VN Ren'Py Isabella - Chasing Shadows [Ch. 4.3] [badtimetales]

[Dessolos]

Remember when I wrote about Isa gently removing the straps off Alex's dress while she looks up and smiles at me? I consider that my first attempt at fanfic stuff.

But I have been thinking of doing more recently these girls do get my imagination running.

You should I love reading them especially for this game. I think your best work is the ones ive read on this thread.

I been thinking about how wholesome it would be if the MC kisses Isa or Isa and Alex on the forehead good night everyday before he tucks them into bed and they go to sleep.

You know how I love all that romantic stuff like hand holding , head pats , nose boops etc well a dev from another game reminded me yesterday how I been neglecting and forgetting about forehead kisses this entire time.

 

[Joshy92]

o I do that all the time for my favorite characters. I just never really share them, as im not that good of a writer and some of them might not even make sense within the context of the game

I'm a terrible writer but I feel if you write something with passion and love and enjoy what you're doing that's all that really matters.

 

[Joshy92]

So if I do anymore fan fiction it would be focused on the throuple and honestly I have a few ideas rolling around my head right now.
But I would make sure to put it behind spoilers because I know not everyone is into the throuple.

If it's okay with you of course BTT because I won't do it if you don't want me to.

 

[badtimetales]

So if I do anymore fan fiction it would be focused on the throuple and honestly I have a few ideas rolling around my head right now.
But I would make sure to put it behind spoilers because I know not everyone is into the throuple.

If it's okay with you of course BTT because I won't do it if you don't want me to.

Sure that's ok, I would be happy if you do that.

 

[Joshy92]

Ok so here is my attempt at some fanfic I hope you guys like it. I was going to put it on discord instead but it's pretty long so I don't know how it would turn out on there.

Spoiler: Fan fic.

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It didn't turn out as well as I hoped but I might do some more in the future.

 

[Dessolos]

Ok so here is my attempt at some fanfic I hope you guys like it. I was going to put it on discord instead but it's pretty long so I don't know how it would turn out on there.

Spoiler: Fan fic.

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It didn't turn out as well as I hoped but I might do some more in the future.

I liked how detailed you were with descriptions in it it seems better than alot of AVN's ive played but that might just be me. But I don't read many books either.

 

[Joshy92]

I liked how detailed you were with descriptions in it it seems better than alot of AVN's ive played but that might just be me. But I don't read many books either.

Thanks, mate I appreciate it. Honestly, I usually get turned on more by the build up to sex scenes than I do the actual sex.
It sounds weird when I type it, but I feel like if sex happens straight away in an AVN it's not as hot.

 

[Dessolos]

Thanks, mate I appreciate it. Honestly, I usually get turned on more by the build up to sex scenes than I do the actual sex.
It sounds weird when I type it, but I feel like if sex happens straight away in an AVN it's not as hot.

I kind of know what you mean to a degree there has been sex scenes in AVN's ive played where it's something im not really into like Femdom , BDSM or just some rougher sex / the girl being submissive. ( just not in my personality to be anything but sweet and gentle and romantic). Yet every once in a while I come across a scene that is set up really well even when it's not something im personally into I find it really hot because of the context of what's happening , build up thought out the game and of course with the visuals along side the dialogue / descriptions make it hot even when it's something id never do or enjoy most of the time.

But then when there is just sex without any build up or anything ( mostly side girls or slutty LI) it's kind of just whatever to me. I'll still play such path just to see it but the scenes do nothing to me until I start to really care for or like a character. Which is why I prefer the more slow burn characters / ones that don't have lewds right away. As I need time to build a connection / care for or at least get to know a LI enough to like them to some degree.

 

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

I kind of know what you mean to a degree there has been sex scenes in AVN's ive played where it's something im not really into like Femdom , BDSM or just some rougher sex / the girl being submissive. ( just not in my personality to be anything but sweet and gentle and romantic). Yet every once in a while I come across a scene that is set up really well even when it's not something im personally into I find it really hot because of the context of what's happening , build up thought out the game and of course with the visuals along side the dialogue / descriptions make it hot even when it's something id never do or enjoy most of the time.

But then when there is just sex without any build up or anything ( mostly side girls or slutty LI) it's kind of just whatever to me. I'll still play such path just to see it but the scenes do nothing to me until I start to really care for or like a character. Which is why I prefer the more slow burn characters / ones that don't have lewds right away. As I need time to build a connection / care for or at least get to know a LI enough to like them to some degree.

Ditto mate. I want a VN to be an experience not a dull story or a collection of fap scenes. If I just want sex animations I can go to sites and just watch sex scene after sex scene. Why read a VN. I read VNs because I want to be immersed in the story with a good build up that engages the brain as much as the eyes. I want emotional connections to the characters negative or positive. I 'm a picky bastard when it comes to VNs.

