VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[LSC82]

Even without being an asshole, they're still out of pocket
Alexis should've said hell no to the fmk game since that would require mc to fuck or marry one of the other girls. Also, lol at Erryn looking MC dead in his eyes when saying she'd marry him.
She definitely should've said no to looking at Iris's couples pics
definitely should've said no to the dirty dancing lift attempts. Even without the ass grab, the way he was holding Erryn was still inappropriate.
Poor girl was setting herself up for failure trying to be a chill girlfriend.

The whole thing was bad for her... but you have the option of consoling her... or not
And the truth is, i want to do it again
I can't wait for the next opportunity to play one against the other

If it's in the BBQ with her whole family right there, making everybody uncomfortable... even better

Also, lol at Erryn looking MC dead in his eyes when saying she'd marry him.

You just know she meant this shit

 

[minibaer12]

Please tell me you manipulate it so you can get the topless kiss

Just to clarify: in addition to my "extended" route, there's also the regular Erynn vs. Alexis route. A MUST-HAVE!

When I say "everything," I see what I would also see in an Erynn solo route.

Sure that's entertaining, but it's gonna confuse the game down the line.

Of course there's still a way to be the ultimate asshole, playing within the rules

Alexis is your GF... but Nikki also thinks that, and Valeria also believes you guys are starting a relationship...
And because all that is not enough, you are also constantly teasing and flirting with Erynn, Iris... and has a no strings attached fuck buddy relationship with Gabi
And quite possibly has banged Melissa

Of course, this route is just a fun route.

Regarding Nikki and Cara, I have to say that, from my perspective, Nyx completely screwed up the MC's visit to them. I absolutely didn't like it, and since then, they've had no role in my routes.

I gave up on the entire Asshole route half a year ago. My "without LI" route has been launched instead. If I can, I'll fuck all the SCs here!

 

[Elduriel]

Didn't know you're into teacher/student roleplay.

someone's gotta do it even if it's hard work

 

[Dessolos]

someone's gotta do it even if it's hard work

Just not with Erynn she is for me , Mel might be kinky enough for that

 

[Elduriel]

Just not with Erynn , Mel might be kinky enough for that

with Erynn it won't be roleplay But Slexi is sure up for it

 

[Dessolos]

with Erynn it won't be roleplay But Slexi is sure up for it

lmfao I may need to bring out the lesbian chair. I'm thinking of Lexi helping Erynn out so they do some " roleplay" and it turns into sexy time.

 

[Justaphase]

I don't know if Nyx has any new ideas for that part (the beach date), but goddamn it, in the current version Alexis just doesn't take a hint
No matter how awful you do in that part, she just keeps moving along

I don't know if you remember, but in one version(patched because it was just too stupid) it was possible to have a fight with her over a dumb hat(valbitterb, Justaphase remember this one?).
But somehow she just accepts the MC staring at Erynn's butt, later grabbing it, saying you'd marry Erynn (including "killing" Alexis) and sneaking into Erynn's stall(i guess she didn't witness this one...).
Jesus Christ learn to take a hint woman

Hat>Let's fight and cancel the club
Your boyfriend being majorly into your BFF>No problem

Maybe there should be a lower threshold on how bad you perform there leading to a fight/break up.
Makes more sense than fighting over a hat.


Sure that's entertaining, but it's gonna confuse the game down the line.

Of course there's still a way to be the ultimate asshole, playing within the rules

Alexis is your GF... but Nikki also thinks that, and Valeria also believes you guys are starting a relationship...
And because all that is not enough, you are also constantly teasing and flirting with Erynn, Iris... and has a no strings attached fuck buddy relationship with Gabi
And quite possibly has banged Melissa

Lexi - "That hat makes you look like a douche."
MC - "You're calling me a douche?! I'm sick of you Alexis!"
*Then proceeds to do his usual storm off like a douche, leaving Lexi confused and crying.*
It went something like that from what I remember. I think it was also related to seeing Val trying on Darryl's hat at the beach and the MC being jealous? I kinda miss the Val scene with her in the hat though, it's not in the game anymore either right? I haven't seen it for a long time.

There are some thick walls in those beach stalls I tell you, it's like they are their own universe or something. Apparently Lexi doesn't hear the MC sneak into Erynn's stall or speak to her. Neither of them hear you and Iris fuck or Lexi give the MC a blowjob.

