VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Dark Lord Of Chaos]

Am I the only one who noticed Erynn's feet sticking out in the last scene covered by bags of garbage? I mean WTF was that.

 

[Gh0st_Harambe]

Am I the only one who noticed Erynn's feet sticking out in the last scene covered by bags of garbage? I mean WTF was that.

You re not the only one.

 

[MrD812]

Am I the only one who noticed Erynn's feet sticking out in the last scene covered by bags of garbage? I mean WTF was that.

Has been addressed several times on this thread and to the degree of being The 'real deal braker', exponentially.

 

[SolarEclipsed]

Am I the only one who noticed Erynn's feet sticking out in the last scene covered by bags of garbage? I mean WTF was that.

What we suspect is Erynn's feet although Nyx has said it is still a cliff hanger all the clues point to it being Erynn, however it could be a massive plot twist of being someone else.

 

[Numa_Cway]

Btw, can't someone help me. I have no idea how to get these ones:

Break Layla's heart (you monster) by trying to date both Layla and Alexis.
In schoo/after training Val will approach you asking where Layla is.

 

[Shadow Emperor]

oh man, that route is bound to lead to disaster...Layla & lexi routes in one playthrough, ouch!

 

[SolarEclipsed]

That's the reason I asked such a question as an addition to the main part of the issue since I get it perfectly well that all that drama with the sisters would have to trigger this little scene with Valeria... but it's not happening.

And since you came to the rescue again, please tell me about all of Valeria content in this scenario. Something's clearly going wrong with my Valeria

I think you don't spy on the girls in the shower also, I didn't get that scene but was kicked out on the underwear scene with Zach being himself that maybe why it doesn't show.

 

[the_needlesss]

Hey guys, just checked 9th episode and it's awesome! Just wondering is there a text walkthrough for it? Feel like I'm missing something good

 

[cxx]

Hey guys, just checked 9th episode and it's awesome! Just wondering is there a text walkthrough for it? Feel like I'm missing something good

if you used wt-mod then you shouldn't miss anything.

 

[Canto Forte]

This game lets MC be a good person and help everyone while not going full into anyone but his sweetheart.
We should probe this and that choice that feels fuzzy, just to see what it looks like in the game setting,
with all of that pent up anger and judgementalness MC has amassed over the years towards
.. well ... the most important female closest family confidets of his youth.

 

[MrBubu]

Hey guys, just checked 9th episode and it's awesome! Just wondering is there a text walkthrough for it? Feel like I'm missing something good

I'm working on one, I'm halfway through at episode 5 so still a few more days before it's completed

 

[valbitterb]

We lose the scenes with flirting (turning around) and doing the bet, I agree, but Val still acts as our rescue girl in that scuffle. Idk, it's the way it plays for me (???)

Btw, can't someone help me. I have no idea how to get these ones:

I got the John save you from Ethan douche trio scene.

Yes I agree it must be based on our gameplay.

I also haven't gotten the solo Val scene at the track after the MC breaks Layla and Lexi's hearts.

 

[ImperialD]

ya know i've been thinking ... it seems to me no matter how hard the MC tries he just have 1 babe ..... seems that most in game babes like the MC or loves him alot .... now i'm not complaining like some do ... but shit man a man has to rest ya know

 

[LSC82]

I got the John save you from Ethan douche trio scene.

Yes I agree it must be based on our gameplay.

I also haven't gotten the solo Val scene at the track after the MC breaks Layla and Lexi's hearts.

Valeria only shows up if you have high points with her.
I personally prefer the "John comes to the rescue" scene since he is prime suspect of being Erynn's father, it's good to get him involved in this story at the earliest possible point.
He also looks like good backup rather than someone who we'll need to rescue later.

Nothing wrong with the Val path but this particular appearance felt very gratuitous.

21 gun salute for Elena fans, sounds like well be eating good.

If she's doing the discord Q&A thing someone needs to ask her what the plan for Erynn is. Judging from this thread a lot of us, myself included, don't see the vision. She's the main main LI, her plot drives the main story thread, but her route is arguably the worst in the game.

