VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[LSC82]

Like in the play, No Exit, if you were forced to be stuck in a room in hell with one person, would you pick Lexi or Ethan or Zach?

I guess Alexis but... LET ME OUT, LET ME OUT!!!!!!

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Mr Bubu

Just saw that Erynn requires 58 points to get her scene... on a "pristine" Erynn save i start the update with 60 or 62.
I though Nyx had relented on unreasonable point requirements...

Lots of traps that make you lose a ton of points too(like getting too aggressive sexually and even things from last episode like kissing Iris), which probably means people will fail to meet the next quota and not understand why she's suddenly gone cold.

Meanwhile there's a character that i have less than 20 points, scored negatively on a date we just had... and she didn't say a word about it...

Rudimentary creatures of blood, and flesh. You touch my mind, fumbling in ignorance, incapable of understanding.
There is a realm of existence so far beyond your own.
You cannot even imagine it. I am beyond your comprehension. I, am Goddess Nyx.

I understand your reference and it fits lol.

 

[nyrek]

But, there's so much shit that poisoned Intertwined, that I'm not sure for how long I can take it .

agreed. I can't put my finger on it exactly but I think it started somewhere around episode 7 or so? game seemed fine until then. since then... I've playing less and less routes with every new episode because I just can't make myself go through the same dull story over and over. this time I've only played a layla save the first day and made myself play an elena route last night on skip. just to see what their conversation looked like and if there's any layla reaction.
and the more I thought about the game in the last few days, the more I'm sure I'm dropping it. weird, stupid shit in the story, awful cliffhangers, secret paths... all characters making the same retarded faces over and over...
now, I have cut my games to about 4 in the past year because I both got bored of playing literally the same game with somewhat different looking characters over and over and I just don't have the patience to wait for almost a year to see a story progress. let's say taking a new game at episode 2 now. it will probably have 10 episodes total. what's the estimate for that game to be finished? and, as we know, dev times get longer and longer with more "complications" as the story moves on. most games take roughly 9 months to release a new episode and intertwined was... I wouldn't say tolerated but it was coming down towards it recently... anyway, I've "tolerated" (for lack of a better word at the moment) intertwined because it's the first AVN I played and nyx dished out updates fairly quick for the last few episodes, with decent chucks of renders in a fair amount of time. now it took her 6 months for a 1400 render update with a promise of a big update coming up? yeah, I doubt I'll be waiting for that one. especially when you know the cliffhanger resolution is going to be something incredibly stupid.
as shogun said when he announced he won't be posting updates anymore:
"the game just didn't make the cut"

Rudimentary creatures of blood, and flesh. You touch my mind, fumbling in ignorance, incapable of understanding.
There is a realm of existence so far beyond your own.
You cannot even imagine it. I am beyond your comprehension. I, am Goddess Nyx.

this made me chuckle
however I have to object, you're making her seem way too smart and capable
not saying she's an idiot but the story simply doesn't show anything genius about it or her.
it just looks like a parody of mexican soap operas - overexaggerating every YO SOY TU PADRE situation by making every character who even appears in a render connected to someone. what for? for more drama of course. more drama for the sake of more drama.

 

[Kazanovaromeo]

No more reactions.

Hahahaha.

Here's a "bad" pic ...

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Rescuing me from bad guys definitely not bad at all

 

[minibaer12]

...now, I have cut my games to about 4 in the past year because I both got bored of playing literally the same game with somewhat different looking characters over and over...

I absolutely agree with you on this point. I have a few games on the computer that not only hit the same LI's, but also the locations. The park as an example. How many times do you think I've seen it the same way in other games? Or the bar, the restaurant, the school and even the houses. At some point it gets tiring.

 

[nyrek]

it's not the locations and the model looks, I understand that part, it's hard to create your own environments or original characters, much easier to pay and download a premade. and if it's good enough for top games, why wouldn't it be good enough for the rest. so understandable on that part

it's the stories, the themes, the mary sue, the bad bitch, the wannabe way-too-cool-tattoed chick, the nerd, the rich chick/model, the goofy best friend, the plot with the bad guy... it's the same thing over and over

on a positive note, intertwined still has mel
but somehow nyx has managed to make her worse with the new shitty haircut

 

[valbitterb]

I guess Alexis but... LET ME OUT, LET ME OUT!!!!!!

Hate fucking Alexis for eternity!

Just saw that Erynn requires 58 points to get her scene... on a "pristine" Erynn save i start the update with 60 or 62.
I though Nyx had relented on unreasonable point requirements...

Lots of traps that make you lose a ton of points too(like getting too aggressive sexually and even things from last episode like kissing Iris), which probably means people will fail to meet the next quota and not understand why she's suddenly gone cold.

Meanwhile there's a character that i have less than 20 points, scored negatively on a date we just had... and she didn't say a word about it...

