VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Saqrtjhit1]

Is there any update for this month ?

 

[Justaphase]

Is there any update for this month ?

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I've finished all the smaller scenes I talked about last time. Now there's only 1 big scene and a small ending scene left to do. Actually, this episode can end in 3 different ways depending on the route and choices you made. The small ending scene will probably be done in a few days, the larger scene will take a bit of time since it has some variable differences and I have to cover all those possibilities. But we're getting there. Not that much longer, I guess, I hope...

Now... I did something. Like every other time, some might like it, others might not. Well... Half of it is your fault, and the other half, you can blame me. I can already tell that it's not permanent (yet), but it could become permanent depending on your feedback. I will poll it after this episode is released. You want to know what it is? Too bad, but you'll find out at release. Except for the lucky people who will see the preview pictures I post this Thursday. I was debating if I should reveal it already or not but why not, I guess. If you don't want to get spoiled, don't look at these particular previews. I'll put a spoiler warning in the title. If you want my opinion, I think it has a bigger impact if you see it while playing the episode rather than watching it now. But hey, it's your choice.

 

[Maccabbee]

as I said the game inserted him such way, not like we had a choice in the matter. I never liked his personality.

We're arguing with each other by agreeing with each other.

My point is that you, as a player, feel differently than your MC in the game does. I fucking hate Zach, personally. I wouldn't be friends with such an misogynistic idiot. MC feels differently, but honestly, doesn't seem to be a great friend. He seems a great social guy, who has fun with the people he's around, but loyalty doesn't seem his strong suit without our choices making him that way.

While I know that I'm not going to get it and Elena fans need some love. I would love it if both Layla and Elena dump him like "Nah go away, we're not interested." Chicks before dicks, sisters before misters and all that. Because the Elena path IS going to wreck their beautiful friendship forever, which is a waste, even if Layla puts a brave face on things for the sake of her friends happiness.

I agree. She does exactly that on the Lexi path, and gets those sad faces looking at MC and Lexi.

 

[Elduriel]

We're arguing with each other by agreeing with each other.

nah don't really consider this an argument to be honest just a discussion. You'll know if I argue

 

[Justaphase]

We're arguing with each other by agreeing with each other.

My point is that you, as a player, feel differently than your MC in the game does. I fucking hate Zach, personally. I wouldn't be friends with such an misogynistic idiot. MC feels differently, but honestly, doesn't seem to be a great friend. He seems a great social guy, who has fun with the people he's around, but loyalty doesn't seem his strong suit without our choices making him that way.

The MC in this can be an absolute idiot don't get me wrong, sometimes I want to reach into the screen and slap him. His uber competitiveness can annoy me in particular, even to the point of him usually trying to cheat. I'm so glad that Erynn humbled him at Volleyball while at the beach, that was so satisfying to me. She even took it easy on him and whooped him ass.
I know that he's something of an athlete but save the competition for the track, just have fun. There were a few times where he almost crossed the line into being inappropriate with Val on the beach date. Especially given her history with that pervert Noah.
He has that good looking MC privilege going for him though so can get away with alot.

 

[Maccabbee]

The MC in this can be an absolute idiot don't get me wrong, sometimes I want to reach into the screen and slap him. His uber competitiveness can annoy me in particular, even to the point of him usually trying to cheat. I'm so glad that Erynn humbled him at Volleyball while at the beach, that was so satisfying to me. She even took it easy on him and whooped him ass.
I know that he's something of an athlete but save the competition for the track, just have fun. There were a few times where he almost crossed the line into being inappropriate with Val on the beach date. Especially given her history with that pervert Noah.
He has that good looking MC privilege going for him though so can get away with alot.

My last run was a "good student" run, so I don't remember the cheating thing. It never came up. IN my run I won the first volleyball game, then she stomped me the second time.

I think that more than his looks, his humor helps with the ladies even more. The dialogue is so funny sometimes, and the banter so great, that it lubricates the girls onto his dick.

 

[Elduriel]

There were a few times where he almost crossed the line into being inappropriate with Val on the beach date. Especially given her history with that pervert Noah.
He has that good looking MC privilege going for him though so can get away with alot.

I was actually cringing pretty hard at some of those scenes. I'm actually a pervert when it comes to AVNs but considering what this game is about, he was totally a creep there a few times. I mean when you have a somewhat established relationship with the girl it can be ok if she is fine with it, but that was basically their first real date and he is groping her and shit. It's especially interesting since a woman wrote those scenes.

 

[Justaphase]

My last run was a "good student" run, so I don't remember the cheating thing. It never came up. IN my run I won the first volleyball game, then she stomped me the second time.

I think that more than his looks, his humor helps with the ladies even more. The dialogue is so funny sometimes, and the banter so great, that it lubricates the girls onto his dick.