Alexis is your GF... but Nikki also thinks that, and Valeria also believes you guys are starting a relationship...
And because all that is not enough, you are also constantly teasing and flirting with Erynn, Iris... and has a no strings attached fuck buddy relationship with Gabi
And quite possibly has banged Melissa

This is one of the go straight to hell, do not pass go, do not collect $200 saves. He deserves some really bad karma and consequences in this one.

 

[LSC82]

Lexi - "That hat makes you look like a douche."
MC - "You're calling me a douche?! I'm sick of you Alexis!"
*Then proceeds to do his usual storm off like a douche, leaving Lexi confused and crying.*
It went something like that from what I remember. I think it was also related to seeing Val trying on Darryl's hat at the beach and the MC being jealous? I kinda miss the Val scene with her in the hat though, it's not in the game anymore either right? I haven't seen it for a long time.

Yeah, something like that, it was an extremely idiotic scene.
If Nyx wanted to insert a possible fight she could've just seen your "Alexis beach points"(points haters rejoice), which is separate from normal Alexis points, and have her throw a fit if it's abysmally low(Nyx still can do that with the new script).
That one was so dumb she decided to remove just a few days later

There are some thick walls in those beach stalls I tell you, it's like they are their own universe or something. Apparently Lexi doesn't hear the MC sneak into Erynn's stall or speak to her. Neither of them hear you and Iris fuck or Lexi give the MC a blowjob.

Tremendous sound insulation on those beach cabins
Enough for Alexis to not recognize the voice of her BF talking to her best friend
And Iris is such a clutz hitting her back against the wall repeatedly

This is one of the go straight to hell, do not pass go, do not collect $200 saves. He deserves some really bad karma and consequences in this one.

Let's see how much mayhem i can still cause in this one

 

[valbitterb]

I don't know if you remember, but in one version(patched because it was just too stupid) it was possible to have a fight with her over a dumb hat(@valbitterb, @Justaphase remember this one?).
But somehow she just accepts the MC staring at Erynn's butt, later grabbing it, saying you'd marry Erynn (including "killing" Alexis) and sneaking into Erynn's stall(i guess she didn't witness this one...).
Jesus Christ learn to take a hint woman

I don't know if you remember, but in one version(patched because it was just too stupid) it was possible to have a fight with her over a dumb hat(@valbitterb, @Justaphase remember this one?).
But somehow she just accepts the MC staring at Erynn's butt, later grabbing it, saying you'd marry Erynn (including "killing" Alexis) and sneaking into Erynn's stall(i guess she didn't witness this one...).
Jesus Christ learn to take a hint woman

Hat>Let's fight and cancel the club
Your boyfriend being majorly into your BFF>No problem

Maybe there should be a lower threshold on how bad you perform there leading to a fight/break up.
Makes more sense than fighting over a hat.

Lexi - "That hat makes you look like a douche."
MC - "You're calling me a douche?! I'm sick of you Alexis!"
*Then proceeds to do his usual storm off like a douche, leaving Lexi confused and crying.*
It went something like that from what I remember. I think it was also related to seeing Val trying on Darryl's hat at the beach and the MC being jealous? I kinda miss the Val scene with her in the hat though, it's not in the game anymore either right? I haven't seen it for a long time.

Yeah, something like that, it was an extremely idiotic scene.
If Nyx wanted to insert a possible fight she could've just seen your "Alexis beach points"(points haters rejoice), which is separate from normal Alexis points, and have her throw a fit if it's abysmally low(Nyx still can do that with the new script).
That one was so dumb she decided to remove just a few days later

Hhahahahaaha. There must be standards when it comes to Alexis trolling. I agree.

I picked the hat option and that was the worst thing ever in this game's history.

Basically, if you're on the Lexi-Val, but keep Erynn and Iris close run, you go to the club with Lexi and Iris.

But you don't end up going to the club if you get angry at her saying you look like a douchebag because you're wearing this stupid hat.

This was the only time I've agreed with Lexi on anything.

So you really "overreact" and blow up at Lexi, leaving her in tears wondering why you blew up. You even ask your mom if you look like a douchebag. She says you do. And then you look at yourself in the mirror with the stupid hat on. It's cringe-worthy.

No club scene or night out, no Lexi and Iris club fun, you don't drive Lexi home, Adriana doesn't bring you home, no morning after conversation with Zo and Lexi.

