To be worked on: Either don't make the text readable on the menu pop-up, or make it match the dialog below it. (I know... it's another render to do and this is a first release. Just commenting for future cleanup.)
*Edit: Just finished playing through the first release here. It is looking good so far. Some small typos that can be cleaned up later.
One thing that strikes me is that the overall look and feel has a weird sheen of AI post processing? Like. I can tell they have done a decent job with the models, but especially the early scenes almost feel like they rendered the scene, then ran it through a filter of some kind? I don't know how to describe it.