We know Nyx does have her favorites ...

I understand your reference and it fits lol.

Is it the Twilight Zone? or something else?

Rescuing me from bad guys definitely not bad at all

 

[LSC82]

Hate fucking Alexis for eternity!

I guess.

We know Nyx does have her favorites ...

Yeah what are we gonna do

Is it the Twilight Zone? or something else?

Mass Effect, it's a game series.
That line is from the main villain of the first game, a ancient uber powerful artificial inteligence that is plans to wipe out humanity and other races of the galaxy.

Needless to say big sense of superiority lol.

 

[valbitterb]

I guess.

That 30 year old face, those 50 year old hands ... for eternity ... brrrrr ... shiver ... shudder ...

Yeah what are we gonna do

We all float what we've been falar ...

Mass Effect, it's a game series.
That line is from the main villain of the first game, a ancient uber powerful artificial inteligence that is plans to wipe out humanity and other races of the galaxy.

Needless to say big sense of superiority lol.

The last sentence is all Nyx hahahaa.

 

[riddikk91]

Fuuuuuck... I came here to catch up on the latest news about the latest version of this fine game - but the last 4-5 pages?

Wow... I'm gobsmacked... it doesnt speak well for the future of mankind when so many people get so wound up about a fantasy porn game!!

Maybe I just have two feet firmly planted in reality to bother but...

Peace to all of you!!!
(I think a LOT of people here need to find some...)

 

[Dessolos]

and the more I thought about the game in the last few days, the more I'm sure I'm dropping it. weird, stupid shit in the story, awful cliffhangers, secret paths... all characters making the same retarded faces over and over...
now, I have cut my games to about 4 in the past year because I both got bored of playing literally the same game with somewhat different looking characters over and over and I just don't have the patience to wait for almost a year to see a story progress. let's say taking a new game at episode 2 now. it will probably have 10 episodes total. what's the estimate for that game to be finished? and, as we know, dev times get longer and longer with more "complications" as the story moves on. most games take roughly 9 months to release a new episode and intertwined was... I wouldn't say tolerated but it was coming down towards it recently... anyway, I've "tolerated" (for lack of a better word at the moment) intertwined because it's the first AVN I played and nyx dished out updates fairly quick for the last few episodes, with decent chucks of renders in a fair amount of time. now it took her 6 months for a 1400 render update with a promise of a big update coming up? yeah, I doubt I'll be waiting for that one. especially when you know the cliffhanger resolution is going to be something incredibly stupid.
as shogun said when he announced he won't be posting updates anymore:
"the game just didn't make the cut"

Honestly I feel at least for me in alot of these games it comes down to either your enjoyment level or you have to find that one Love Interest that speaks to you to get attached to a game to like / love it despite all it's faults it may have or things you normally wouldn't enjoy in other games. Especially if it's a slice of life game like this one a bit different if there is an actual storyline that is good. For me that Love interest is Erynn and at times Alexis but mostly Erynn , which does turn into a high amount of enjoyment for me. Which is why I only have about 13 games I get super excited for to the point I'll drop everything to play and some of them ill think about a bit too often.

Every other games while I may have a LI I like alot and I rarely drop games Ill get around to them when I feel like it. However i'm a rare individual as well where I have a hard time dropping games. Even one that I know that are bad cause either I do like a character , I get a tiny bit of enjoyment even if it's shit or curiosity gets the better of me and I just have to keep playing it to see what happens even if it's crap. However those games are so low on my list I probably only play them every 2 to 3 updates or I just forget about them and I kind of do drop them without realizing it. I think I've only dropped something like 3 games officially.

 

[ImSenjou]

I was bored and decided to try other paths, what a horrible thing Val's path turned out to be, it became the worst in my opinion, and two updates ago it was my main one.

For now, I'm going to focus on Gabi, even though it seems destined not to have a good ending.

That series that the MC watched, where the stepmother has an affair with her husband's son, was a good sign.

Although Gabi appears to be getting a divorce, so she wouldn't be our stepmother, could this be an opening that Nyx is creating to make our relationship with Gabi work and perhaps have a future?

 

[Dessolos]

Just saw that Erynn requires 58 points to get her scene... on a "pristine" Erynn save i start the update with 60 or 62.
I though Nyx had relented on unreasonable point requirements...

Lots of traps that make you lose a ton of points too(like getting too aggressive sexually and even things from last episode like kissing Iris), which probably means people will fail to meet the next quota and not understand why she's suddenly gone cold.

Meanwhile there's a character that i have less than 20 points, scored negatively on a date we just had... and she didn't say a word about it...

Yean I spent like 2-3 hours speed running figuring out what I was doing wrong my first time playing the update. Till I downloaded the scrappy mode to get a pristine Erynn and saved right before episode 12 and reinstalled without the scrappy mod. Turned out I missed 2 options I never take going fast on the motorcycle, I always pick go slow and not kissing her after the Ethan Alley.