You can be as funny as you want but that will only get you so far if you're fugly. You can quickly become the "funny friend"
A part of it is his personality, humor and charm, but a bigger part IMO is that the girls find him attractive.

 

[cooldevo]

My last run was a "good student" run, so I don't remember the cheating thing. It never came up. IN my run I won the first volleyball game, then she stomped me the second time.

I don't think they are particularly referring to cheating in school. But towards the dates MC goes on, or other interactions the MC has with the girls.

When on Val's beach date, for example, he gets into this ultra-competitive mode and just has to beat her at all the games. I believe it was three different games they played: 1) the beach ball game; 2) the "who's ogling who" scoring; and 3) the staring contest.

In all three of those game scenes it really should have just been a fun time getting to know her. Sure they are both competitive and you can play competitively, but his cheating is so abhorrently blatant it just really rubbed me the wrong way. He doesn't even try to hide it. That just irritated me beyond any words.

 

[LSC82]

I don't think they are particularly referring to cheating in school. But towards the dates MC goes on, or other interactions the MC has with the girls.

When on Val's beach date, for example, he gets into this ultra-competitive mode and just has to beat her at all the games. I believe it was three different games they played: 1) the beach ball game; 2) the "who's ogling who" scoring; and 3) the staring contest.

In all three of those game scenes it really should have just been a fun time getting to know her. Sure they are both competitive and you can play competitively, but his cheating is so abhorrently blatant it just really rubbed me the wrong way. He doesn't even try to hide it. That just irritated me beyond any words.

In the Val date at least they were both going at it... tripping each other... he goes over the top but they were both cheating.
It's bad but not the worst imo.


The moment where he tries to distract Erynn with a love declaration however, not only that was scummy, it was a heartless.
Just so he could get a win in a meaningless game(and Erynn is just teaching him Volleyball, she's not gonna brag about her win)

Keep in mind that he can use that to score a point, but for real he's too scared to say it...

 

[Maccabbee]

I don't think they are particularly referring to cheating in school. But towards the dates MC goes on, or other interactions the MC has with the girls.

When on Val's beach date, for example, he gets into this ultra-competitive mode and just has to beat her at all the games. I believe it was three different games they played: 1) the beach ball game; 2) the "who's ogling who" scoring; and 3) the staring contest.

In all three of those game scenes it really should have just been a fun time getting to know her. Sure they are both competitive and you can play competitively, but his cheating is so abhorrently blatant it just really rubbed me the wrong way. He doesn't even try to hide it. That just irritated me beyond any words.

In the Val date at least they were both going at it... tripping each other... he goes over the top but they were both cheating.
It's bad but not the worst imo.


The moment where he tries to distract Erynn with a love declaration however, not only that was scummy, it was a heartless.
Just so he could get a win in a meaningless game(and Erynn is just teaching him Volleyball, she's not gonna brag about her win)

Keep in mind that he can use that to score a point, but for real he's too scared to say it...

As much as I like Val (and it's a lot, she is gorgeous and interesting), I still haven't played that route. I only have two full plays done at this point, and some ones I dropped because I didn't like where they were going.

Yeah, many of the characters are athletes and are insanely competitive, but that's to be expected at that age and at a school specializing in sports. I don't have a problem with friendly rivalry, or cheating in a friendly game outside of an official tournament. Street ball gets pretty rough.

 

[valbitterb]

The MC in this can be an absolute idiot don't get me wrong, sometimes I want to reach into the screen and slap him. His uber competitiveness can annoy me in particular, even to the point of him usually trying to cheat. I'm so glad that Erynn humbled him at Volleyball while at the beach, that was so satisfying to me. She even took it easy on him and whooped him ass.

I don't think they are particularly referring to cheating in school. But towards the dates MC goes on, or other interactions the MC has with the girls.

When on Val's beach date, for example, he gets into this ultra-competitive mode and just has to beat her at all the games. I believe it was three different games they played: 1) the beach ball game; 2) the "who's ogling who" scoring; and 3) the staring contest.

In all three of those game scenes it really should have just been a fun time getting to know her. Sure they are both competitive and you can play competitively, but his cheating is so abhorrently blatant it just really rubbed me the wrong way. He doesn't even try to hide it. That just irritated me beyond any words.

In the Val date at least they were both going at it... tripping each other... he goes over the top but they were both cheating.
It's bad but not the worst imo.


The moment where he tries to distract Erynn with a love declaration however, not only that was scummy, it was a heartless.
Just so he could get a win in a meaningless game(and Erynn is just teaching him Volleyball, she's not gonna brag about her win)

Keep in mind that he can use that to score a point, but for real he's too scared to say it...

