VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[Deleted member 3313072]

I KNEW I recognized the "Layla" model from somewhere. "Family Man...?" had her model, just not as detailed as this game is. I don't know her anywhere else but from there. She certainly looks better here I guess I'm just short on the uptake.

 

[Gladheim]

Not much to talk about this week. Finished the bus ride renders and started working on the first training camp scenes. You'll finally see an actual track field and some training.
Can't say much more, because anything I'll say will spoil too much.

Zach and Natasha's family name will most likely be Gallagher. I'm actually really happy about that since Rory Gallagher is one of my favourite musicians!
Thank you to all voters!

Well, that's pretty much it. Let's see if I have more to talk about next week.

 

[van321]

I find Zach a difficult character to like, lacking the charm of goofball friends from other games like Derek, Liam, Chris, Jacob, etc. You always had that friend who was cool in small doses but wouldn't shut up. I think he is supposed to be that way, though.

It makes me wonder... if there's a choice in the future that he takes as a betrayal (e.g. messing around with Valeria, ignoring him in pursuit of Layla/Erynn, blaming him for something that happens at camp), could that be another Julia decision? He blabbers about your escapades and unfaithfulness and it ends the Layla and Elena paths. By contrast, if you stick by him, he vouches for your character to Layla should the juggling with Lexi get revealed to her at an inopportune time.

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

I find Zach a difficult character to like, lacking the charm of goofball friends from other games like Derek, Liam, Chris, Jacob, etc. You always had that friend who was cool in small doses but wouldn't shut up. I think he is supposed to be that way, though.

It makes me wonder... if there's a choice in the future that he takes as a betrayal (e.g. messing around with Valeria, ignoring him in pursuit of Layla/Erynn, blaming him for something that happens at camp), could that be another Julia decision? He blabbers about your escapades and unfaithfulness and it ends the Layla and Elena paths. By contrast, if you stick by him, he vouches for your character to Layla should the juggling with Lexi get revealed to her at an inopportune time.

I kinda feel the same about Zach. If he had more besides "chicks, chicks, chicks", he might be more bearable. But like, even sports or chilling is just another chance for Zach to talk about getting chicks.

On the other hand, I kind of don't mind it because its sort of like the reverse Bechdel test with Intertwined. Which makes me chuckle. (although we do have moments with Dylan and with the bar scene with Santi that break it)

 

[KoGa3]

Hi guys, first of all, I like this game (atleast which I played) keep it up!
Well, now the reason why Im posting is because when you are in the beach with Layla and she says to the MC to wake up I get a "not response" window. The game freezes my pc and I must shut down it. Anyone can help me? I would love to keep playing it, its the first time I have a problem like that. Thanks beforehand.

PS: Sorry my English, its not my language. For more info about my problem, I use the music/walkthrough/cheats mod. Thanks again!

Only saw this now. I know it's a bit late but maybe you can remember: was it at that point?

I checked it, but couldn't really find a problem there (there is no change from me at this point in the game). Nevertheless, sorry about that and thanks for trying my Mod.

 

[Sexy11]

If the creator of this game is hanging here, I would like to suggest for a few things.
1. An ingame Bio of character.
- The game have many different girl that look alike. And with their path intertwined each other, it will be great to have a bio to keep track of things
2. Gallery
- To keep track of different scene that we may have missed and replay them for "various reason"

 

[Deleted member 3313072]

If the creator of this game is hanging here, I would like to suggest for a few things.
1. An ingame Bio of character.
- The game have many different girl that look alike. And with their path intertwined each other, it will be great to have a bio to keep track of things
2. Gallery
- To keep track of different scene that we may have missed and replay them for "various reason"

On #2...that's why I use scrappy's walkthrough mod, for the full scene gallery. Yes I only do Lexi's route, but it's nice to see "what would've been."

PS: Love the avatar choice by the way

 

[gelu123]

On #2...that's why I use scrappy's walkthrough mod, for the full scene gallery. Yes I only do Lexi's route, but it's nice to see "what would've been."

PS: Love the avatar choice by the way

Yeah indeed scrappy mod is usefull for finding missed scene , i for exemple didnt know there was a scene with lexi on phone ... apparently you shouldnt flirt with layla at all and also help eryn (which for me was impossible )

 

[Johnny Bravo.]

I just notice that they said there where going to be other schools at the camp and I said to myself hmm I wonder if Cara's school will be there now wouldn't that be something to see lol.

 

[BeansAndToast]

I just notice that they said there where going to be other schools at the camp and I said to myself hmm I wonder if Cara's school will be there now wouldn't that be something to see lol.

Would be the only thing that gets me to go back and play the Cara route.

 

[Johnny Bravo.]

Would be the only thing that gets me to go back and play the Cara route.

I hear you which means starting the game over or at least have a save file of her route.

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

I just notice that they said there where going to be other schools at the camp and I said to myself hmm I wonder if Cara's school will be there now wouldn't that be something to see lol.

I really like that idea. I know its more work for Nyx, but I really want to see the Cara/Nikki paths split from each other instead of essentially being alternates of a single path. I understand why it started out like that, but it'd be nice to give them more variance now.

 

[manusuke]

Only saw this now. I know it's a bit late but maybe you can remember: was it at that point?

I checked it, but couldn't really find a problem there (there is no change from me at this point in the game). Nevertheless, sorry about that and thanks for trying my Mod.

Sorry for delay. I don't know why I had the problem, I try w/o the mod, advanced a little and installed the mod after and works fine again XD

 

[Deleted member 1146768]

The moron who made this game never rote a bike in his like. Sitting on the steering bar? Seriously? I stopped reading this shitty game after that. I'm really confused why this miserable pile of shit has such high score.

 

[Bucketbot89]

The moron who made this game never rote a bike in his like. Sitting on the steering bar? Seriously? I stopped reading this shitty game after that. I'm really confused why this miserable pile of shit has such high score.

Because most of us aren't too concerned about bicycle safety while reading an adult vn. That said, I do wish we were actually able to say no when asked about giving her a ride.

 

[Deleted member 1146768]

Because most of us aren't too concerned about bicycle safety while reading an adult vn. That said, I do wish we were actually able to say no when asked about giving her a ride.

It's not about "bicycle safety", it's about fucking common sense. Try riding with anyone, even a child, on the fucking steering bar of a bike. It's just stupid. Also, the game is badly written, full of cliches, terrible renders, doll-like women. It's just a mess.

 

[MrFriendly]

Because most of us aren't too concerned about bicycle safety while reading an adult vn. That said, I do wish we were actually able to say no when asked about giving her a ride.

As if the entire idea isn't a timeworn trope in romantic fiction made popular by a rather famous scene in the movie Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid...

 

[Bucketbot89]

As if the entire idea isn't a timeworn trope in romantic fiction made popular by a rather famous scene in the movie Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid...

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Yeah but then I'd have to romance a redhead, and that ain't happening.

 

[MrFriendly]

Yeah but then I'd have to romance a redhead, and that ain't happening.

How dare you! Redheads are glorious!

(Though I just am completely not into Cara... Lexi or Nikki for me... But in any other case... How dare you!)

 

[Deleted member 1146768]

As if the entire idea isn't a timeworn trope in romantic fiction made popular by a rather famous scene in the movie Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid...

At least in the screenshot you showed us it appears more realistc. You can see her grabbing his hands very tightly and afraid to fall at any moment. I'm serious. Try riding a bike with someone on the steering bar of a bike. If he won't fall, he's a good doublé (stuntman)