VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Dessolos]

well the update be short or longer ?

I think Nyx mentioned it might be on the shorter side of things when development started on this update on 1 of the first progress updates ( to lazy to go back and check myself) . However im guessing that might no longer be the case seeing how long it took for all the restaurant scenes since that seems like it's going to have alot to it. But really no one knows on the length buy Nyx.

 

[Tremonia]

hopefully she'll also take time to fix 0.11...

What's there to fix? Works totally fine here.

 

[Jacowboy]

What's there to fix? Works totally fine here.

The narrative issues, of course... we've already discussed them plenty.

 

[ReallyNotTimmy]

Been trying out this game for a few days. It’s been fun! The girls are hot. The mom’s hot too, and it’s been entertaining how the MC keeps stumbling into embarrassing situations with her; I just hope it never turns into drunken incest. I’m already dreading how Santiago will turn out to be the father of half the girls in the story.

I also appreciate how the MC and Erynn are trying to come up with harebrained solutions to Ethan’s blackmail, but it’s obvious (especially after talking with Melissa, Emily, and John) all they really need to do is talk to the adults. Of course it’s gonna look like an impossible situation to them; they’re kids; they don’t know shit! Revenge porn isn’t gonna disqualify you from a teaching job, is a felony, and with the right prosecutor Ethan could do hard time—ideally in a prison with easily distracted guards and super rapey inmates.

I don’t appreciate Zack though. He’s a terrible friend. I knew a guy like that in high school. Too dense to see how alienating his fuckboy behavior was, and he turned on people the instant he thought they’d get in the way of him and some girl. Got him in big, big trouble with the law since. The MC needs much better male friends. And platonic female friends; not every girl should be fuckable, no matter how bad the fans want it. Let em fantasize.

 

[valbitterb]

all they really need to do is talk to the adults. Of course it’s gonna look like an impossible situation to them; they’re kids

Great point. At that age, it would seem impossible, and some might be reluctant to involve the adults.

The MC needs much better male friends. And platonic female friends; not every girl should be fuckable, no matter how bad the fans want it. Let em fantasize.

Nathan, Nathan, where art thou?

I would like one female friend that the MC tries to hit on but she rejects him, and then becomes a very good platonic friend. Brooke at the restaurant seems to be the only viable one left as a possible friend. Sienna could also treat the MC as a friend even if he gets into a threesome with her and her boyfriend.

 

[Dessolos]

The MC needs much better male friends. And platonic female friends; not every girl should be fuckable, no matter how bad the fans want it. Let em fantasize.

That's why I friend zone Layla since I never saw her as more than a good friend for the MC, but that's cause it's my choice as a player. I agree with this not just in this game but in other AVN's as well.

 

[ReallyNotTimmy]

That's why I friend zone Layla since I never saw her as more than a good friend for the MC, but that's cause it's my choice as a player. I agree with this not just in this game but in other AVN's as well.

I’ve been friendzoning Erynn for most of the runs though the game, largely because I think she’s the least natural match for the MC. Regardless of his childhood crush on her, she’s functionally his sister.

Plus, on one of the runs, I got a little frustrated with my results and looked it up on a walkthrough—and found out if the MC doesn’t help Erynn on her photoshoot, she instantly friendzones him. What the hell?—she has a giant crush on him, but because he refuses to do something which isn’t his job, which he has no experience doing, which makes lots of people extremely uncomfortable and nervous, plus he’s gonna be topless, her crush evaporates? It’s not like her career depends on it; it’s not like he refused to help her get out of being blackmailed. It’s one gig. Fuck her.

Layla’s probably my favorite LI so far… and Elena’s a close second because she’s bitchy in just the right way. But I really hate that you have to destroy Layla to get to Elena. Girl doesn’t deserve that.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Plus, on one of the runs, I got a little frustrated with my results and looked it up on a walkthrough—and found out if the MC doesn’t help Erynn on her photoshoot, she instantly friendzones him. What the hell?—she has a giant crush on him, but because he refuses to do something which isn’t his job, which he has no experience doing, which makes lots of people extremely uncomfortable and nervous, plus he’s gonna be topless, her crush evaporates? It’s not like her career depends on it; it’s not like he refused to help her get out of being blackmailed. It’s one gig. Fuck her.

I really don't like Erynn tbh, you can see from my previous comments but I think you are looking at that it in the wrong way. Before photoshoot MC and Erynn going around their crush and that photoshoot rekindle the old flame, so she does not friendzone MC because he does not accept the photoshoot when you as a player refuse the chance of rekindling the flame. So I think you read wt wrong way. Also her romance path is not over, you are just friends path that means you'll probably have more chance to get involve down the line. You end all romance with her if you choose not to help her or cheat on her etc.