 

[Joshy92]

Ditto mate. I want a VN to be an experience not a dull story or a collection of fap scenes. If I just want sex animations I can go to sites and just watch sex scene after sex scene. Why read a VN. I read VNs because I want to be immersed in the story with a good build up that engages the brain as much as the eyes. I want emotional connections to the characters negative or positive. I 'm a picky bastard when it comes to VNs.

I'm sort of the same except I usually don't like real porn I do love porn of my favourite games though.
The only real porn I get excited by is japanese lesbian porn and a site called vivthomas.

I'm a bit worried though that my dick might fall off once the throuple storyline gets really steamy.

 

[Elduriel]

I'm sort of the same except I usually don't like real porn I do love porn of my favourite games though.
The only real porn I get excited by is japanese lesbian porn and a site called vivthomas.

I'm a bit worried though that my dick might fall off once the throuple storyline gets really steamy.

I'm just guessing at this point, but I think Isa will be the dominant one between the two, despite their personalities

 

[Joshy92]

I'm just guessing at this point, but I think Isa will be the dominant one between the two, despite their personalities

I actually hadn't thought of that before now. But yeah if someone is the more dominant one it might be Isa.
I'm curious to see how that whole story starts.

 

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

I'm sort of the same except I usually don't like real porn I do love porn of my favourite games though.
The only real porn I get excited by is japanese lesbian porn and a site called vivthomas.

I'm a bit worried though that my dick might fall off once the throuple storyline gets really steamy.

I was talking about animated porn Joshy, there is plenty of sites with animated porn now.

 

[badtimetales]

I'm just guessing at this point, but I think Isa will be the dominant one between the two, despite their personalities

Isa is the more self confident (comes with the job), but Alex is the more "dare me and I'll cross lines".

Both now had their "oooops" moment .
I would love to let the player choose which one is more dominant, but that would mean endless branching and renders.

So I'll try to make it right without weeks or months of renders, trust me

I actually hadn't thought of that before now. But yeah if someone is the more dominant one it might be Isa.
I'm curious to see how that whole story starts.

 

[Joshy92]

Isa is the more self confident (comes with the job), but Alex is the more "dare me and I'll cross lines".

Both now had their "oooops" moment .
I would love to let the player choose which one is more dominant, but that would mean endless branching and renders.

So I'll try to make it right without weeks or months of renders, trust me

But has the mc had his ooops moment? Perhaps he accidentally poops the bed but that's okay he could just put the blame on poor Willy like I did.

 

[Jarulf]

Random thought: I think Alex would be a terrible strip poker player, in a good way. Isa would get her naked every time.
But since our lovely troublemaker has a hard time accepting defeat, she'd up the stakes while she is losing. And accusing Isa of cheating isn't smart, not when Alex is sitting there on the floor, with only a pair of twos in hand and a pair of sheer panties on.
There is only one way that could go. She'll end up being Isa's servant for a weekend, to be used freely as her mistress sees fit. Of course, Isa isn't too proud to take suggestions from her man.
Still, Isa has many ideas of her own on how to have fun with her little servant. She can start with wearing a cute little panty less maid outfit, and clean up a few dirty places using her mouth. If she does well, there could be a treat for her later.

 

[Jarulf]

So I'll try to make it right without weeks or months of renders, trust me

We do trust you, but I don't think anyone would mind weeks and months of renders of Isa dominating Alex.

More seriously, I don't see them having an actual Dom/sub relationship but, as others have said, I absolutely see Isa as more dominant and Alex as a rebellious sub. I think Alex wouldn't mind someone (or someones) being a bit bossy with her, as long as it's someone she truly trusts and loves. She has her daddy issues after all She will always push back though, fight a little, but in the end be content and happy with someone protecting and taking care of her. Feeling safe, I think is something she hasn't felt since before her dad died.

I'm less sure about Isa. She has more confidence in her self, and while she has a temper and probably a competitive streak, I think she'll be happiest in a more equal relationship, and she sees Alex as an equal (which is probably something Alex will always find strange, and not quite believe - because supemodel, boobs). Still, for sex-play with Alex, she'll happily play a dominant part. And will enjoy spanking Alex's cute little butt while Frank stuffs her mouth full, almost as much as Joshy will watching them do it.

Nuff rambling thoughts.

 

[Joshy92]

I honestly don't really care about who is dom or sub. It's all about romance for me.
I actually think too many games focus on dom or sub stuff.

 

[Dessolos]

Yeah I don't care if it's dom or sub either but I will say I lowkey kind of want Isa to boss the MC around not in a Femdom way but I see her doing it in a teasing fun way especially after she been hanging around Alex to much. Especially after she teased the MC with that strip tease show in the lingerie. I just keep imaging Isa being bossy and teasing the MC in a fun lighthearted way that be hard to say no and just be alot of fun.

 

[divingmedic]

Be nice to see Alex being a sub to Isa but then both girls be a sub to the MC.