VN Ren'Py Into Your Heart Revamped [v0.1.2] [Mereszhka]

[T2025]

Well, it’s too early for to me to judge but for now I’m a bit disappointed over some things.

As many already mentioned, "some scenes or conversations were drawn out too long" (especially 'The Moe Frontier' club’s scene).
By the way:

is that really intended to plant ideas into Mikoto's head about being trans?

I don’t think so. If you’re talking about the fact that apparently Moose called him a "Bottom Queen", then I will say that it’s also present when the 'Futa-Trans' content is deactivated, being bottom is not reserved to them.

The Futa club is my biggest disappointment. The thing with the popsicles is more ridiculous than funy. Everything is too sexualise from frame one. Then in the next meeting we would have to use our mouth or breath to guess wether it’s candy, popsicle, or "something warmer".
Of course I’m not against sucking someone cock, but only if it’s my lover (or at least someone I’m considering), not a random. I’m sure we will get the choice but I decide to deactivated it nonetheless because I find it too absurd. But since it’s also attached to Trans content, I’m not sure how many dialogues I will miss, but I’m sure it will not be anything important (for me).

As for NTR-NTS content, I find strange that depending of either it’s activated or nor, Akane got to spend time with the principal’s son or not after having already close her path (so it shouldn’t matter). But I understand the idea since it fit what was explained earlier:

instead of making multiple paths for a love interest, now only some characters are focused on those paths.

Then I guess anyone we reject in the non NTR-NTS path will stay celibate? Well, to bad for them. Not sure I will try the other further since I don’t have any real interest in it anyway.

 

[Mereszhka]

As for NTR-NTS content, I find strange that depending of either it’s activated or nor, Akane got to spend time with the principal’s son or not after having already close her path (so it shouldn’t matter). But I understand the idea since it fit what was explained earlier:

I thought it was a mistake, but it is not, the non-ntr path doesn't even mention that, if you found a bug, please let me know, sometimes I don't have enough time to test everything, but that doesn't happen in her Non-NTR Path.

The Futa club is my biggest disappointment. The thing with the popsicles is more ridiculous than funy. Everything is too sexualise from frame one. Then in the next meeting we would have to use our mouth or breath to guess wether it’s candy, popsicle, or "something warmer".

As for this, I'm not trying to make everyone happy honestly, even I'm trying to avoid answering a lot of comments, the only thing I can said, is that there's characters that were made to fill the slow burn pacing, while the real romance progress, the Futa Club exist to compensate the time, and they're avoidable even with futa content enable.



I don't know if this wasn't clear enough, but "you'll be able to avoid them even if enabled", means that all characters will be avoidable, having this content enabled, means that you'll have to face the fact that exist, not forcing any kind of content, that's why fetishes are more balanced in separated characters, there will be more Futa characters in the future?, of course, even the game have an automatic system that detects if you rejected a lot of women, making the MC less flirty with girls in his dialogues.

The Moe Frontier, they're not even planned to have more content, this single scene was made to set a high bar about what is annoying and not enjoyable, it was risky to release them in the prologue, but that's the point, not everything is perfect in a school ambience.

And well, the personality of MC evolves in time, that also is presented in the guide, the high sarcasm is part of that, he will evolve slowly while facing new characters and hard situations, less sarcastic and more mature, but that also will depend in his sanity.

I'm not against about suggestions or anything, but feel welcome to do it, I noticed that a lot of people comes with the expectations to have wild sex scenes or make Akane a slut soon, but after all this a slow burn, and it have to feel the build-up of the relationships.

I apologize for making a release that some might find unbereable, but well, I was running out of time, and supporters thought I wasn't making anything, but hey, at least updates will be constant.

 

[Mereszhka]

Huh, I was looking further, and found a bug, if you reject Akane from the beginning while having NTR off, she's still flirty, and the path goes like if you accepted mixing diaogues. Lol.