WORSE, Nyx tries to force a parallel at the beach where Darryl puts a hat on Valeria like she's his "baby doll" then asks her to spit bars. Nyx's writing of the black characters is atrocious if not cliche.

Nyx is good at parallels but this was her worst one ever.

This was the laziest writing from Nyx to make MC and a lady fight. I understand that the hat comment can be a trigger point for a couple's fight because of other reasons building up for months or weeks or days between them, but it was terribly done here. There was no build up at all. The fight should have been Lexi confronting the MC about his behavior at the beach favoring Erynn and/or Iris.

It doesn't work also as some kind of bad metaphor connecting MC and Val as the female version of the MC, and yes both of them douchebagging being players.

 

[Justaphase]

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I knew you wouldn't let me down. Val does look good in the hat, the MC does look and act like a douchebag.
I liked the Val hat scene though at the beach and wish that was still in the game. It adds that extra jealousy element to the Val path, which then gives the player some sense of urgency to break up with Alexis for Val before Darryl potentially moves in.

 

[Acsuka]

Darryl potentially moves in.

 

[LSC82]

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Good that you found your post from when this atrocity was new

This was the laziest writing from Nyx to make MC and a lady fight. I understand that the hat comment can be a trigger point for a couple's fight because of other reasons building up for months or weeks or days between them, but it was terribly done here. There was no build up at all. The fight should have been Lexi confronting the MC about his behavior at the beach favoring Erynn and/or Iris.

Totally, this was a bad fight, Nyx immediately recognized that and backed off.

The funny thing is that the MCs behaviour at the beach... could've been used as reason for a fight( MilesEdgeworth did a good job showing how much of a douche he can be in the beach), and it wouldn't feel stupid.

There was no need to do this extra section... Nyx already had the necessary elements for a "reasonable" fight.

I knew you wouldn't let me down. Val does look good in the hat, the MC does look and act like a douchebag.
I liked the Val hat scene though at the beach and wish that was still in the game. It adds that extra jealousy element to the Val path, which then gives the player some sense of urgency to break up with Alexis for Val before Darryl potentially moves in.

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Well, he tried...
Val looks cute even when she's bored, having to deal with Darryl's "seduction"
"OMG this guy doesn't give up"

This Val parallel was a bit weird because this wasn't something the MC witnessed happening... he already saw plenty of Darryl's attempts, but this part was new.

 

[Kaskaze]

Everytime I check this thread this pops up somehow!

But people keep asking anyway

 

[Kaskaze]

I don't know if Nyx has any new ideas for that part (the beach date), but goddamn it, in the current version Alexis just doesn't take a hint
No matter how awful you do in that part, she just keeps moving along

I don't know if you remember, but in one version(patched because it was just too stupid) it was possible to have a fight with her over a dumb hat(valbitterb, Justaphase remember this one?).
But somehow she just accepts the MC staring at Erynn's butt, later grabbing it, saying you'd marry Erynn (including "killing" Alexis) and sneaking into Erynn's stall(i guess she didn't witness this one...).
Jesus Christ learn to take a hint woman

Hat>Let's fight and cancel the club
Your boyfriend being majorly into your BFF>No problem

Maybe there should be a lower threshold on how bad you perform there leading to a fight/break up.
Makes more sense than fighting over a hat.


Sure that's entertaining, but it's gonna confuse the game down the line.

Of course there's still a way to be the ultimate asshole, playing within the rules

Alexis is your GF... but Nikki also thinks that, and Valeria also believes you guys are starting a relationship...
And because all that is not enough, you are also constantly teasing and flirting with Erynn, Iris... and has a no strings attached fuck buddy relationship with Gabi
And quite possibly has banged Melissa

I’m wondering why that choice was there before but isn’t anymore. Maybe that choice was supposed to give a chance to break up with Alexis

 

[Justaphase]

This Val parallel was a bit weird because this wasn't something the MC witnessed happening... he already saw plenty of Darryl's attempts, but this part was new.

I think he did see the Val hat thing though, from what I remember? That's what causes his jealousy and then the fight with Lexi. It's a build up of things. Seeing Darryl and Val talking and laughing at training camp (though he doesn't see the sad look on her face when you walk away with Layla, if you have enough Val points) Val saying after the first beach date how she's going to the beach with Darryl, then seeing him walk with his hand around her/on her. Him laying on top of her, then Lexi getting a ball to the face by Darryl when he and Val were playing.

