VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[valbitterb]

 

[cxx]

yea nyx corrupting young minds with her game.

 

[Elduriel]

A few hours into the game thus far and it's got pretty solid writing but goddamn I'm barely comfortable even interacting with characters due to how "intertwined" they are, even if I choose the choices I would in real life (which are generally just the more caring/helpful choices) you end up accumulating a lot of points and hearts end up being broken.

Feels like this game is only geared towards solely focusing on one LI and stonewalling everyone else with how things pan out. The writing is really nice though, gonna finish it and see where it ends up.

ha, welcome to intertwined then, as you guessed the name is not a coincidence. Also, not a harem game so you'll need multiple saves unless you enjoy the chaos that comes with being a fuckboy

 

[Ciaran8023]

ha, welcome to intertwined then, as you guessed the name is not a coincidence. Also, not a harem game so you'll need multiple saves unless you enjoy the chaos that comes with being a fuckboy

Yeah I've never really been a fuckboy type of person and I usually don't play harem games either way, but man Intertwined definitely doesn't pull punches with repercussions, which is both good and bad I suppose.

I'll definitely be making a few playthroughs to see what's what.

 

[EridianX]

Anyone else having problems extracting the game files from gofile? I keep getting a headers error whenever i try to extract it.

 

[valbitterb]

For the beach dates, I'm hoping for a changing room peep show or private beach booby skinny dipping with Val





and/or Erynn Dirty Dancing full lewd version (without Alexis buzzkill).

 

[Dessolos]

For the beach dates, I'm hoping for a changing room peep show or private beach booby skinny dipping with Val


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and/or Erynn Dirty Dancing full lewd version (without Alexis buzzkill).

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you forgot the butt slap with Erynn cause we know how many times she gets her butt slapped, at this point Erynn probably likes it. Probably Nyx too since there is alot of butt slapping with other characters as well if I recall correctly

 

[valbitterb]

you forgot the butt slap with Erynn cause we know how many times she gets her butt slapped, at this point Erynn probably likes it. Probably Nyx too since there is alot of butt slapping with other characters as well if I recall correctly

MC butt slaps Nikki and Layla a lot too.

But as LSC82 has noted, and so have you, it really has become an Erynn-MC thing/love language.

So it's a given.

Hoping for more sexual progress with Erynn.

 

[LSC82]

For the beach dates, I'm hoping for a changing room peep show or private beach booby skinny dipping with Val


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and/or Erynn Dirty Dancing full lewd version (without Alexis buzzkill).

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I hope Nyx goes for something more original than sneaking into those changing room stalls again, get creative, have some fun.

With Erynn "Dirty Dancing" is something that has been teased from very early on... and i know we already have one version of it... But it never sat right with me that something that was set up so early ended up being locked behind the Alexis path and with Ms Herpes keeping a close eye where we put our hands, instead of my proper Erynn save.

For Val sneaking into that private part of the beach and going for some nude swimming sounds like a lot of fun.

you forgot the butt slap with Erynn cause we know how many times she gets her butt slapped, at this point Erynn probably likes it. Probably Nyx too since there is alot of butt slapping with other characters as well if I recall correctly

She always liked it, even if she acted angry, butt slaps are always "plus points".
Butt slapping is the MC-Erynn thing as much as everything boob related are Layla's.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

MC butt slaps Nikki and Layla a lot too.

But as @LSC82 has noted, and so have you, it really has become an Erynn-MC thing/love language.

So it's a given.

Butt slaps is the language of love

 

[valbitterb]

I hope Nyx goes for something more original than sneaking into those changing room stalls again, get creative, have some fun.

With Erynn "Dirty Dancing" is something that has been teased from very early on... and i know we already have one version of it... But it never sat right with me that something that was set up so early ended up being locked behind the Alexis path and with Ms Herpes keeping a close eye where we put our hands, instead of my proper Erynn save.

For Val sneaking into that private part of the beach and going for some nude swimming sounds like a lot of fun.

And then Val says to the MC, "Stop it someone is coming." She hides behind the MC in the water. MC thought bubble: "Her boobs are pressed against me." He gets an erection.

Instead of the beach owner it's Madison Springs old perv who got lost.

MC tells him "It's a private beach."

Old Perv leaves.

MC and Val laugh. Val discovers his erection.

MC says "Sorry" like Val. She dunks his head underwater or knees him in the balls.

We could also have an Erynn version.

 

[Warscared]

And then Val says to the MC, "Stop it someone is coming." She hides behind the MC in the water. MC thought bubble: "Her boobs are pressed against me." He gets an erection.

Instead of the beach owner it's Madison Springs old perv who got lost.

MC tells him "It's a private beach."

Old Perv leaves.

MC and Val laugh. Val discovers his erection.

MC says "Sorry" like Val. She dunks his head underwater or knees him in the balls.