 

[Elduriel]

I was bored and decided to try other paths, what a horrible thing Val's path turned out to be, it became the worst in my opinion, and two updates ago it was my main one.

For now, I'm going to focus on Gabi, even though it seems destined not to have a good ending.

That series that the MC watched, where the stepmother has an affair with her husband's son, was a good sign.

Although Gabi appears to be getting a divorce, so she wouldn't be our stepmother, could this be an opening that Nyx is creating to make our relationship with Gabi work and perhaps have a future?

I'm also holding out for a Gabi path, however unlikely it is to be true (also Mel, she is on the LI list but Nyx could just be fucking with us on that)

 

[LSC82]

Yean I spent like 2-3 hours speed running figuring out what I was doing wrong my first time playing the update. Till I downloaded the scrappy mode to get a pristine Erynn and saved right before episode 12 and reinstalled without the scrappy mod. Turned out I missed 2 options I never take going fast on the motorcycle, I always pick go slow and not kissing her after the Ethan Alley.

Yeah it's an unreasonable amount, i have combed things up and down so i can meet this score, but someone playing blind will probably miss some silly choices here and there and fail to meet this requirement.
Thank god for mods!!!

And one of the things Nyx done for 10.5 was to give more reasonable point requirements on various paths, i guess she forgot and went back to old habits...

 

[Acsuka]

I was bored and decided to try other paths, what a horrible thing Val's path turned out to be, it became the worst in my opinion, and two updates ago it was my main one.

For now, I'm going to focus on Gabi, even though it seems destined not to have a good ending.

That series that the MC watched, where the stepmother has an affair with her husband's son, was a good sign.

Although Gabi appears to be getting a divorce, so she wouldn't be our stepmother, could this be an opening that Nyx is creating to make our relationship with Gabi work and perhaps have a future?

I agree with you. Gabi is a character available at the beginning of the story. There's a lot more potential in this character than we're getting. Yes, I know many games have a teacher/student relationship, but if Nyx makes this option, you could give it more content. Just like the other main characters. Yes, there are a few scenes with him, but it's still just a subplot in the main story. There would be so many possibilities to create content with it, which would be exciting and fun, but unfortunately these scenarios remain in the minds of the players...

 

[Kazanovaromeo]

That 30 year old face, those 50 year old hands ... for eternity ... brrrrr ... shiver ... shudder ...



We all float what we've been falar ...

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The last sentence is all Nyx hahahaa.

Wonderful my friend wonderful , you stop bad pic and moved to horror , thank you very much man

 

[valbitterb]

At least Nyx brought Layla's chichis line of dialogue back in episode 12.



She took out the word "chichis" in episode 11 and replaced the word with "boobs".

Chichis became the MC and Layla's thing from the Spanish lesson at the pizza restaurant. So I'm glad Nyx brought the original line back.

 

[Kazanovaromeo]

At least Nyx brought Layla's Chichis back in episode 12.

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She took them out in episode 11.

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as I told you before , you are playing another game than mine , oh , sorry , yes I played Layla path with Lexi tell I get my famous " you are a disgusting piece of shit " so , sorry again , may be this is Layla path alone , NO ??!!

 

[valbitterb]

as I told you before , you are playing another game than mine , oh , sorry , yes I played Layla path with Lexi tell I get my famous " you are a disgusting piece of shit " so , sorry again , may be this is Layla path alone , NO ??!!

Yes. It's Layla solo or Layla-Elena path (with Nikki/Cara, Erynn, Val path is blocked).

 

[LSC82]

I was bored and decided to try other paths, what a horrible thing Val's path turned out to be, it became the worst in my opinion, and two updates ago it was my main one.

For now, I'm going to focus on Gabi, even though it seems destined not to have a good ending.

That series that the MC watched, where the stepmother has an affair with her husband's son, was a good sign.

Although Gabi appears to be getting a divorce, so she wouldn't be our stepmother, could this be an opening that Nyx is creating to make our relationship with Gabi work and perhaps have a future?

I agree with you. Gabi is a character available at the beginning of the story. There's a lot more potential in this character than we're getting. Yes, I know many games have a teacher/student relationship, but if Nyx makes this option, you could give it more content. Just like the other main characters. Yes, there are a few scenes with him, but it's still just a subplot in the main story. There would be so many possibilities to create content with it, which would be exciting and fun, but unfortunately these scenarios remain in the minds of the players...

Gabi just isn't pushed as a main LI despite the fact that she's one of the more interesting storylines... teacher-student, affair of our father, she remains a secondary character.
She has great potential and ever since the first meeting we have with her i've been wondering when everything will go boom!!!!
But the relationship never moves past "fuck a little bit and keep quiet to everyone", and we never see Santiago with her either.