Valeria only shows up if you have high points with her.
I personally prefer the "John comes to the rescue" scene since he is prime suspect of being 
Erynn's father, it's good to get him involved in this story at the earliest possible point.
He also looks like good backup rather than someone who we'll need to rescue later.
Nothing wrong with the Val path but this particular appearance felt very gratuitous.
I do see the vision, unfortunately it's an overly dark, heavy handed, vision.
The story of a girl who is hurt and damaged... and the situation just keeps getting worst.
Enjoyed the drama in this game when it was girl vs girl drama... Will they find out? How they'll react? That was fun to me(and it's being written out in a rather quick fashion btw)...
Putting abuse into the story... it's pushing it.
This contrasts big time with the story of most other girls who are all about dating and fun sexy times.
And this game being a "pick one" kind of game, it leads to a bunch of people simply being "i'm out" despite her being the one that is actually instrumental to the story.
Good news for Elena fans, hopefully you won't to wait much longer.
Candidates for 3some? Elena+Layla seems the most likely choice to me.
Gabi is not a happy ending it seems, being older, his teacher and married to 
the likely bio father of the MC, it doesn't surprise me.
I still wanna see how this shit blows up  

 , specially on the "shoot inside route" 

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As for Zach... the choice has been made, it's death.