I just fixed that for the next update, hopefully only a minority might reject her, since they'll have to play from the confession again. Sorry hehe.

 

[Raferu]

Huh, I was looking further, and found a bug, if you reject Akane from the beginning while having NTR off, she's still flirty, and the path goes like if you accepted mixing diaogues. Lol.

I just fixed that for the next update, hopefully only a minority might reject her, since they'll have to play from the confession again. Sorry hehe.

I can't imagine anyone rejecting Akane tbh

 

[Febui]

I'm not trying to make everyone happy honestly, even I'm trying to avoid answering a lot of comments, the only thing I can said, is that there's characters that were made to fill the slow burn pacing, while the real romance progress, the Futa Club exist to compensate the time, and they're avoidable even with futa content enable.

I think shallower side-plots and short scenes for titilation is a smart way to keep a lot of people paying attention while the slow burn builds

I apologize for making a release that some might find unbereable, but well, I was running out of time, and supporters thought I wasn't making anything, but hey, at least updates will be constant.

I understand the pressure, and I don't mind how it turned out. I like that you're trying to make your vision.
Also hope my bigger posts going over mistakes and critiquing things aren't too painful. I do mean it all respectfully and in good fun.

 

[Mereszhka]

Also hope my bigger posts going over mistakes and critiquing things aren't too painful. I do mean it all respectfully and in good fun.

No problem at all, I really appreciate honest feedback when is noticed that the game was played.

 

[T2025]

I don't know if this wasn't clear enough, but "you'll be able to avoid them even if enabled"

Yeah, it was clear. The scene itself gave me some doubt on the moment, but as said after: "I’m sure we will get the choice".

Regarding Akane, glad you have fix a bug about her non NTR rejection path.
And for Raferu:

I can't imagine anyone rejecting Akane tbh

Hehe, well… you know at least one now

And don’t worry, I am sure anyone understand that no dev. can make everyone happy or answer each comment.

And I’m sorry if my comment felt harsh, stating that I’m disappoint and all. I do acknowledge the great work you have done reworking the game like that. Sure it’s not perfect on every aspect, but ignoring those part it’s still appreciable and I really appreciate all the efforts you have put to make it.
Looking forward to see how it evolves.

 

[Raferu]

Hehe, well… you know at least one now

Who's your main girl then? The sister? The quiet one? Crazy ex? No judgement, just curious.

 

[T2025]

Who's your main girl then? The sister? The quiet one? Crazy ex? No judgement, just curious.

I will not answer that, but if you really want to know, I would just say that it would already have been a bit obvious from my previous comments to which character I’m interested in.

 

[Mereszhka]

Text size is too small. Why the bits you're reading are smaller than even the quickmenu at the bottom I don't know. Still not a fan of everyone randomly having Japanese names, makes it much harder to remember who is who.

Problem solved, size configurable in settings.

About the names, there's a function in the phone I added to put nicknames, but I'm still not sure about adding a name changer for every character, at least not everyone has Japanese style.

 

[LinkBox88]

I kind of feel like the air of mystery and intrigue is coming at the expense of character development and a general sense of progression. Instead of being able to build our understanding of the characters we're fed nuggets of doubt that keep us from knowing them.

The conversation with Hayato is a good example. He kind of aludes to things about Akane in such a way to instill doubt about her, but offers nothing concrete enough to change your mind about her. We leave that conversation with no new information but it muddies what we (think we) already know.

It's almost like the opposite feeling to the one you get from progressing through something. It feels like falling behind. It ain't doing it for me.

 

[Hangover21]

I thought it was a mistake, but it is not, the non-ntr path doesn't even mention that, if you found a bug, please let me know, sometimes I don't have enough time to test everything, but that doesn't happen in her Non-NTR Path.

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As for this, I'm not trying to make everyone happy honestly, even I'm trying to avoid answering a lot of comments, the only thing I can said, is that there's characters that were made to fill the slow burn pacing, while the real romance progress, the Futa Club exist to compensate the time, and they're avoidable even with futa content enable.

