VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[LSC82]

Who's the guy at the beach bar?


Who do you think is the handsome surfer guy at the beach bar that the MC finds familiar?

a. Erynn's ex-boyfriend in the blackmail sex video?
b. Brooke's brother?
c. Ethan's brother?
d. Someone else

A.It's gonna cause further delays in "romancing Erynn", which means it's probably him.
B.They have similar color hair, but Brooke is too minor a character to impact anything.
C.No idea how that would affect the story, plus where was he all this time? Does he work with his father too?
D. Alexis could use "something" to spice up the staleness, but giving her an ex that she still carries the torch for would probably cause fury and rage...
Plus she belongs with Zack

 

[xXwankerXx]

What, are you telling me your dog never ate your homework before?

He must've kept it fed real good if the dog never even tried to. I guess ppl like SCAMcstor, who always use this excuse, are really shitty masters or really shitty liars, and I don't know why I suspect it's 100% the 2nd option.

Frankly, I just don't see this as a problem,and not just because I am somewhat a fan of the kink.

I say go for it, it hurts exactly nobody.

Mos of us share your opinion, but Patreon would definitely lose their shit and wet their panties due to that coz they and credit card companies are very anal about incest and stepcest in fiction, even if characters are not blood related.

Plus she belongs with Zack

All the women in the game belong to him, that's the brutal truth. He just lets the MC warm them up for his pee-pee... I mean big bad bazooka. Why else would be called Zack Attack, right ?? Unless he's a mentally retarded virgin. It's like RL porn... women start off small and fuck smaller guys first before moving to 'bigger' ones, DP's, triple penetration, gangbangs and all that shit some of them do for a bigger paycheck.

No NO NO we agreed before in previous pages that Zach and ethan

Add Tori, her dickhead BF (forgot his name), Lucas, the butthurt geography teacher, Rachel (assuming she ain't dead), Zane (Erynn's ex) and Andres (MC's not-dad) to the list of 'lucky' characters. Hope Nyx reads your comment and takes proper action.

 

[Trojaner]

No NO NO we agreed before in previous pages that Zach and ethan ,
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And i said that i feel really sorry for the Shark. I never understand why people like to Hurt animals so much.

 

[FunFuntomes]

No NO NO we agreed before in previous pages that Zach and ethan ,
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why would you give a shark foodpoisoning ?

 

[misfolk]

I don't get the problem with potential LIs ending up in different relationships if MC is on a different path.

I don't either, but a lot of people scream bloody NTR even if your dad dares to fuck your mom in the game. But I guess Intertwined being anti-harem already keeps them away.

 

[Dom Toretto]

The big question ❓ is will Ethan fuck Alexis and her bestie over the blackmail he has on her and if so when the MC fines out what options will be available to go from there

 

[hakuna-matata]

I don't either, but a lot of people scream bloody NTR even if your dad dares to fuck your mom in the game. But I guess Intertwined being anti-harem already keeps them away.

Some people are just plain weird and crazy. OMG!! A make believe character made eye contact with another make believe character other than the make believe MC; stop the presses!!!! Call 911!!!

 

[Cabin Fever]

Erynn already seemed to recognize John from somewhere, so I bet he's Melissa's ex and her dad, and all that talk about getting knocked up after a one-night stand is a lie. She and Iris are obviously half sisters, just like you said. Something must've happened between him and Melissa, and they broke up. The dude probably cheated on her, so don't be surprised if he's best friends with MC's bio dad, coz cheaters and manwhores have to stick together in this game.

You got it backwards. It was John recognizing Erynn as someone that looks familiar. Not the other way around.

 

[LSC82]

You got it backwards. It was John recognizing Erynn as someone that looks familiar. Not the other way around.

Both things are true actually.
Erynn looks at John agasp, the MC asks her what is it... and she says she had a "stupid thought", which to me meant it at least crossed her mind how remarkably similar this guy is to her father's description.
And then John says Erynn reminds him of someone he knew when he was younger.
Oh and the MC keeps thinking how Iris and Erynn look like each other... he just stops short of saying they could pass for sisters lol.

Can't really hammer the point much more than that...

 

[Deleted member 2030943]

Yeah, I'm pretty sure John is Eryns father. Iris kinda gives it away.

 

[xXwankerXx]

You got it backwards. It was John recognizing Erynn as someone that looks familiar. Not the other way around.