 

[Papito el Bello]

Still bums me out that there is no Elena without Layla. I do like Layla but like many on this forum I think about here more like a best friend. So many things revolve around Layla being main LI, particularly the competitions on training camp, both the MC and Elena will lose their respective comps if you are not involved with Layla, doesnt really make sense. Hopefully we can get another route for Elena that keeps a good friendship with Lalya. Even if Layla can get over the heartbreak and will eventually want to see her best friend happy, she doesn't deserve to be lead on just to get to Elena. Although it is written well from the point of view of the MC, with all the inner conflict when he realises how he feels for Elena, as a player it feels really wrong.

 

[Tremonia]

Plus, on one of the runs, I got a little frustrated with my results and looked it up on a walkthrough—and found out if the MC doesn’t help Erynn on her photoshoot, she instantly friendzones him. What the hell?—she has a giant crush on him, but because he refuses to do something which isn’t his job, which he has no experience doing, which makes lots of people extremely uncomfortable and nervous, plus he’s gonna be topless, her crush evaporates? It’s not like her career depends on it; it’s not like he refused to help her get out of being blackmailed. It’s one gig. Fuck her.

That's the problem with walkthroughs. You think she friendzoned him because he didn't make the shoot. Instead it's only a variable in a game code which closes MC out from her lewd content for the moment. This variable can change back at a later moment in the game. If you read the dialogues in Ep.11 you recognized between Erynn and MC raised sexual tension. If he don't make the shooting this tension can't raise. MC didn't saw her halfnaked, didn't had her boobies against his skin, and he didn't need to jerk off in the shower and Erynn also didn't got the heat during the shots.

You shouldn't think about characters in binary ways only because Ren'Py works with True/False-Variables. Just don't forget walkthroughs are showing you how the dev works and built the game. They doesn't show you anything about plots, characters and their backgrounds.

 

[Jacowboy]

Well the fact that Layla is essentially a "best friend" type of girl is exactly WHY she's the best fit for a relationship... I don't really understand why people friendzone her for that reason... =/

I guess some people like the obnoxious jealous types... *cough* Alexis and Nikki *cough*

 

[Maviarab]

Been trying out this game for a few days. It’s been fun! The girls are hot. The mom’s hot too, and it’s been entertaining how the MC keeps stumbling into embarrassing situations with her; I just hope it never turns into drunken incest. I’m already dreading how Santiago will turn out to be the father of half the girls in the story.

I also appreciate how the MC and Erynn are trying to come up with harebrained solutions to Ethan’s blackmail, but it’s obvious (especially after talking with Melissa, Emily, and John) all they really need to do is talk to the adults. Of course it’s gonna look like an impossible situation to them; they’re kids; they don’t know shit! Revenge porn isn’t gonna disqualify you from a teaching job, is a felony, and with the right prosecutor Ethan could do hard time—ideally in a prison with easily distracted guards and super rapey inmates.

I don’t appreciate Zack though. He’s a terrible friend. I knew a guy like that in high school. Too dense to see how alienating his fuckboy behavior was, and he turned on people the instant he thought they’d get in the way of him and some girl. Got him in big, big trouble with the law since. The MC needs much better male friends. And platonic female friends; not every girl should be fuckable, no matter how bad the fans want it. Let em fantasize.

You've come to slow realisation that (as much as I do like this VN)...the MC is a fucking moron, the girls are idiots mostly and the plot is...well...beyond a little silly.

Still fun though and Erynn best girl.

 

[Bad Wolf]

That's why I friend zone Layla since I never saw her as more than a good friend for the MC, but that's cause it's my choice as a player. I agree with this not just in this game but in other AVN's as well.

Elena is best girl. Had to fuck with Layla to get to Elena though. Was told a long time ago that there is an Elena solo, but it's hard to get. But if that's not actually true, I still have an Alexis save.

 

[Maviarab]

Elena is best girl. Had to fuck with Layla to get to Elena though. Was told a long time ago that there is an Elena solo, but it's hard to get. But if that's not actually true, I still have an Alexis save.

Nothing has ever been confirmed and knowing Nyx...fucking Layla over to get to Elena is not going to end well. In fact, I'd not be in the least bit surprised that there isn't a path at all and Nyx is just fucking with everyone...definitely her style.

 

[anonnyscouse]

I wonder if Nyx is hiding an "Elena secret path" the same way as she hid the "Alexis secret path" but unlike with Lexi it's actually going to be the only way to get Elena, but it won't become clear until an episode or two after Elena tells MC to fuck off because he broke Layla's heart or because he's taken Layla's virginity.