I do see the vision, unfortunately it's an overly dark, heavy handed, vision.
The story of a girl who is hurt and damaged... and the situation just keeps getting worst.
Enjoyed the drama in this game when it was girl vs girl drama... Will they find out? How they'll react? That was fun to me(and it's being written out in a rather quick fashion btw)...
Putting abuse into the story... it's pushing it.

This contrasts big time with the story of most other girls who are all about dating and fun sexy times.
And this game being a "pick one" kind of game, it leads to a bunch of people simply being "i'm out" despite her being the one that is actually instrumental to the story.


Good news for Elena fans, hopefully you won't to wait much longer.
Candidates for 3some? Elena+Layla seems the most likely choice to me.
Gabi is not a happy ending it seems, being older, his teacher and married to the likely bio father of the MC, it doesn't surprise me.
I still wanna see how this shit blows up , specially on the "shoot inside route" .

As for Zach... the choice has been made, it's death.

 

[Puma1978]

I got the John save you from Ethan douche trio scene.

Yes I agree it must be based on our gameplay.

I also haven't gotten the solo Val scene at the track after the MC breaks Layla and Lexi's hearts.

I got once John and once Val as my hero in this sequence. The Val scene ends very romantic.
As i remember to get Val it does not matter if u have Alexis or Layla as GF u just need to get enough hits on Val at every chance. One guy just posted a few days ago here that there is also a third option i wanna try out where u get only hit by Zach and Ethan just curse you verbally without a fight. This happenes if u never help Erynn anyway and may u must be on Laylla path.

 

[Puma1978]

ya know i've been thinking ... it seems to me no matter how hard the MC tries he just have 1 babe ..... seems that most in game babes like the MC or loves him alot .... now i'm not complaining like some do ... but shit man a man has to rest ya know

I also miss more male competition for MC. Zach is okay but as we know he betrays MC. I think it would give the game more exciting situations if there would be other male characters who are after the same girls like MC. Because you are fully right...all the girls seem to like the MC only just like he is the only guy in town.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

I also miss more male competition for MC. Zach is okay but as we know he betrays MC. I think it would give the game more exciting situations if there would be other male characters who are after the same girls like MC. Because you are fully right...all the girls seem to like the MC only just like he is the only guy in town.

Please I wish some other male character would take Layla away from me

 

[valbitterb]

Valeria only shows up if you have high points with her.
I personally prefer the "John comes to the rescue" scene since he is prime suspect of being Erynn's father, it's good to get him involved in this story at the earliest possible point.
He also looks like good backup rather than someone who we'll need to rescue later.

Nothing wrong with the Val path but this particular appearance felt very gratuitous.


I do see the vision, unfortunately it's an overly dark, heavy handed, vision.
The story of a girl who is hurt and damaged... and the situation just keeps getting worst.
Enjoyed the drama in this game when it was girl vs girl drama... Will they find out? How they'll react? That was fun to me(and it's being written out in a rather quick fashion btw)...
Putting abuse into the story... it's pushing it.

This contrasts big time with the story of most other girls who are all about dating and fun sexy times.
And this game being a "pick one" kind of game, it leads to a bunch of people simply being "i'm out" despite her being the one that is actually instrumental to the story.


Good news for Elena fans, hopefully you won't to wait much longer.
Candidates for 3some? Elena+Layla seems the most likely choice to me.
Gabi is not a happy ending it seems, being older, his teacher and married to the likely bio father of the MC, it doesn't surprise me.
I still wanna see how this shit blows up , specially on the "shoot inside route" .

As for Zach... the choice has been made, it's death.

After reading your reply, and now that I think about it, I agree that the John save works better for the narrative, especially how this relates to Erryn's problem. And the emotional reveal will really be potentially explosive and moving once John and Erryn learn of their relationship.

Elena-Layla threesome seems the most plausible since Layla is exploring all these fetishes. I'm guessing Elena is more sexually experienced than Layla.

I agree, Gabi and MC plus his dad will go very badly.

 

[valbitterb]

I got once John and once Val as my hero in this sequence. The Val scene ends very romantic.
As i remember to get Val it does not matter if u have Alexis or Layla as GF u just need to get enough hits on Val at every chance. One guy just posted a few days ago here that there is also a third option i wanna try out where u get only hit by Zach and Ethan just curse you verbally without a fight. This happenes if u never help Erynn anyway and may u must be on Laylla path.

