckold fans or vanilla
Because if there is a sex tape it will come out
Then it will be ntr
But some ass lickers will say yet its not a ntr

Anyways I lost my interest in the game in this version

Please do explain how a woman having sex before getting with someone is NTR because if that's the case every ... single ... person has been NTR'd you included unless you are a virgin.

It doesn't even fall in the broad definition of NTR.....

Anyways I lost my interest in the game in this version

I wouldn't think to speak for Nyx but if that's your attitude, it's no loss.

 

[Mister_M]

Did you play from the beginning with this update?

Regarding the Elena train kiss scene I had it, took me a while though to get it, I think I've replayed the game 4-5 times before I finally got it. Turns out you have to have not only max points with Elena but also a certain (I think max up to that scene) amount of points with Layla. Granted, I haven't played from the beginning with this update, but the kiss is brought up in one of the new scenes too so it's safe to assume it's still there.

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

Did you play from the beginning with this update?

I did for both my runs. And I peeked on both Cara and Nikki and got invited in. And Elena did kiss MC on the train, along with teasing of the kiss at the beach.

 

[retnavgunner]

Did you play from the beginning with this update?

I just finished third route play-through, from the beginning, and got the kiss from Elena, and was invited into the dressing room by both Cara and Nikki. To get the kiss from Elena, you have to tell Zack you think Elena is cute. It's more than just having points, especially concerning Elena.

 

[Deleted member 3194223]

Did you play from the beginning with this update?

Yeah, I thought some stuff may have changed and I wanted to have one save for mile high gal and no one else.

 

[Avaron1974]

Elena kiss and locker room scenes are still there.

Not just a case of points though, it seems the Elena kiss at least has 1 or 2 other triggers.

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

Elena kiss and locker room scenes are still there.

Not just a case of points though, it seems the Elena kiss at least has 1 or 2 other triggers.

Huh. Seems I've missed something. I guess time to muck around with another run.

 

[Darkness65]

Interesting the Erynn polemic. I have two friends, both were bf/gf in highschool; parted ways to college, work, etc.; years later, she married, no childrens, for several years; she got divorced; both meet again, hanged out, and now both are married to each other. They always said they were each other "first true love". Life is more complex than a VN, more so regarding relationships. I'm up for a second chance with Erynn.

This game gave me 2 traits:

1) The "intertwined" stories are great. Although sometimes a bit far fetched, well, it's fiction. And in fiction, the situations could be unreal, but the point of interest is the characters reactions and feelings.

2) A female dev. I know it's not the only one, but in this case, is like taking a peek inside a woman's mind regarding love and relationships.

NyxValeria, I truly enjoy your story. Sometimes, when an option is presented on the screen, I need to get up of my chair, smoke a cigarette, and think very carefully of the consecuences. Very engaging. Congratulations!

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

Regarding the Elena train kiss scene I had it, took me a while though to get it, I think I've replayed the game 4-5 times before I finally got it. Turns out you have to have not only max points with Elena but also a certain (I think max up to that scene) amount of points with Layla. Granted, I haven't played from the beginning with this update, but the kiss is brought up in one of the new scenes too so it's safe to assume it's still there.

I did for both my runs. And I peeked on both Cara and Nikki and got invited in. And Elena did kiss MC on the train, along with teasing of the kiss at the beach.

I just finished third route play-through, from the beginning, and got the kiss from Elena, and was invited into the dressing room by both Cara and Nikki. To get the kiss from Elena, you have to tell Zack you think Elena is cute. It's more than just having points, especially concerning Elena.

Yeah, I thought some stuff may have changed and I wanted to have one save for mile high gal and no one else.

I just don't get it. I had max points for Elena and Layla and didn't get it. Same with Nikki and Cara. I get the Peek options on them and them my guy thinks that it's better to wait. So, I'm at a loss. I did everything like I've done in the past, but, no love.

 

[Ayhsel]

Anyway, I am liking MC a bit better now. He really improved, a little. I still want to punch him in the face for making everything so complicated. But hey, he is improving.

And I guess the answer to my question about the airplane was implicitly answered with Iris..

Hahah those two moments where:

1) Layla talk about this "entanglement" program in which everybody is related to each other
2) MC complains that he has to choose between Yenn and Triss and asked for a harem

were very on point.

 

[Canto Forte]

Ok ... got me the modded last version and the modded this version ... got gutted to lose all my chips invested in lexi ,,, oh my game MC hugged her but then she goes they cannot do this ... oh my...

So then it stopped .. like ... where is the logic in that? I need her as a GF, not any appology.
What was there to say when MC realized his huge catastrophic hurtful past life ...
Instead of consoling and saving Eyrinn and being there for the one gurl he got jealous and mad
about, then at her ... now he just goes to the mom?

Yo ... bad mouth! She is the 1st you gotta rekindle, be here 4 her now, at least!

But no .. MC leaves Eyrinn in the hurt, in Ethans talons, just awful.

 

[A.C.H.B.]

Totally agree with you
Dont know who are the main focus of the developer cuckold fans or vanilla
Because if there is a sex tape it will come out
Then it will be ntr
But some ass lickers will say yet its not a ntr

Anyways I lost my interest in the game in this version

My wife was in 7 relationships before we got together, I guess that makes me a cuck. Also, following your line of thinking, we could probably tag maybe 75% of games on this site as NTR yes?

 

[Avaron1974]

My wife was in 7 relationships before we got together, I guess that makes me a cuck. Also, following your line of thinking, we could probably tag maybe 75% of games on this site as NTR yes?

I find their line of thinking really weird, really weird.

I can understand if it's someone they have pursued in the game and then that girl has sex with someone else....

But this really weird trend of "girl do the fuckity fuck before MC, must sound the enn tee arr bell".....

It's weird, there is no other word I can think of.

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

Ok ... got me the modded last version and the modded this version ... got gutted to lose all my chips invested in lexi ,,, oh my game MC hugged her but then she goes they cannot do this ... oh my...

So then it stopped .. like ... where is the logic in that? I need her as a GF, not any appology.
What was there to say when MC realized his huge catastrophic hurtful past life ...
Instead of consoling and saving Eyrinn and being there for the one gurl he got jealous and mad
about, then at her ... now he just goes to the mom?

Yo ... bad mouth! She is the 1st you gotta rekindle, be here 4 her now, at least!

But no .. MC leaves Eyrinn in the hurt, in Ethans talons, just awful.

You'll enjoy ep7.

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

I find their line of thinking really weird, really weird.

I can understand if it's someone they have pursued in the game and then that girl has sex with someone else....

But this really weird trend of "girl do the fuckity fuck before MC, must sound the enn tee arr bell".....

It's weird, there is no other word I can think of.

Its just people with fragile egos who can't handle the thought of someone they like not existing purely for them.

What can you do? Smooth brains gonna smooth brain.

 

[linkinn]

I'am shocked there is a NTR discussion here when there is no NTR

To the dev, don't leave us hanging too much time to help Erynn, there should be a balance between drama and reward and so far Erryn is definitely down in that scale. Lexi is almost the opposite but still my favorite.

I'll make a Blood MOD for the scene with the dumbass, we need it

 

[Canto Forte]

All I can do is play and find ways to actually help my babes,
as opposed to giving them grief ...

I'am shocked there is a NTR discussion here when there is no NTR

To the dev, don't leave us hanging too much time to help Erynn, there should be a balance between drama and reward and so far Erryn is definitely down in that scale. Lexi is almost the opposite but still my favorite.

I'll make a Blood MOD for the scene with the dumbass, we need it

Will be waiting in game patiently 4 the blood to drop.