Uhh, you sure, dude ?? You might wanna replay the game first before making assumptions. So, I just loaded a save from when they meet Iris when going to ask John for help and got this... the MC recognizes the similarities between Iris and Erynn, which can only be Nyx hinting they're half-sisters, and as soon as they see him, Erynn says this... spoiler bellow.

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John DOES say she REMINDS him of someone he knew, but Erynn notices first how much he looks like what Melissa described her mystery dad looks like, and he meant to say that she reminds him of her mom. She was his GF in the flashback scene in this update, so you got it all backwards, not me. But we all make mistakes, right ??

Both things are true actually. And then John says Erynn reminds him of someone he knew when he was younger.

Yeah, this is the proof that John is Melissa's ex and Erynn's dad, which is real funny for those of us on the Erynn path who're ok with Emily dating him now. I bet Melissa will also be really happy about it, but that's not a problem that a 3some can't fix.

Yeah, I'm pretty sure John is Eryns father. Iris kinda gives it away.

It's not a secret anymore, since this update basically cleared that up. The only annoying question remaining is whether Navarro is MC's bio dad or not.

 

[Cabin Fever]

Both things are true actually.
Erynn looks at John agasp, the MC asks her what is it... and she says she had a "stupid thought", which to me meant it at least crossed her mind how remarkably similar this guy is to her father's description.
And then John says Erynn reminds him of someone he knew when he was younger.
Oh and the MC keeps thinking how Iris and Erynn look like each other... he just stops short of saying they could pass for sisters lol.

Can't really hammer the point much more than that...

Uhh, you sure, dude ?? You might wanna replay the game first before making assumptions. So, I just loaded a save from when they meet Iris when going to ask John for help and got this... the MC recognizes the similarities between Iris and Erynn, which can only be Nyx hinting they're half-sisters, and as soon as they see him, Erynn says this... spoiler bellow.

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John DOES say she REMINDS him of someone he knew, but Erynn notices first how much he looks like what Melissa described her mystery dad looks like, and he meant to say that she reminds him of her mom. She was his GF in the flashback scene in this update, so you got it all backwards, not me. But we all make mistakes, right ??



Yeah, this is the proof that John is Melissa's ex and Erynn's dad, which is real funny for those of us on the Erynn path who're ok with Emily dating him now. I bet Melissa will also be really happy about it, but that's not a problem that a 3some can't fix.



It's not a secret anymore, since this update basically cleared that up. The only annoying question remaining is whether Navarro is MC's bio dad or not.

Well I stand corrected. Nothing to see here. Please move right along...

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Yeah, I'm pretty sure John is Eryns father. Iris kinda gives it away.

Be a pretty awkward reunion when John meets Melissa again
John: Hi remember me,
I had a one night stand with you 18 years ago and then disappeared,
well I’m back and no hard feelings but I’m also fucking your bestfriend Emily and will probly give her another baby that mc and my our daughter Erynn can take turns baby sitting, hey you got any beers left in your fridge?

 

[Cabin Fever]

Be a pretty awkward reunion when John meets Melissa again
John: Hi remember me,
I had a one night stand with you 18 years ago and then disappeared,
well I’m back and no hard feelings but I’m also fucking your bestfriend Emily and will probly give her another baby that mc and my our daughter Erynn can take turns baby sitting while her son impregnates your daughter, hey you got any beers left in your fridge?

There, fixed it for you. Even more intertwined. You're welcome.

 

[Jericho85]

I think all the hints of familiarity between Erynn, John, and Iris are a red herring. It's a conclusion that I think the dev is trying to lead people toward but it can still be a misdirection. It's not like that hasn't happened before (Ex: The cliffhanger of AWOL Erynn and the Dumpster Girl)

Also, I think there was some dialogue between Erynn and MC where she said that all she knows of her father is a visual description of him and his name. If we're assuming the visual description is of tall, blonde tattoo'd man named John, then it should have set off some major alarms with Erynn. But it seemed like he reminded her of someone she already knew before and she never met her dad.

But the big flaw with the Papa John theory is his tattoos. I made a post about this a while back. In Chapter 10, the tattoos between John and Melissa's flashback man are distinctly different. But then, even present-time John's tattoos aren't exactly consistant either. Either way, I don't think it's a lock that John is Erynn's dad. Erynn's dad could be that blonde talent scout in the jacket for all we know. The misdirection and guessing games are part of the fun with this dev.