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I don't know if this wasn't clear enough, but "you'll be able to avoid them even if enabled", means that all characters will be avoidable, having this content enabled, means that you'll have to face the fact that exist, not forcing any kind of content, that's why fetishes are more balanced in separated characters, there will be more Futa characters in the future?, of course, even the game have an automatic system that detects if you rejected a lot of women, making the MC less flirty with girls in his dialogues.

The Moe Frontier, they're not even planned to have more content, this single scene was made to set a high bar about what is annoying and not enjoyable, it was risky to release them in the prologue, but that's the point, not everything is perfect in a school ambience.

And well, the personality of MC evolves in time, that also is presented in the guide, the high sarcasm is part of that, he will evolve slowly while facing new characters and hard situations, less sarcastic and more mature, but that also will depend in his sanity.

I'm not against about suggestions or anything, but feel welcome to do it, I noticed that a lot of people comes with the expectations to have wild sex scenes or make Akane a slut soon, but after all this a slow burn, and it have to feel the build-up of the relationships.

I apologize for making a release that some might find unbereable, but well, I was running out of time, and supporters thought I wasn't making anything, but hey, at least updates will be constant.

As someone who is here for the futa content I do hope the futa club leads to some real plot both sexual and meaningful down the line as far as content goes.

 

[Hangover21]

Having just finsihed with the futa club especially my goodness I'm hopeful for more. I saw the comment that they're effectively a way to fill in time and I'm just happy it's there at all, plus if it proves popular enough it could be a path to be expanded on so fingers crossed. Is their a discord for this game?

 

[Bromo]

nothing really spoiler going on, only rambling
I just want to hide the long text to keep the strain on your mouse light
basically, if you played [0.1.0] of the revamp you are safe (nothing much to spoil early on anyway)
just a slight mention of possibility based on old version gallery

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sooo.. long paragraph short
I love it, phenomenal writing, I'm exited for what's to come
*smol edit: I am a sucker for (idle-)animations so that one is a huge plus in my book
** also I just realized some of the things I talk about are addressed by the dev a few posts above, plz ignor

 

[Hangover21]

nothing really spoiler going on, only rambling
I just want to hide the long text to keep the strain on your mouse light
basically, if you played [0.1.0] of the revamp you are safe (nothing much to spoil early on anyway)
just a slight mention of possibility based on old version gallery

Spoiler: Open at your own risk

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sooo.. long paragraph short
I love it, phenomenal writing, I'm exited for what's to come
*smol edit: I am a sucker for (idle-)animations so that one is a huge plus in my book
** also I just realized some of the things I talk about are addressed by the dev a few posts above, plz ignor

An expansion for the futa club leading to a love interest would be amazing so hopefully we get enough support for it.

 

[diddlydadoo]

Demon boy saga is another example. You get the choice to avoid it. But you know it happened in another timeline and just cut the scene out entirely and effectively skipped it.

Hang on though, wouldn't it still have happened in another timeline even if you did get the chance to physically prevent it? Y'know, like how Man in High Castle is set in another timeline where the Nazis won WW2, even though the Allies did beat the Nazis in our own.

 

[Febui]

Could someone let me know if it's avoidable with choices or completely avoidable at the start of the game as an intro option? I have no intention of downloading a game if it's only avoidable during the sequence it's initially happening and not completely avoidable from the intro.

You change the course of events such that NTR did or did not happen. It's not just happening off-screen.
Unless you're very committed to the Many Worlds interpretation of timelines, in which case you in real life have been NTR'd an infinite number of times, even in relationships you have not had in this timeline.
And frankly
I envy you
I wish I was NTR'd infinitely many times.

 

[niknio93]

well I'm gonna try the game. I just hope the story with the sister is a good one lol

 

[Domeeee023-]

Chapter 2 compresse?

 

[Raed2A]

Guys i just downloaded the game and my text is eaten how to fix I'm on android btw