We could also have an Erynn version.

herm the old perv will probably bluber out your doom with a sentence like
"damm boy, you move around indeed, in the last 2 weeks this is the 3rd hotties i see you with, 1st making out in the dressing shacks, then fucking that hottie against the palm tree and now getting the rusty trombone from that cutie kneeling behind you, how i wish i was young again!"

 

[valbitterb]

herm the old perv will probably bluber out your doom with a sentence like
"damm boy, you move around indeed, in the last 2 weeks this is the 3rd hotties i see you with, 1st making out in the dressing shacks, then fucking that hottie against the palm tree and now getting the rusty trombone from that cutie kneeling behind you, how i wish i was young again!"

Val gives MC a full pole vault extension kick to the balls.

Warscared Intertwined variant is the best variant.

 

[cxx]

Anyone else having problems extracting the game files from gofile? I keep getting a headers error whenever i try to extract it.

header error doesn't mean anything if unpacking goes to 100% otherwise.

 

[xsssssssss]

She always liked it, even if she acted angry, butt slaps are always "plus points".
Butt slapping is the MC-Erynn thing as much as everything boob related are Layla's.

It's a family thing as MC has option to do so with Mel too

 

[cxx]

It's a family thing as MC has option to do so with Mel too

and did with alexis and layla's mother.

 

[HiP1]

Like Layla for example I have no interest in her beyond being a friend

Since you don't like Erynn too, why not you try Alexis Secret path? It has long game for Alexis and a few funny scenes too. Also if you like Iris, it's the only way to give her some at the beach.

that path requires going deep in Layla's. which could be funny, because we get stopped short when trying to date both, but going the secret path means that might become possible later down the line. Layla is forced to break up with MC by Alexis, but we don't really know if that is what she genuinely wants. and there is no way to try to talk to her.

you forgot the butt slap with Erynn cause we know how many times she gets her butt slapped, at this point Erynn probably likes it. Probably Nyx too since there is alot of butt slapping with other characters as well if I recall correctly

butt slaps are heavily emphasized in Erynn's path, but MC does it to every girl he gets close to. only his mother is spared, but she got tons from Santiago for sure.

 

[socool]

According to the story,
Flashback - Emily is 18 (Had MC at 18), Melissa is 20 (Had Erynn at 18), Adriana (Always busy may be she had Alexis) are freshman and are kind of room mates.
Erynn and MC are 3 years apart. After Santiago knows Emily is pregnant, Santi's parents came and said Emily that "they have their whole lives ahead and they offered money", Emily rejected and had MC (MC called Andres dad and then the PROMISE to not tell him).

Present - Alexis and Erynn are sophomores and are best friends. Alexis is older than MC. MC and Layla are in same class. MC can do anyone.
Gabi's relationship with Navarro isn't established yet according to these photos.


How come Navarro alias Santiago/Mc's dad/Gabi's (likely Husband or Bro)/Alexis and Layla's dad all be same?

Am I correct? or Am I missing some plot in the game?

My theory is either Santiago is a Player alias Manwhore or there is some plot hole in this story.

Right order (May be):
First: Navarro + Adriana (Highschool and college) -> Alexis (Before MC)
Second: Navarro + Emily (Highschool and college) -> MC (Navarro may be cheating)
Third: Navarro + Adriana (After Emily) -> Layla (May be both Emily and Adriana are pregnant at the same time)
Fourth: Navarro + Gabi (Either bro/husband) -> Navarro may be cheating again all these years. So Gabi got divorced.

It doesn't seem like Navarro is Alexis and Layla's step dad (reason being they are very close in the game like a real dad and daughter)

My verdict: This is either a brilliant game or a weird story game where friends don't talk to each other.

My plot hole points:
1. As Emily said that she met Santiago a few times, she would have asked who did he marry?
2. Why would Emily want to date John? (Erynn's dad)
3. Who is Gabi to Navarro? (Husband or Brother)
4. Do Adriana and Gabi not talk about their lives (husbands)?
5. Do Melissa and Adriana not talk about their lives (husbands)?
6. As Alexis and Erynn are best friends, do they not talk about their moms? (Emily doesn't even know Adriana is Alexis mom and a principal of that school)
7. As Melissa and Emily are best friends, do they not talk about their Ex-husbands? Like what are they doing?

There are still many plot holes wandering in my mind. God knows what developer is thinking. I need clarification.

 

[cxx]

Am I correct? or Am I missing some plot in the game?

you are missing nyx pulling your leg.

 

[Tremonia]

How come Navarro alias Santiago/Mc's dad/Gabi's (likely Husband or Bro)/Alexis and Layla's dad all be same?

They're not the same. I thought that myself a long time, but it doesn't fit anymore. Navarro is Gabi's (soon-to-be-ex)husband, but not the (step)dad from Layla and Alexis. That would be Zo.