I like the way Natsu and Akane mutually stare at every sexy thing that happens around them.
Some of the dialog feels phoned in just to fill word-count between lines that Mereszhka had the spark for. On VN standards, still good. And the evironmental details in the visuals are good as they always are with Meresz.
The sex scene post beat-up after the date feels stressful, like all the violence and tension is being held and motivating them, which to me makes "we'll slow down and do this at Akane's pace" the best choice both romantically and for the sake of getting cucked later. Though part of that impression might be me being disconnected from the build up that happened in previous updates and just coming back to put one single date in recent memory, feeling more rushed than it is. It's not like Akane isn't a horny, fully developed young woman. She sent sexts previously, I think. But, then, it was 4AM, Natsuo is puffy and beaten up, and Hayato was just there pressuring her and bringing the crime stuff around her life again. That's not stress I personally could get comfortably sexual after, I'd need to sleep that well off.
It'd ruin the atmosphere completely.
And if that is the intended reading, great, it landed that. But it does make the lewd scene stressful.
Also just like the last update, I kept thinking it'd end soon but the content kept going. I like how much longer these updates are than other VNs I've tried.