 

[Deleted member 2030943]

I think all the hints of familiarity between Erynn, John, and Iris are a red herring. It's a conclusion that I think the dev is trying to lead people toward but it can still be a misdirection. It's not like that hasn't happened before (Ex: The cliffhanger of AWOL Erynn and the Dumpster Girl)

Also, I think there was some dialogue between Erynn and MC where she said that all she knows of her father is a visual description of him and his name. If we're assuming the visual description is of tall, blonde tattoo'd man named John, then it should have set off some major alarms with Erynn. But it seemed like he reminded her of someone she already knew before and she never met her dad.

But the big flaw with the Papa John theory is his tattoos. I made a post about this a while back. In Chapter 10, the tattoos between John and Melissa's flashback man are distinctly different. But then, even present-time John's tattoos aren't exactly consistant either. Either way, I don't think it's a lock that John is Erynn's dad. Erynn's dad could be that blonde talent scout in the jacket for all we know. The misdirection and guessing games are part of the fun with this dev.

Maybe, but Iris and Eryn basically look like twins. That's a little over the top for a red herring. Also, all the drama it could create between Emily, Melissa, and Eryn seems like it would be too entertaining not be true

 

[valbitterb]

Val starts to make her hot moves on the MC, but even sweet, innocent Layla knows how to keep her friends close, and her cockblocking even closer. The looks on her face are still precious even when she's jealous and smiling in passive-aggressive triumph over Val.

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[LSC82]

I think all the hints of familiarity between Erynn, John, and Iris are a red herring. It's a conclusion that I think the dev is trying to lead people toward but it can still be a misdirection. It's not like that hasn't happened before (Ex: The cliffhanger of AWOL Erynn and the Dumpster Girl)

Also, I think there was some dialogue between Erynn and MC where she said that all she knows of her father is a visual description of him and his name. If we're assuming the visual description is of tall, blonde tattoo'd man named John, then it should have set off some major alarms with Erynn. But it seemed like he reminded her of someone she already knew before and she never met her dad.

But the big flaw with the Papa John theory is his tattoos. I made a post about this a while back. In Chapter 10, the tattoos between John and Melissa's flashback man are distinctly different. But then, even present-time John's tattoos aren't exactly consistant either. Either way, I don't think it's a lock that John is Erynn's dad. Erynn's dad could be that blonde talent scout in the jacket for all we know. The misdirection and guessing games are part of the fun with this dev.

Honestly, if it's a red herring it's a rather heavy handed one because, as we already described, Nyx has been hinting at it incessantly... only to go "surprise, it's actually a totally different guy, who just happens to fit the same exact description".
It would be a bad, cheap plot twist at this point to go against soooo many fucking hints.

There, fixed it for you. Even more intertwined. You're welcome.

Does that means that the kids would be brothers(sisters) and cousins? I like it, that's the ultimate Intertwining

Yeah, this is the proof that John is Melissa's ex and Erynn's dad, which is real funny for those of us on the Erynn path who're ok with Emily dating him now. I bet Melissa will also be really happy about it, but that's not a problem that a 3some can't fix.

How about this...
Mc gets in a relationship with Erynn and John dates Emily, Iris and Melissa end up finding each other.
They all live together in one house as one big, happy, almost but not quite incestuous family lol.

 

[Jericho85]

Honestly, if it's a red herring it's a rather heavy handed one because, as we already described, Nyx has been hinting at it incessantly... only to go "surprise, it's actually a totally different guy, who just happens to fit the same exact description".
It would be a bad, cheap plot twist at this point to go against soooo many fucking hints.

I don't disagree, but the tattoo continuity thing is still weird to me. It could very well be a mistake, but the fact that the tattoo differences occur within the same chapter makes me think it was deliberate for some reason.

Like I said, it strikes me as the same thing as the dumpster girl. Nyx strongly hinted that it might be Erynn back there, but we all know that was actually Rachel after Brooke cut the bitch and stuffed her behind the dumpster.

 

[Deleted member 2030943]

I don't disagree, but the tattoo continuity thing is still weird to me. It could very well be a mistake, but the fact that the tattoo differences occur within the same chapter makes me think it was deliberate for some reason.

Like I said, it strikes me as the same thing as the dumpster girl. Nyx strongly hinted that it might be Erynn back there, but we all know that was actually Rachel after Brooke cut the bitch and stuffed her behind the dumpster.

Tattoos can be covered up by newer tattoos.