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Dunno, can´t look into Nyx Brain to find out what is planned. I personaly wouldn´t wonder if something like this would happen. Many Chicks have an idiot wanting them ... Fuckhead going after Cano, her sister and her ex-boyfriend (if he is the same idiot we will find out. Dickless Idiot after Layla ... Ethan after Ery ... well i just see many drama incoming.
bro you almost gave me a heart attack
 
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Cabin Fever

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If I was the dev and wanted Erynn to be a hitter I would've aimed for a model that looked more like Kaylah from Hillside:
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The level of attractiveness is incomparable IMO
Interesting take. Purely subjective of course, but I agree the level of attractiveness is incomparable. It's not even close. To me, Kaylah is rather boringly plain & unattractive. Not even in the same league as the goddess Erynn.

But that's ok. It's all subjective. No right or wrong here. Unless you are saying you are the ultimate arbiter of attractiveness and that the Nyx making Erynn looking the way she does is wrong. In that case, you are wrong.
Polls seem to agree with me but its all good.
The polls have never been purely about how each girl looks. So no, the polls don't agree with you, but it's all good.
 

lolgotem

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Interesting take. Purely subjective of course, but I agree the level of attractiveness is incomparable. It's not even close. To me, Kaylah is rather boringly plain & unattractive. Not even in the same league as the goddess Erynn.

But that's ok. It's all subjective. No right or wrong here. Unless you are saying you are the ultimate arbiter of attractiveness and that the Nyx making Erynn looking the way she does is wrong. In that case, you are wrong.
Sometimes I forget that there are a significant number of users so far gone on this forum any critique whatsoever of a VN they enjoy is taken like a personal insult upon themselves.

That snarky comment I posted was in response to a snarky comment, yes it was incorrect.

Will you be okay now?
 

Venoma

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Really good game overall so far...but sweet jesus the character writing went completely jump-the-shark overboard with all the girls' constant internal monologue additions.

Like you already have the MC written in as a complete 'every girl wants you" stud. That extra layer of non stop "here is a reassurance ego boost for you just in case what is happening in the game isn't enough to adequately pet any extreme insecurity complex a player might have" is actually serving to be more immersion breaking as whole then anything else. Which also just waters down the female characters as individuals imo, and in essence just accomplishing the exact opposite of it's intended effect for me. It's basically like the writer wants me to feel alpha while playing it, while at the same time trying to remind me non-stop that they are writing these character presentations under some hard assumption that I'm actually anything but and some fragile flower type.


I mean beggars can't be choosers I guess when it comes to games that at least get the solid english presentation right I guess...but yeah. You could pretty much delete out 90% of that and the writing comes out the other side better for it minus the small handful of people out there that need and/or are actually going to get off any extra on that type of petting.
 
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Venoma

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I think the character writing is top tier, but if it really bothers you that much you can always move on, beggar :)
Other then that is it top'ish tier. That's why it bothers me. There is nothing top tier about 300 additional included lines of cringy mental thought text stressing to the player how obsessed every girl is in "you and only you". Which as a backdrop just completely contradicts the otherwise great natural flow presentation the writing would have without it.

Like i said it comes across a lot more thrown in there to cater to to a few delicate and overly insecure player mindsets more then anything else imo. As pretty much all the girls' decisions/actions within the game, along with a endless amount of well done banter between you and them, is already enough as a whole to que the player in that the girl really likes you.
 
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pds72

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From playing through Layla and Alexis are his sisters it quite obvious, hope I'm wrong but the way they kept hiding her dad after showing you your dad.
I think that is just a red herring.
1. The dev is on Patreon so if it was true, it could never be said.
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These game so many minor details you can't see in one play through.
 
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Venoma

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I think that is just a red herring.
I left off thinking the same thing. If anything I think it's just a tease nod towards a specific group of people here who would like that to end up being the case, but won't for the reasons you stated.

Given the Witcher jab and some of the other twists and hard in a good way choices he's thrown in (that scumbag mode Julie choice made me have to restart my game) the Dev strikes me as the type that would get a behind the scenes kick out of that too.
 
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DDS0522

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Hello there,

Not writing often, but I just test and finish all the game (so fare) and, I like it very much. I can't really tell about all the writing (because a pass some of them without reading) but the part I have read was pretty good (for my English knowledge :p). The most frustrating thing on this game is the fact you need to choose witch girl you want (and honestly, I don’t know which I want …). So, if someone want to make a Harem mod for saving me to have the hardest chose to make :p.

Have a good day guys !
 
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