If I were you, I would read the story again because your facts are wrong!
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Objection. Too many hearsays, leadings, compounds, non-expert opinions in this forum
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Don't like something like the truth get in the way of a good story
You keep repeating this but it is not in the story.
Erynn was supposed to go to the concert with Alexis but Alexis cancels on her so she can take the MC, The only time I see Erynn break the friendship is when she finds the photos of the MC and Alexis on the MC's phone, also if you don't intervene with Ethan when he hits Erynn, Alexis will break up with you
With her, it wasn't just about being blonde, bro.
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Anyway all about the relationship between Erynn and MC is just too less engaging. Of course there are hints and flasbacks of erynn too but that wat counts is that there is a girl which never liked ethan and stayed successfully away from him ad anooother girl who couldnt get rid him after the incident with young MC.
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I need to check because Erynn also broke up with Lexi when Ethan blackmailed Alexis to seperate her and Erynn.
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Just create your bubble universe or religion around Erynn to explain everything..for me as a love interest she is just not really engaging written so far.
As a friend who need help she is fine but the few facts to be the MC's princess are currently to thin. May Nyx will try somehow in later updates to work it more out but now this flasback stuff with erynn does not really work and it also let look Erynn as silly somehow.
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Puma1978, have a question for You.
Ever try switching Gender-Roles just for clearer comprehension on this VN(or any VN for that matter)?
Lets say for example:
MC is a really cute/goodlooking female, slightly younger then her neighbor/childhood closest best bud(Eran, male version of Erynn).
Whom happens to be her first real crush/love of her life.
Grew up with eachother for as long as can be remembered.
Both of You are very near and dear, love eachother like no other friendship ever.
He has a best friend(lets call him Alex, male version of Alexis).
Ofcorse a slightly older female who's always been mean to you(Female version of Ethan)
Lets call her Evilyn.
Is always trying to get You out of the way and belittle you.
Evilyn has always had hots for your favorite guy/person/LI.
Finally the day comes when she(MC) works up the courage asking to be her boyfriend.
He's he's happy and shocked and at the same time.
Evilyn & Alex are looking at something funny on a phone/tablet/device.
Eran says one moment to see what their on about, it's funny, they laugh.
Female MC is crushed and storms off not wanting to speak with any one of them.
She doesn't want to ever look at him again.
Ignores all attempts and phone-calls from Eran trying to talk with her.
When Eran goes to talk with Female-MC, she wants nothing to do with him.
Her father(male version of Emily) says, give her time to cool off.
But she never cools off, only grows more hurt and angered.
Becomes troubled and rebellious increasingly due to this anger/hurt.
Finally ends up moving off with her mom, without a single word.
5 Years later.
Alex(male Alexis) spots Female-MC visiting his cousins store and she's Smoken HOT!
Then .....ends up on a flight with her.
Playing like he does not know who she(female-MC) is.
She(smoken hot female-MC) tells him all about Eran.
What and how it happened, bearing her heart and obviously vulnerable.
Alex(male Alexis), see's the opportunity to get laid.
Doesn't try to console her with what really happened, let alone who he is.
Just wants to fuck her and not tell her the truth.
He's not going to tell his "best friend" Eran.
Maby even sometime down the road when Alex and Eran might attend a Concert together.
Alex will ditch his best friend to take out Hot Female MC.
Not telling either one of them what's really going on.
Ever think from that perspective with the base of this VN fairly the same but Sex/Gender the opposite?
More so, how would that set with You?
Ever try switching Gender-Roles just for clearer comprehension on this VN(or any VN for that matter)?
Lets say for example:
MC is a really cute/goodlooking female, slightly younger then her neighbor/childhood closest best bud(Eran, male version of Erynn).
Whom happens to be her first real crush/love of her life.
Grew up with eachother for as long as can be remembered.
Both of You are very near and dear, love eachother like no other friendship ever.
He has a best friend(lets call him Alex, male version of Alexis).
Ofcorse a slightly older female who's always been mean to you(Female version of Ethan)
Lets call her Evilyn.
Is always trying to get You out of the way and belittle you.
Evilyn has always had hots for your favorite guy/person/LI.
Finally the day comes when she(MC) works up the courage asking to be her boyfriend.
He's he's happy and shocked and at the same time.
Evilyn & Alex are looking at something funny on a phone/tablet/device.
Eran says one moment to see what their on about, it's funny, they laugh.
Female MC is crushed and storms off not wanting to speak with any one of them.
She doesn't want to ever look at him again.
Ignores all attempts and phone-calls from Eran trying to talk with her.
When Eran goes to talk with Female-MC, she wants nothing to do with him.
Her father(male version of Emily) says, give her time to cool off.
But she never cools off, only grows more hurt and angered.
Becomes troubled and rebellious increasingly due to this anger/hurt.
