So uh the art isn't bad but it definitely could be better, it lacks some minor details that I like in western CGs but my main gripe is with the writing, It's just very "porn parody" tier which is fine for a demo I guess but for a full fledged VN it needs to be a bit better so the eventual corruption would feel fulfilling and getting to the h events will be worthwhile, or else it would end up feeling like a oneshot hentai doujin. This setting and the character has the potential to turn out like
Rise of the White Flower by NecroBunnyStudio because of some similarities, which I would say is a pretty good direction to take it to.
Other than that I would like to point out that the basic Renpy dialogue controls are hidden and it's impossible to set it to auto mode which is a detriment to VN design, no one likes to click or press button to progress every sentence.