Many of these things were out of full context and like I said added some urgency to breaking up with Lexi for Val, because of the things that the MC witnessed rather than us as the player who get to see the full story. Even we as the player see Val tell Tori that if she would pick anyone to fuck it would be Darryl. She will only say the MC if you don't have enough points or are on Layla's path. But instead looks in the MC's direction and doesn't want to tell Tori.

 

[DavyDaoist]

also before you even ask
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Thanks 4 the welcome. Seems there’s a inside joke there. Is this a good time to ask what to once your device stops reading images? All I see is emily.jpg and no amount of cookie or memory cleaning is doing the trick.

 

[LSC82]

I’m wondering why that choice was there before but isn’t anymore. Maybe that choice was supposed to give a chance to break up with Alexis

The fight sounded serious enough that could lead to a break up... but it was too dumb.
No idea why Nyx didn't include a fight just for acting like a spazz on the beach though, it was right there...

Alexis does end things with you if you cancel a date with her(the one where they go costume shopping), i don't know if there are other "bad performance" requirements or simply canceling once does it.

I think he did see the Val hat thing though, from what I remember? That's what causes his jealousy and then the fight with Lexi. It's a build up of things. Seeing Darryl and Val talking and laughing at training camp (though he doesn't see the sad look on her face when you walk away with Layla, if you have enough Val points) Val saying after the first beach date how she's going to the beach with Darryl, then seeing him walk with his hand around her/on her. Him laying on top of her, then Lexi getting a ball to the face by Darryl when he and Val were playing.

Many of these things were out of full context and like I said added some urgency to breaking up with Lexi for Val, because of the things that the MC witnessed rather than us as the player who get to see the full story.

I think the "Val with a hat" scene only pops up if you had the Alexis hat fight, it went on immediately after, it felt like Val and Darryl are still at the beach and it's happening in real time.
Which is what makes me say that the MC didn't witness the hat part specifically...

The other scenes that you mentioned yes, the MC sees plenty of Darryl trying to seduce Valeria and it angers him... which could've pushed him into lashing out.

The parallel didn't land with me because i still don't know what's so similar?
MC gets angered by Alexis comment, Val is a bit bored but patient...
And if the comparison is to Darryl... Darryl is actually playing nice in this scene... he's fumbling the attempt, but that's actually Darryl's version of nice... the MC is very far from playing nice.

 

[Kaskaze]

The fight sounded serious enough that could lead to a break up... but it was too dumb.
No idea why Nyx didn't include a fight just for acting like a spazz on the beach though, it was right there...

Alexis does end things with you if you cancel a date with her(the one where they go costume shopping), i don't know if there are other "bad performance" requirements or simply canceling once does it.


I think the "Val with a hat" scene only pops up if you had the Alexis hat fight, it went on immediately after, it felt like Val and Darryl are still at the beach and it's happening in real time.
Which is what makes me say that the MC didn't witness the hat part specifically...

The other scenes that you mentioned yes, the MC sees plenty of Darryl trying to seduce Valeria and it angers him... which could've pushed him into lashing out.

The parallel didn't land with me because i still don't know what's so similar?
MC gets angered by Alexis comment, Val is a bit bored but patient...
And if the comparison is to Darryl... Darryl is actually playing nice in this scene... he's fumbling the attempt, but that's actually Darryl's version of nice... the MC is very far from playing nice.

Let's be honest, this isn't a stupid reason if you're determined to end the relationship. (The MC has done so many stupid things that it wouldn't surprise me. )

 

[LSC82]

Let's be honest, this isn't a stupid reason if you're determined to end the relationship. (The MC has done so many stupid things that it wouldn't surprise me. )

I mean we could just stop and have a talk...
But some people prefer to have a big fight as means of getting out i guess

It sucks that the option to have a "hey Alexis we need to talk" moment is very limited, it only appears if you have Val active...
Maybe it should appear to allow us to make the jump to team Erynn... or because you want clear the way for Nikki(now i'm speaking your language ).

 

[Acsuka]

or because you want clear the way for Nikki

Nikki doesn't need to make way bro...Nikki is everywhere...This playground belongs to Muscle Mommy...