Finally ends up moving off with her mom, without a single word.
5 Years later.
Alex(male Alexis) spots Female-MC visiting his cousins store and she's Smoken HOT!
Then .....ends up on a flight with her.
Playing like he does not know who she(female-MC) is.
She(smoken hot female-MC) tells him all about Eran.
What and how it happened, bearing her heart and obviously vulnerable.
Alex(male Alexis), see's the opportunity to get laid.
Doesn't try to console her with what really happened, let alone who he is.
Just wants to fuck her and not tell her the truth.
He's not going to tell his "best friend" Eran.
Maby even sometime down the road when Alex and Eran might attend a Concert together.
Alex will ditch his best friend to take out Hot Female MC.
Not telling either one of them what's really going on.
Ever think from that perspective with the base of this VN fairly the same but Sex/Gender the opposite?
More so, how would that set with You?
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On the fence about whether Erynn will be my choice but still don't want to see a sudden death, especially since there doesn't seem to be anything the MC could have done to prevent or alter it.
This sounds exhausting lol. Not sure many who want to play these games for the reasons we do would want to do that...
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Simple perspective from the opposite side or should i say, putting the shoe on the other foot.
Fortunately for Nyx, the majority of readers prefer Alexis, based off numerous polls on Patreon.
How so? How has Erynn been written to screw up things with the other ladies?
How does "it also let look Erynn as silly somehow?"
So far...
It has been my experience that people who dislike Erynn in this thread have completely distorted the facts and the story. They have 'created a bubble universe or religion' around Erynn to explain why they don't like her (as you put it).
A lot of the people who agree with you have said that she just doesn't have the largest share of the story... So far.
We are reading a story which is released in segments. Work-in-progress. The story is being written as we go. We don't have all of the information. Jumping to a conclusion based off limited information is exactly what these people are doing.
"So far, Erynn's character has not been very engaging," would be a legitimate reason to explain why you might choose another LI over Erynn. But to simply say, "Erynn's character is trash because I don't have enough of the story yet..."?
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Like i've shared with You and others, after seeing the image Val kicking Ethan in in the Nuttz.
I'd have her baby!!
Going by amount of compositions sake.
Alexis has the highest content per character.
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I think Val, Iris or Nikki would be best for the MC
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Don't try the gender swap argument. The situations are written with the gender difference in mind.
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Since you have requested elaboration I will do my best to extrapolate on my statement, but be aware that it is merely the impression that I get. Erryn is initially introduced just as a pain point, but the first time we actually see her in person she interferes with a pleasant night out that MC is having with Layla. This ends up being a pattern. Regardless of whether or not MC accepts her invitation her inappropriate level of attachment and presumption that he would drop all of his friends to be with her makes Layla feel insecure with him. Next, she is a bone of contention with Alexis. Even though MC is not her boyfriend, and never has been, Alexis doesn't feel comfortable sharing with her that her relationship with the MC is flowering. This causes undue tension in this relationship as well. Again, this seems contrived because to MC Erynn is just the one that got away and they have no real relationship beyond being neighbors. She isn't a love interest in and of herself, but rather a romantic foil. She doesn't seem to have a place in the story that doesn't involve making MC choose between her friendship and romance with the other girls. We get to see the other relationships develop from introductions to the building of affection and affinity, eventually to romance and passion. But everything regarding Erryn is confined to the distant past and is merely uncomfortable in the present while having no apparent future. Her main purpose seems to be to pop up and make the other girls insecure because she is a model. This isn't a flaw in her character, but only in how she has been used to this point.
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What is true in ur summary and what fits also to my explanation is that so far Erynns story is just not as detailed and engaging written like the one of Lexi. But of course everyone can blow up some details to get to the point she must be the only real LI to MC. And to make sure Erynn is not trash to me but a good childhood friend who i care about. But with current story she is not really a Love Intrest to me.
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Anyway..a real friend or boyfriend would immediatley chase a girl away who is bullying his gf. The fact is that Alex already commited as teenager that he does not like Evylin and til today is not close with her while Eran obviously couldnt get rid of Evilyn until today and even let her manipulate him against his friends.
To be honest it would be more realistic that younger girls like older boys than opposite but u skipped thr scene where Alex went after her and comforted her ( of course u will now call it accidently because later Eran explains also he searched her right after he run away).
Anyway..a real friend or boyfriend would immediatley chase a girl away who is bullying his gf. The fact is that Alex already commited as teenager that he does not like Evylin and til today is not close with her while Eran obviously couldnt get rid of Evilyn until today and even let her manipulate him against his friends.
Alexis didn't go look for MC to comfort him. She was going home because she didn't want to listen to the bickering between Erynn and Ethan. She saw MC sitting there and asked how he was.
This has been confirmed by Nyx herself on Discord!