 

[Bad Wolf]

Nothing has ever been confirmed and knowing Nyx...fucking Layla over to get to Elena is not going to end well. In fact, I'd not be in the least bit surprised that there isn't a path at all and Nyx is just fucking with everyone...definitely her style.

100% factual. Nyx fucks us all the time. Not in a good way, unless you like being mentally and emotionally fucked. Kind of like when the game first started, you could actually get points with the mom for takingthe choices of checkin her out. Now, you lose points. lol

 

[Maviarab]

I wonder if Nyx is hiding an "Elena secret path" the same way as she hid the "Alexis secret path" but unlike with Lexi it's actually going to be the only way to get Elena, but it won't become clear until an episode or two after Elena tells MC to fuck off because he broke Layla's heart or because he's taken Layla's virginity.

I think there could well be an Elena path...but it won't be by destroying Layla in the process. All anyone needs to do in this game is look at the relationships and the susequent fallout for being a fucking dick MC. It's all there to see quite plainly.

Now, unless Nyx decides to do a 180 with Elena's character and personality (because, yes, it does happen in real life that friends betray each other etc)...and make her a backstabbing bitch, I really can't see it happening on Layla's path (throuple exempt). Again, would not surprise me at all if there is no solo path and she will only ever be an addition to Layla, hence why she has her own points.

The only other solution is that yes you do indeed break Layla's heart...Elena is not the nice girl you think she is and untold drama is the only wway to get her...because...Nyx likes her dumb pointless drama. Let's also not forget that Nyx is more than happy to completely rewrite characters and her story to fit her own agenda.

 

[Bad Wolf]

Nyx likes her dumb pointless drama. Let's also not forget that Nyx is more than happy to completely rewrite characters and her story to fit her own agenda.

 

[Dessolos]

I’ve been friendzoning Erynn for most of the runs though the game, largely because I think she’s the least natural match for the MC. Regardless of his childhood crush on her, she’s functionally his sister.

Plus, on one of the runs, I got a little frustrated with my results and looked it up on a walkthrough—and found out if the MC doesn’t help Erynn on her photoshoot, she instantly friendzones him. What the hell?—she has a giant crush on him, but because he refuses to do something which isn’t his job, which he has no experience doing, which makes lots of people extremely uncomfortable and nervous, plus he’s gonna be topless, her crush evaporates? It’s not like her career depends on it; it’s not like he refused to help her get out of being blackmailed. It’s one gig. Fuck her.

Layla’s probably my favorite LI so far… and Elena’s a close second because she’s bitchy in just the right way. But I really hate that you have to destroy Layla to get to Elena. Girl doesn’t deserve that.

Elena is best girl. Had to fuck with Layla to get to Elena though. Was told a long time ago that there is an Elena solo, but it's hard to get. But if that's not actually true, I still have an Alexis save.

I'm team Erynn first then Alexis ive wrote why a lot to lazy to do once again this early in the morning haha but Ill tell you sometimes im close putting Elena 2nd or tied for 2nd cause her nipples makes me want to give her a edge to an already good character. I just love the color of them lmfao.

Well the fact that Layla is essentially a "best friend" type of girl is exactly WHY she's the best fit for a relationship... I don't really understand why people friendzone her for that reason... =/

I guess some people like the obnoxious jealous types... *cough* Alexis and Nikki *cough*

While that works with some LI out there and I do agree with you but for me I just don't feel anything beyond friendship hard to explain. Weird thing is I do like the friend troupe and she very much so comes across as a friend first. If I have to pick one reason or make a guess as to why it might be in part I just just enjoy and have more fun seeing / reading Erynn and Alexis scenes more especially when they show their playful side. While Layla's playful side only comes out a little bit and just seems more tame in comparison. But in honestly it's more of a feeling / vibe I have for her than anything else the playful thing is just the best excuse I can think of as why when I can't really explain the why.

 

[ReallyNotTimmy]

You've come to slow realisation that (as much as I do like this VN)...the MC is a fucking moron, the girls are idiots mostly and the plot is...well...beyond a little silly.

I’ve found most AVNs are populated by morons.

Largely that’s because the authors don’t really have a great idea for a story. “Hm, we need a protagonist, 20 different hot girls he could fuck, reasons why he’d fuck them, and reasons that’d cockblock him for shits and giggles. Why don’t we try…” followed by any lame excuse, with whatever lame writing that’d help us proceed from point A to point B.

Honestly a high school or college is one of the better ideas, because every school is filled with horny kids who are just aching to get their genitals wet, and are just immature enough to reject or embrace one another for any and every stupid reason. Kinda writes itself. Plus their immaturity explains away any stupidity we find in the story: They’re young, dumb, and full of cum.