Yeah, many of the characters are athletes and are insanely competitive, but that's to be expected at that age and at a school specializing in sports. I don't have a problem with friendly rivalry, or cheating in a friendly game outside of an official tournament. Street ball gets pretty rough.

The MC trying to cheat in a sporting competition in the next few chapters is going to get pretty rough too.

Zane (Swayze) and Freaking Zo on the horizon.

Two guys whose names begin with the letter Z, the end of the English alphabet, the end of the MC's ego hopefully?

 

[valbitterb]

How Cara ends a 3-on-1 ...



How Val ends a 3-on-1 ...




How Layla ends a 3-on-1 ...



How Lexi ends a 2-on-1 ...



How Nikki will end a 3-on-1 ...

 

[Dr.TSoni]

How Layla ends a 3-on-1 ...

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[niko182]

For the ladies who are sexually active with the MC:

Monroe sisters, Morgan sisters- both sets of sisters have blown his whistle.

Erynn is only up to handjobs and chest cum.

Elena fans are yelling Dios mio.

Melissa's dreams don't count.

Val has only gone window shopping.

Side ladies

Tori has sampled the schublig.
Rachel has blown him in the air and on the ground.
Lakeyn just got fucked.
Julia did play his harmonica.





If the throuple comes true, will Elena want in on the action?

But I agree that Elena will do her classic eye roll and line. She will also tease Layla and the MC. Layla will run after Elena with her unwashed, dick fresh hands.

shame on you to forget GABIE and mira

 

[cxx]

i think mc is inner on layla 3-1.

 

[Needvdate]

The big reveal spoiler preview was very much over hyped by Nyx.

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[cooldevo]

The moment where he tries to distract Erynn with a love declaration however, not only that was scummy, it was a heartless.
Just so he could get a win in a meaningless game(and Erynn is just teaching him Volleyball, she's not gonna brag about her win)

This one was beyond scummy. I didn't end up using it as the example as I couldn't exactly recall the details around it at the time. "I love...." and then following it up shortly thereafter by calling her 'his girl' if you chose that option. It was kind of a punch to the gut and an extra shot tossed in later. If she's your girl, why resort to such a low blow.


The Val/MC date, just grated on me because of all the other times it's done on other paths. MC just does it so blatantly, and not just for the ball game but for all the games they play (beach ball, how many times each looks at the other, and the staring contest). There are too many other better things to worry about at the time, then who wins the games. If it was me, I'd have lost the "how many times each looks at the other" in the first two minutes, and I wouldn't have to try and deny doing it.

I get being competitive and horsing around. By the time I had done the Val path, I had gone through so many other things with the MC doing the exact same thing... There were even a few scenes were it looked to me like Val was getting annoyed based on her facial expressions.

 

[cooldevo]

Yeah I thought that it would be something like that. I'm guessing that she's not really a fan of what people voted for. This is the problem with polls IMO. The alot longer on one side sounds interesting, not sure how that will look on Melissa. But let's be honest who is interested in Melissa for her hair....gimme that booty!

With how often Mel changes her hair in the game to this point, Nyx really only needs to keep blonde for one update, maybe two, before it can be hand waved away as just Mel changing her hair again. Unless the poll provided any length of time for it to stick around. In my books, that should have been a minor speedbump if worded properly.

 

[LSC82]

With how often Mel changes her hair in the game to this point, Nyx really only needs to keep blonde for one update, maybe two, before it can be hand waved away as just Mel changing her hair again. Unless the poll provided any length of time for it to stick around. In my books, that should have been a minor speedbump if worded properly.

If we don't count Melissa on flashbacks, this will the 4th hair.
Original, purple (slightly shorter), white hair and now blonde.
And as you say she can have more.

Nyx has made Melissa into a typical midlife crisis, 40 something woman who can't stop fiddling with her hair.
Who also dreams about fucking the age innapropriate neighbor kid, possibly competing with her own daughter lol.
I don't know if that was a intentional decision or not... but i find it funny to have the MILF option going through a midlife crisis

We're arguing with each other by agreeing with each other.

My point is that you, as a player, feel differently than your MC in the game does. I fucking hate Zach, personally. I wouldn't be friends with such an misogynistic idiot. MC feels differently, but honestly, doesn't seem to be a great friend. He seems a great social guy, who has fun with the people he's around, but loyalty doesn't seem his strong suit without our choices making him that way.

I think this is finally over.
The MC did try with him, he's known Zack for a long time, he's only guy "friend" he has in school... but the thing with Ethan changes their relationship in a huge way, irrevocably.
I hope Nyx gives us a choice on how we set the tone of the Zack relationship going forward.
Icy/distant?
Rivalry/Enemies?
Or forgiveness/friends? I don't even have the curiosity of seeing this , but some might...