I feel like for older players the story progression could feel like a race against a snail — except in this case the snail would win

But seriously, the length of this blackmail arc doesn’t really bother me. It feels like a normal pace. Maybe I justify it by thinking that something like this wouldn’t be resolved in a few minutes — it would take days or months .
And I also don’t feel any pressure to ‘get’ Erynn.
The only downside I’d point out is Ethan. He acts and is portrayed like a fly buzzing around your ear. He won’t really hurt you, but he’s annoying. You could compare him to Zach running around the school, pissing off girls and teachers, rather than someone who could actually do something bad. And maybe that’s why I feel this way.
It does feel slow to me, the thing has been hanging since the beggining(even before the reveal, there was this question as to "why Erynn still talks to the guy?") and has barely moved.
At times it goes several chapters without anything(recently Nyx changed for small scenes near the end) happening... for something that is suppoused to be dangerous and urgent... it goes forgotten way too much.
Ethan has ambushed MC, only reason it wasn't worse was someone stepped in. Not to mention how aggressive he gets with Erynn, it's hard to put a gooner like Zach in the same league.
Yes, it's suppoused to be an urgent and dangerous situation... but then people just forget about everything when he's off screen.
I think Erryn is progressing at a decent rate, Alexis just spoiled you guys.
It's not just Alexis or the Riverside sisters now... Layla got confirmed GF status, Iris made her move, even Melissa might've jumped the line(still a question mark).
And the line keeps moving? Valeria has a date coming...
Did you even bother trying to understand Erynn's character at all? Or is it as simple as "I see a hot girl so must fuck asap."

Her first and only time having sex with Zane has been used to blackmail her and control her life. No wonder she is traumatized and doesn't want to jump straight into bed with the MC yet.
He has also only been back just over a month, so it hasn't really even been that long. Erynn is not like Lexi who's going to ride his dick as soon as she sees him in the plane toilet.
They have still gotten hot and heavy a few times and she will jerk him off in the shower (if your points are high enough with her) so it's progressing just fine. Besides, good things come to those who wait.
While that is true, i'm thinking we are at that point where it's being held back just waiting for the blackmail to end.
Everything else looks in place, the MC has earned her trust back, she's way more comfortable now...
Nyx makes the MC bad in terms of helping things move along, he's always waiting for the girls to come to him, it's always the girls with the initiative... even Layla.
It annoys me that he doesn't do anything to move things along, invite her for a date, say something to her... he's always waiting for things to fall into his lap(literally).