Thanks for the advice on Valeria.

I wonder if the third option also happens if instead of training with Layla, you have sex with Alexis in your room, Erryn catches you both and you choose to either lie about Erryn which causes her to end her relationship with you or tell the truth which causes both women to end their relationship with you.

 

[valbitterb]

Some more thoughts and observations on the game


At her best, Nyx uses similar characters ,scenes, situations, and finds interesting and fun character and plot progression variations that aren't repetitive or redundant

Narrative Mirror Scenes, Parallel Narrative Lines, Parallel Scenes, Plot Devices, Motifs, Comparison and Contrast, Scene Variations

-Meet your past on the airplane - Alexis, Iris

- Feel how fast my heart is beating MC- Alexis, Valeria

- Truth or Dare Positive or Negative - Layla, Cara, secondary-Valeria, Elena

- Ho Lady - Tori, Julia, Rachel

-Bar Temptations - Tori, Julia

- Oedipus Complex variation - screwing your dad's wife who's not really your mom

- Photo Op plot advancement plant, payoff - Iris, Alexis, Erryn, Layla, Andres evidence of cheating

- MC Terrible dancer, but you're not as bad as you think - Layla, Nikki

- Bar Make Out Moment - Cara Birthday Kiss, Layla pretend girlfriend

- Beach fun, banter, pranks, suntan lotion, water pranks, pull shorts down - Layla, Nikki, Elena

- Bucket list sex - airplane rest room, dad's motorcycle

- Three Guy Gang-up on MC - Emmanuel Gang, Ethan Gang, Lucas (Aborted, turned solo assault)

- Parental Figure Surprise Reveal to Child who rage walks out - Andres I'm engaged and we're moving in with them, Emily He's not your dad

- Sister Action with MC - Alexis-Layla, Cara-Nikki, Iris-Erryn

- Nip slips - Emily, Layla, Elena

- Throw in the Pool Play with MC- Melissa, Erryn, Layla, Val, Elena, Gabi

-Cock Block the Violent Douche-Ethan-Erryn, Lucas-Layla

- Driving Mr. MC - Alexis, Erryn, Nikki, Nathan, Cara (reverse)

- Clothing Device - MC- Nikki White workout shirt, underwear swap maybe more important for Valeria than Layla

-Lick My MC - Iris, Valeria

-Shower Sex-Alexis, Nikki

- He's (not) my boyfriend - Erryn clothing store lady, Layla MC wins race sports agent

-Elena Lockers Slap Ass - Slap MC post Layla pretend girlfriend scene, slap Layla post Spanish test results

-Carry the drunk Lady - Elena, Nikki

-Early morning romance runs - Nikki, Valeria

- Raspberry shampoo - Alexis, Valeria

- Taste in Music - Alexis, Valeria

- Workout Partners - Nikki, Layla, Valeria, Elena

- Tattoo Terror Tag Team - The best guy to have with you in a fight, also has tatoos, Nathan, John

- Tattooed Ladies - Lakeyn, Melissa

- We repeat our patterns if we are not aware - MC-Alexis-Erryn triangle and other triangles, potential Emily-John-Melissa triangle

- "I should have knocked" scenes - MC, Cara, Nikki

- It's important the MC to make the ladies laugh and smile, enjoyment or cheering them up (Cara birthday dance, Erryn cappuccino post Ethan assault, Gabi training camp sexy time)

- Seat Partners - Elena-MC, Alexis-MC, Valeria-MC, Layla-MC, Iris-MC

- He's so much fun thought bubble - Alexis, Layla, Nikki, Elena

- Always make a good impression on their mothers - Melissa, Haley, Adriana (and fathers John)

Miscellaneous

- Why are John's tattoos different or missing from the time the MC first meets him (more tattoos) to the time you reconnect in the garage (less tattoos)?

- Ladies are either sexually experienced, like to flirt and tease, sexually inexperienced or have sexual trauma

- The black characters' depictions needs a lot of improvement

- If the MC is 6 foot 1, there seems to be a lot of tall ladies in this game.

- Is it difficult for the MC to have more male friends because of his upbringing?

- Like LSC82 said, will their be life altering pregnancies for this generation of characters like what happened with Emily's generation?